Spent Half an Hour Revising It and Still Couldn't Get It Right, Only Some Parts Were Deleted and Rewritten

Spent half an hour revising it and still couldn't get it right, so I could only delete and rewrite some parts.

I wasn't satisfied with just patching it up, so it needed major revisions. Some content was deleted and rewritten. I don't know when I'll finish revising it either; I'll try to get it done before six tonight, and I'll try to update more.

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