My Thoughts on This Book

Based on a comment from a reader, I also realized some major problems with this book.

First: the plot is too thin, the connections between different factions are very stiff, and the supporting characters are far too marginalized, as if they barely have any presence.

Typical examples are He Caitou and Xiao Xiao. Even characters like Huo Yu Hao barely have any presence anymore.

And back when the immortal herbs were distributed, it looked like there was barely any depiction of friendship between He Caitou, Xiao Xiao, and the protagonist. The immortal herbs were handed out very casually. That was a toxic point.

This problem is extremely serious.

Second: the Holy Spirit Cult was destroyed too casually, the founding of the Sea Soul Empire was very abrupt, the Body Sect did not get much description, the Sea God Family was described very vaguely, and the Nine Treasures Glazed Tile Sect was only written about at the very beginning. As for the plots and wars of the major empires, it was only said that war had broken out, without much actual writing. It gives people the feeling that this war is very strange. It is like a narrator telling a story, ending after just a few lines.

Third: once the levels reached the later stages, the jumps became very fast. I actually joked about this in the main text too.

Fourth: the depiction of the cheat was a failure, so much so that it could even compare with my previous book, Blade of Light and Darkness.

Conclusion: my conception of the plot and the connections between characters were written far too poorly.

In summary, if the full score is ten points, I can only give this book one and a half to two points. This score is still based on a