Perceived Shortcomings

First, the first thirty chapters are all flaws. To the readers who can endure after reading the first thirty chapters, thank you.

During the first thirty chapters, I had a sudden idea and created a system related to Honkai.

Some people in the comment section also said that if Honkai were a system, it should be a truly emotionless system, not an intelligent one. But I believe everything will evolve, both due to external and internal factors, so I won't comment too much. I cannot deny different viewpoints.

Secondly, I didn't handle the intelligent system well. There was a lot of foreshadowing content in the early chapters. My original intention was to give the protagonist some background knowledge, but I wrote a bit too much. I apologize.

Regarding "Yingyingying" dying, both the current me and the past me would write it this way. I won't break up the original pairing, so what I can write is "If there is a next life." This might also serve as a hint that Yingyingying and the protagonist won't end up together, but I still didn't write Yingyingying's feelings for the protagonist well. Perhaps some people feel that a simple action or a sentence could convey it, and there's no need to write it so deliberately. Although I think so, I also believe there's a certain necessity for indirect descriptions and appropriate foreshadowing. Some people have said in the past that my foreshadowing is stiff, and I know it myself. That's why I didn't deliberately foreshadow in the early stages, which might be the reason for my poor handling of Yingyingying's plot.

There are still many shortcomings in the current chapters, such as Silica and Bella. I want to ask, how many people think Bella is not the female lead? I stated who the main female lead was when I started writing the book. The foreshadowing still feels stiff, but I buried it anyway. This might be my persistence. I admit that I didn't handle the feelings between Silica and Bella well. Silica will have a lot more scenes later, and as the female lead, Bella will have even more.

However, considering Bella appeared tens of chapters earlier than Silica, I feel I forcefully pushed her into the female lead position. This is because, from Bella's appearance to her confession chapter, "The Moon is Beautiful," I barely wrote any emotional descriptions for her.

My original intention was to write a fanfiction about Honkai, but I realized my writing ability was far from sufficient to write about Honkai. So, I chose to write a multi-anime fanfiction with a Honkai skin. I apologize to those who purely wanted to read a Honkai fanfiction.

Until the first female lead appears, I will strive to write my emotional descriptions better and in more detail, without affecting your viewing experience.

For future chapters, if you find any issues, you can tell me in this chapter's comments or directly in the group. Although I won't make large-scale changes, I will try to avoid them next time.

Thank you!

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