Ch. 301A Note at the End of Volume Two
Summary
Key plot points and events
- Volume Two has been completed and largely follows the original outline, with few major changes.
- The story’s central conflict has been revenge against those responsible for past wrongs, rather than mass destruction or indiscriminate killing.
- An’s combat ability has mainly functioned as a means of protecting and advancing this revenge plan, not as the story’s primary focus.
- The Third Hokage, Danzo, Obito, and Itachi have already suffered the consequences of their actions.
- The next targets are Madara and Black Zetsu.
- Black Zetsu is considered relatively easy to punish, while Madara presents a more difficult problem because he is already dead.
- The author considers reviving Madara in order to take revenge on him, but recognizes that this could seem like rewarding him instead.
- Although the outline contains a planned method for punishing Madara, the author feels it is less emotionally satisfying than the revenge carried out against Obito and Itachi and is seeking suggestions.
Character developments
- An: His role is defined less by overwhelming strength than by his determination to carry out a carefully planned revenge campaign.
- The Third Hokage, Danzo, Obito, and Itachi: Each has already paid a “sufficient price” for their actions, marking the completion of their major antagonist arcs.
- Madara: Becomes the central unresolved revenge target. His death makes him difficult to punish in a satisfying way.
- Black Zetsu: Is positioned as the next relatively straightforward enemy to deal with.
Significant themes
- Revenge versus destruction: The narrative emphasizes targeted justice and personal retribution rather than indiscriminate violence.
- Consequences: Antagonists are judged according to the suffering and damage they caused.
- The difficulty of punishing the dead: Madara’s death raises questions about whether revenge requires physical harm, resurrection, or some deeper form of humiliation or loss.
- Narrative satisfaction: The author reflects on whether the planned punishment feels emotionally meaningful enough, especially compared with previous antagonist downfalls.
Character interactions
- The chapter does not depict new in-story encounters; instead, it discusses the larger revenge relationships between An and his enemies.
- An’s completed conflicts with the Third Hokage, Danzo, Obito, and Itachi are contrasted with the unresolved future confrontations involving Madara and Black Zetsu.
- The author directly engages with readers, inviting ideas for a more satisfying way to take revenge on Madara and jokingly suggesting those ideas could be incorporated into the story.