The ending was a little rushed. I really pushed Dou Er all the way to Opening up the God Realm, and by the end, I couldn't keep writing about these things on the Dou Yi and Dou San sides. It felt too padded, and no one wanted to read that.
This book succeeded in its imagination and failed in its plot arrangement. I previously discussed it with other authors in an author group, saying I could pad out all three eras and easily reach two or even three million words. In the end, it wrapped up at just over 1.2 million. I didn't handle the Dou Yi and Dou San eras well, and since this was my first time writing this kind of subject matter, I still hadn't fully grasped shifts through time and space.
All I can say is that this book tried its best to present everyone with a different Douluo world and analyze Douluo from an unconventional perspective.
I'll try to write an extra chapter to explain what happened afterward in all three eras. (Probably after the New Year?)
Some readers said my setting was pretty good and that I could try writing an original work. I want to, too, but my plotting is still a mess, so I'll polish the plot more for the new book. The new book will be <Douluo Dragon King: All God Kings Reincarnated, Lord of Rules>. It will be a Dou San fanfic, and I may directly avoid following the original work. I'll refine the plot and also try working on my weakness to see whether I can reasonably bring in female leads. Well, that's all. See you in the next book.