Naruto: Starting with Saiyan Physique
Chapter 1

A Brat Who Can't Extract Chakra

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Konoha year XX, what day is this?

How many times has it been?

He's lost count!

Shangguan Huaiyu looked up at the sky at a 45-degree angle, tears streaming down his face, forming spicy beef noodle-shaped waves, his Chakra refinement had failed again!

Shangguan Huaiyu, or rather, he is now called Tenzawa Kiyotaki.

In his previous life on Earth, he was secretly reading Hokage comics during class breaks when a violent roar from his devilish old teacher nearly scared him to death! In a moment of panic, he found himself transmigrated to the Hokage World, becoming a child.

Ever since he learned that he had transmigrated to the Hokage World, Tenzawa Kiyotaki had been anxious, as it was a Ninja world of constant War!

Especially since he hadn't been reborn into one of Konohagakure's major clans, but was just a commoner child.

You have to know that in the Hokage World, the families of commoners are so humble that they are cannon fodder in War. Tenzawa Kiyotaki's parents sacrificed themselves in War.

But fortunately, he wasn't reborn into the unlucky Uchiha Clan. Being reborn into a commoner family at least allowed him to live an ordinary life. If he had been reborn into the Uchiha Clan and hadn't died yet, he would definitely be doomed.

"Hey! Kid, did your Chakra refinement fail again?"

Nohara Kazuki asked as he passed by on his way back from drinking, reeking of alcohol.

Nohara Kazuki was a comrade of Tenzawa Kiyotaki's parents. He lost an eye, an arm, and a leg in the Third Shinobi World War, and retired from being a Ninja, opening a small convenience store in Konohagakure.

After Tenzawa Kiyotaki's parents sacrificed themselves, he took good care of Tenzawa Kiyotaki. He even taught Tenzawa Kiyotaki the Chakra refinement technique.

After Qinglong obtained the Chakra refinement technique, he refined Chakra day and night.

Unfortunately, to this day, he still hasn't refined a single bit of Chakra.

Children of the same age have already entered the Ninja Academy. He was refused admission because he couldn't refine Chakra, and was even called the biggest waste in Konoha's history.

Tenzawa Kiyotaki clenched his fists and gritted his teeth, his expression firm.

"Uncle Kazuki, I will definitely succeed in refining Chakra!"

Kazuki nodded, very certain of Qinglong's attitude.

"As a Ninja, you must endure what ordinary people cannot! Qinglong, I believe you can succeed!"

Qinglong nodded to Kazuki and entered Chakra refinement mode again.

As the sun set, the Ninja Academy had already dismissed school, and groups of children were either accompanied by their parents on their way home, or were going home in twos and threes with their classmates.

Only on the swing, a lonely little figure couldn't bear to leave, and next to him came shouts of abuse from children or adults.

He envied those children who had families, envied their warm homes, but at the same time, he was pierced by those extremely hateful curses, like cold knives.

In the end, he was the only one left at the school gate, all alone...

Qinglong woke up from refining Chakra, the setting sun casting golden light on his face.

Unsurprisingly, he had failed again!

He was not discouraged, because he was used to it. He got up and went home.

"Is that Naruto?"

"The Fourth Hokage's son!"

Qinglong looked at Naruto, who was sitting alone on the swing in the distance.

"He's also a pitiful person."

His father was once the highest leader of Konoha, a hero who protected Konoha with his life. His mother was a Konoha rich woman, and he himself became Konoha's container for sealing the Nine-Tails from birth.

As the son of a hero, Naruto himself is also a hero, but he has ended up in this situation, suffering the village's hatred, disgust, abuse, and bullying. No one helps him, no one cares about him, and he lives a life with no money, no friends, and is constantly given Byakugan glares.

Pitiful!

Qinglong smiled helplessly. He wasn't doing much better himself. He just didn't know if Naruto knew that there was a group of children in Konoha who called him and Naruto "Konoha's Double Waste."

One waste, one monster.

"Sigh!"

Qinglong sighed and smiled helplessly. He didn't bother him and turned to go home. Who knew how many Anbu and Root Ninjas were staring at Naruto.

Qinglong's home was a small house in the commoner district. Along the way, Qinglong kept greeting people.

"Hello, Grandma!"

"Hello, Auntie!"

People also returned smiles to the handsome, cute, and polite Qinglong. Everyone would like such a good-looking, sensible, and polite child.

"Oh! Little Qinglong is back!"

Except for the occasional contempt from children, others were quite friendly to Qinglong. After all, this was a commoner district, and they were all from the bottom, so no one laughed at anyone.

Naruto's encounters were different. After everyone had left, he went home alone, suffering the villagers' cold Byakugan glares all the way.

When he got home, he opened a pack of instant noodles and took out a bottle of expired milk, making do for dinner.

There were no more instant noodles in the instant noodle box. He crossed his arms, pinched his chin with one hand, and pondered for a while.

"Hmm! I have to buy some instant noodles tomorrow!"

Saying that, he went to the corner and rummaged out a handful of crumpled silver bills.

That afternoon, Uncle Kazuki went to drink with his friend again and asked Qinglong to help him watch the store.

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