Those were exactly 41 body paragraphs. The count seemed right. Check the proper names and pronouns: Little Ting is the Thunder Beast, but its gender isn't listed. The source uses the neuter pronoun, so that's fine. Little Lei isn't in the gender list either, but the source uses the masculine pronoun, so use he. The same goes for Hua Min'er and the others.
Now that her daughter had been born, every time she looked at Little Ting, she thought about the little one in her belly. She couldn't help stroking her stomach, a smile spreading across her face.
"Little Ting, you're going to be a big sister soon. Are you happy?"
"Happy!" Little Ting clapped her hands and chirped, "Baby!"
"You're going to be a big sister. You have to take good care of your little brother or sister, all right?"
"Uh-huh!" Little Ting nodded hard.
Xiao Jinyan had been cultivating in seclusion for several days. When he finally emerged, he felt his strength had increased considerably.
He was nearly at the peak of the Immortal Lord realm. Once he broke through, he would become a Heavenly Lord.
Xiao Jinyan had never expected to advance so quickly. Though his cultivation had always progressed rapidly, reaching this level so soon was still astonishing.
When he stepped outside, he saw that Su Qingluo was also cultivating. She had entered seclusion before him, and now she was beginning to stir.
Xiao Jinyan waited quietly nearby. Before long, Su Qingluo opened her eyes.
"How did it go?" he asked.
"Pretty well. I broke through to the middle stage of the Immortal Lord realm," Su Qingluo replied with a smile.
"Congratulations."
"Congratulations to you, too. You're almost at the peak of the Immortal Lord realm."
Xiao Jinyan grinned. "I'll break through soon."
Su Qingluo looked