All right, I've decided to rewrite it

The characterization and plot in the early chapters were far too much of a mess. After reading so many readers' comments, I decided to stay up late and extensively revise the earlier plot. I expect to finish the rewrite by the end of this month at the latest. Once it's done, you can just refresh to read it; the same goes for the paid chapters.

Updates will still continue, though they'll be a little slow. I hope you'll understand.