Still Not Satisfied, Revising; Update at Three

Still not satisfied, revising; update at three.

The next chapter was very important. I wasn't satisfied with how it turned out, so I couldn't post it. After making minor revisions, I still wasn't satisfied, so I had to keep making major changes. I should be able to finish revising it before three. I'll try to post more then—come back after afternoon tea.

(End of Chapter)