First of all, the first thirty chapters are all shortcomings. To all the esteemed readers who managed to keep going after reading the first thirty chapters, thank you.
When I was writing the first thirty chapters, I just had a sudden idea and created a Honkai-based system.
Some people in the comments said that if Honkai were made into a system, it should be a truly emotionless system rather than an intelligent one. But I believe that everything evolves, with both external and internal factors, so I won't comment too much on it. I can't deny different viewpoints.
Secondly, I didn't handle the intelligent system very well. There was a lot of spoiler content earlier on. My original intention was to give the protagonist a supplementary lesson, but I went a little too far. I'm very sorry.
As for killing Yingyingying, both my current self and my past self would have written it that way. We aren't going to break up the original pairing, so the only thing I can write is "if there is a next life." Perhaps that can also be considered a hint that Yingyingying and the protagonist won't end up together. But I still didn't portray Yingyingying's feelings for the protagonist well. Maybe some people think that a single action or sentence can reveal those feelings, and that there is no need to write them so deliberately. Although I think so too, I still feel that some indirect descriptions and appropriately planted foreshadowing are necessary. People have said before that my foreshadowing is awkward, and I know that myself, so I didn't deliberately plant much foreshadowing early on. Perhaps that is why I mishandled Yingyingying's storyline.
There are also quite a few shortcomings in the current chapters, such as Silica and Bella. Let me ask: how many people think Bella isn't the heroine? I wrote at the beginning that she was the primary heroine. I still felt the foreshadowing was rather awkward, but I planted it anyway. Perhaps this is my stubbornness. I didn't handle Silica and Bella's feelings well, and I admit that. Silica will still have many scenes later on, and Bella's role as the heroine goes without saying.
However, Bella appeared dozens of chapters before Silica, and I feel that I forced her into the position of heroine myself. That's because there was almost no emotional description of Bella from her debut up to the confession chapter, "The Moon is Beautiful."
Originally, I intended to write a Honkai fanfic, but I realized that my writing ability was far from sufficient for that, so I chose to write a crossover wearing Honkai's skin. If you only wanted to read a pure Honkai fanfic, I'm sorry.
From the time the primary heroine appears onward, I will work hard to make my emotional portrayals better and more detailed, while also ensuring that they don't affect everyone's reading experience.
In future chapters, if you feel something is inappropriate, you can mention it in the chapter comments or tell me directly in the group. Although I won't make extensive revisions, I will try to avoid it next time.
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