Let me open a single chapter to explain that the most criticized aspect of this book is undoubtedly the issue of combat power.
Some book friends said that Medusa is Dou Huang Peak, with strong fighting power. If you fight Dou Wang, you should win or even die with three punches and five kicks.
And to fight other minions, it is even more of an AOE skill. Once killed, a large area will be destroyed.
In this regard, I can only say - according to this setting, I really can't write it down!
If Nalan Ye is not cheating, the combat power cannot be improved. If you want the plot to progress, the only way is to lower the combat power of Medusa.
Either Nalan Ye cheats and the combat power increases; or Medusa reduces the combat power.
Choose one of the two.
I think most readers will not like to watch Nalan Ye cheating. Because then it will be the same as the original work. In this case, why not read the original work?
I don't think this book is better than the original "Battle Through the Heavens".
But since we are talking about the original work, I am not afraid of offending fans of the original work, nor am I afraid that you will scold me for being nothing.
Even if you want to scold me in the book review section, I won't care (the reason will be explained below, wry smile~), I will leave it here:
Battle Through the Heavens original work, the combat power setting itself has two big problems!
One is the protagonist Xiao Yan, who fought all the way across the level, and Dou Wang killed Dou Zong-level Yun Lan Sect and took over Sect Master Yun Shan--Is there any problem with this combat power setting?
Yes, you would say that Xiao Yan has Exotic Flame, and Xiao Yan has "Rage Fire Lotus", but - isn't this destroying the combat power setting?
Dou Wang beats Dou Zong, no matter how you explain it, this behavior itself has destroyed the combat power setting.
Everyone knows that the second problem with the combat power in the original work is the collapse of combat power in the later stages.
In the early stage, Dou Zong was praised as "terrifying", but in the later stage, even Dou Sheng was "as numerous as dogs, walking all over the ground".
For those who want me to be faithful to the original combat power settings, do you want to see my novel also have its combat power collapse in the later stages?
I feel that fan fiction is not only an extension of the original work, used to make up for some regrets in the original work, but also to correct some "BUGs" in the original work.
For example, on the issue of the collapse of combat power in the later stage, I have always had an idea, a very bold idea, but I don't know if everyone will support me?
Cut off Dou Zun!
Cut off the entire realm of Dou Zun directly!
After Dou Zong, directly Dou Sheng!
After Nine Star Dou Zong, he was directly promoted to Dou Sheng!
Go to hell Dou Zun!
In this way, Dou God will not come out, Dou Sheng will be the boss, and Dou Zong will be the second.
It can also be connected to the setting of "Dou Zong is so scary" in the early stage, so that the book's combat power will not collapse in the later stage.
The above is my explanation of the issue of combat power. The tone is a bit harsh. I hope everyone will pretend that they didn't see it.
The following is about the future of the book "Battle Through the Heavens: I Am Nalan Ye".
According to the light novel classification system, a light novel can be put on the shelves if its main text reaches 100,000 words, and the main text of this book is almost 160,000 words.
So this afternoon, I submitted a shelf application to the editor. If everything goes well, the book will be on the shelves this Friday (October 18, 2019).
Alas, in fact, many readers should be aware that the distribution situation of this book is a bit - so "abnormal".
In addition, it was my first time to sign a contract with a website, and I wasn't sure about some of the procedures, so, well, in short, the prospects for this book were not very good.
A light novel with 100,000 words can be put on the shelves, but my book has 160,000 words - and it hasn't even been recommended!
You know, normal novels have one or even several opportunities to be recommended before they are put on the shelves!
To be honest, I feel like the writing of this book is pretty good (just my own feeling), but the operation is not good, and the future is worrying.
Here, for the first time, I beg you to collect and subscribe! I don't ask you to order all of it, I just hope that the first order on Friday will look better and comfort me, a frustrated author.
To sum up, Gannan Xiaoshan recorded on the evening of October 14, 2019, Ganzhou, Jiangxi.