Na...
I finished this book, and for a moment, I felt a little complicated.
However, the world of Hokage is basically finished. If it continues, it will repeat the same routine and lead to aesthetic fatigue.
I am still very satisfied with this ending, although there are still some things that have not been explained, such as what Orochihime did when he got Naruto.
There are also some other originally designed plots and the endings of various characters.
For example, the final destination of Hanabi and Longxue, is sister Mei Terumi only the intimate lover of Naruto...
Will Kurama become a demon fox girl and live happily with Naruto...
I will write a few extras about these, so please don't delete the book in a hurry, and let it lie on your bookshelf for a while...
After finishing the book, of course, you need to review it. For example, if you wrote some bad things, the results of this book can only stop here, without getting to a higher level. In this way, you can learn from the lessons for the next book.
Firstly, the setting of this book is actually too monotonous. Although I felt comfortable with the Naruto way of making friends at first, I finally stopped feeling aggrieved. However, in the end, I felt a little tired of it.
Therefore, I directly compressed the plot of Konoha traveling to make friends.
Secondly, when describing the process of making friends between Sasuke and Naruto, the rhetoric may be too ambiguous, causing many readers to think that this is a gay novel, and further misunderstanding the author himself... Alas, I...
Thirdly, in Chapter 45, Naruto makes friends with Hinata. This section makes many people unhappy. In fact, my idea is that Naruto is a native of Hokage after all. He is not a time traveler. He does not have a God's perspective. How could he know that Hinata will become his wife in the future?
Therefore, many people cannot accept it.
But I didn't change this paragraph, because I feel that Naruto is not from God's perspective. If you let Hinata go, you will be slapping yourself in the face. This discussion and making friends is just a joke and will not stand. The characters are all overturned.
There are other issues such as plot rhythm control and writing problems. Of course, there will be problems. After all, I am just a beginner who is still learning, and I can't compare with those great authors.
However, fortunately, you have tolerated me all the way and accompanied me until now, so this book fortunately did not die.
Thank you to boss Wensi Qi, who is my first ally since I wrote a book. Thank you very much. This boss read my book in the middle and turned on automatic subscription. Thank you very much. I hope I did not disappoint you.
Thanks to If Changing, Change Completely, who is also my first helmsman. I thought before that it would be great if my book had a helmsman when I finished it. Unexpectedly, there is not only the helmsman of If Changing, Change Completely, but also the leader of Wensi Qi. Thank you very much.
Thanks to 4Yang36, my first deacon. Well, sorry to say, there are still two deacons, one is my fellow villager and the other is myself, so this cannot be counted. Thank you for your support.
Thank you Xiao Zun for your monthly support, thank you Eleventh Disciple of the Demon Heaven Pavilion, thank you Dog Person Falls for Kitty, Melancholy Life, the Venom of That Stroke, you are a top-notch, full-time writer who hates not updating the most, Zhatianbang 580k, Sa Da San Da Si, Where Pain Throat Dry, Qiaqia Classmate, Ziyan... Actually there are many people to thank. I remember the IDs of many readers, but I didn't type them out one by one. Please forgive me.
I still remember Worldly and Unrestrained, qcqw, and I remember Just a Youngster, Azure Lotus Sword Saint, and Heavenly Path Azure Dragon over QQ Reading.
I still remember zzz Demon King, the first person who marked me as a disciple. When I put it on the shelves, he said that you can just update it. I have a monthly pass. Then, now that I have finished the book, I still haven't seen a monthly pass from him. Na na na...
However, I am still very grateful to him. I couldn't make it to the end. It can only be said that it was a missed opportunity.
By the way, there is also Bi Lixin, which said that I will be automatically subscribed to both accounts, although I don't know what his other account is.
In short, I am very grateful for everyone's company. Some people have come from the new book period to the present, some have come in the middle, and some may have left in the middle. Thank you also, because you have supported me.
I'm almost done with my reflections. I'm wasting everyone's time. The extra will be updated in two days because I'm preparing a new book. If it's a new book, it will be released at the beginning of the month. As for the subject matter, I'll keep it a secret for now. I'll talk about it in this book at that time.
So, please don't delete this book yet...
Finally, I hope that in the next book, we can walk together and see you in the memories...
Thanks, salute.
Shen Ye eating BBQ on the evening of October 31, 2020.