Immortal Cultivation Family: Our Ancestor is Too Prudent
Chapter 1339

Accept Criticism, Revise and Summarize!

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When I got up this morning, I found quite a few readers "reminding" Xiao Meng that the passage about Spirit Transformation was written too roughly, and that many issues had not been properly explained.

I accept the criticism. The previous chapter has already been revised, so everyone can refresh it and read it again.

There are also a few points I need to explain here.

First: Xiao Meng's writing is all typed by hand. I have absolutely never used any AI or anything like that, so I hope everyone can trust me on this. Otherwise, my daily updates wouldn't be this slow.

Second: in the setting, advancing to Spirit Transformation does not involve a lightning tribulation. This isn't something I can force in, so I ask all you readers to understand.

Third, regarding the Inner Demon illusion realm, it appears at Golden Core, Nascent Soul, and Spirit Transformation; it's just that each person's experience is different.

Previously, when the protagonist reached Golden Core and Nascent Soul, this plot point was only brushed over and not described in much detail. I only tried to flesh it out a bit at Spirit Transformation.

But I didn't write it well, and I disappointed all you readers.

I carefully read all the comments criticizing Xiao Meng, but I was busy revising the plot, so I didn't reply to them one by one.

Some readers were very right. The pacing of the plot still needs to progress step by step, and I'm originally better at writing things slowly like that.

I can't push into Spirit Transformation just for the sake of rushing to Spirit Transformation. Writing it that way is too rough, and instead only disappoints everyone.

The previous chapter's plot has already been revised. Readers who have already subscribed can refresh it to read.

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