Regarding the Shui Bing'er Arc

Recently, quite a few readers have said that the part involving Shui Bing'er wasn't very good and lacked immersion.

This little author gave it some thought today.

The problem lay in two areas.

First, I directly skipped over the part where they got to know each other, making it feel extremely disjointed. Since I relied on indirect descriptions, it ended up looking the way it does now.

Second, I wrote it a bit too heavily, and their feelings developed too quickly. I didn't have a good enough grasp of my writing.

So, this little author would like to apologize to all readers. It's all my fault!

This is also my first time writing a book, so I haven't been able to properly grasp the direction, which led to this situation.

Once again, I'm sorry.

This little author can only do my best to make up for it, but I don't write very quickly, so I can only revise it bit by bit. After all, I still have to ensure daily updates.

Actually, this little author started this book with no support at all, struggling every day to write and think up the plot.

I've only improved a little recently.

As for the direction of the revisions, I'll first expand on how they came to know each other, then revise those somewhat ambiguous scenes.

That's all for now. Once again, I apologize to everyone!

If you have any opinions, feel free to share them, but please don't make personal attacks!!

Love you all, mwah!!!