Chapter Summaries

Key Plot Points and Events

• Su Deqiang, a high school graduate, eagerly awaits the latest issue of his favorite manga, 'Girl, Boy, and Sword'.
• The manga's latest chapter features an unexpected and shocking twist: the main protagonist is abruptly killed, and the female protagonist's relationship with the second male lead becomes ambiguous.
• The chapter ends with a promotional advertisement for the 'Wenxin Manga Award', which angers readers even more due to the unsatisfying plot twist.

Character Developments

• Su Deqiang, initially excited and carefree, becomes furious and disillusioned after reading the manga's latest chapter. His anger leads him to lash out on social media.
• The male protagonist's sudden death and the female protagonist's ambiguous relationship with the second male lead cause readers, including Su Deqiang, to feel betrayed and angry.

Significant Themes

• Betrayal of expectations: The manga's plot twist subverts readers' expectations, leading to anger and disappointment.
• The impact of art on emotions: The manga's story affects Su Deqiang's mood, from initial excitement to intense anger and betrayal.
• The power of social media: Readers use the platform to express their displeasure with the manga's plot twist, creating a collective outcry.

Character Interactions

• Su Deqiang and his friends discuss the manga's plot at a station, hoping to catch the attention of a beautiful girl, but she walks away without reacting.
• Su Deqiang's anger leads him to lash out on social media, where he interacts with other angry readers, creating a sense of collective outrage.
• The manga's author, Ou Congquan, is notably absent from the social media platform, further fueling readers' anger and frustration.

Plot Points and Events

• Teacher Ou's latest chapter of 'Girl, Boy, and Sword' causes an uproar among readers due to its unexpected twist and departure from the popular Japan setting.
• Wenxin Hall's plan to promote the Wenxin Manga Award using serialized manga artists backfires, with readers venting their frustration on the award and its promoters.
• Editor Ding faces backlash from higher-ups, including the vice president, due to the negative impact on the upcoming manga award and website launch.

Character Developments

• Teacher Ou's arrogance and conceit lead him to ignore reader expectations and the potential impact of his decisions on others.
• Editor Ding's negligence in reviewing the manuscript allows the situation to escalate, putting him in a difficult position with his superiors.
• Tang Yao remains calm and professional, advising other manga artists affected by the situation.

Significant Themes

• The consequences of ignoring reader expectations and the potential impact of one's actions on others.
• The tension between old and new media departments, with the new media director Shang Tao clashing with Ding Yilong and other 'old timers.'

Character Interactions

• Editor Ding faces criticism from the vice president, the New Media Director Shang Tao, and other department heads due to the situation caused by Teacher Ou's manga.
• Tang Yao advises Shao Changqing, another manga artist affected by the backlash, demonstrating her professionalism and concern for her clients.
• Vice President Zhao Fang Sheng steps in to mediate the situation, attempting to find a solution that appeases both the readers and the new media department's plans.

Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao has lunch with Li Xue, who feeds her and expresses warmth.
• They discuss the manga awards issue and Teacher Ou's shoddy work.
• Tang Yao receives a call from Ding Yilong, summoning her back to the editorial office.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao shows responsibility and principle, earning Li Xue's admiration.
• Li Xue reveals her cooking hobby and expresses affection towards Tang Yao.
• Teacher Ou's stubbornness and lack of consideration for readers is highlighted.

Significant Themes

• Responsibility and principle in the face of adversity.
• The bond between colleagues and friends.
• The impact of a manga artist's actions on readers.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Li Xue's growing friendship, with Li Xue showing maternal affection towards Tang Yao.
• Tang Yao's determination to fulfill her editorial responsibilities despite the situation.
• The tension between Tang Yao and Teacher Ou, with Tang Yao trying to mitigate the consequences of his actions.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao returns to the Editorial Department and finds Ding Yilong and Shang Tao, the Director of New Media, discussing the AORI in the latest issue of "Girl, Boy, and Sword."
• Ding Yilong demands an explanation from Tang Yao about the AORI, but she refuses to take responsibility, instead questioning Ding Yilong's own actions and lack of involvement.
• Tang Yao confronts Ding Yilong about his negligence in managing Ou Congquan and his lack of understanding of the manga's content and readers' feelings.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: She stands up to Ding Yilong, demonstrating her confidence, assertiveness, and unwillingness to take the blame for someone else's mistakes. She also shows her dedication and professionalism as an editor.
• Ding Yilong: Ding Yilong's incompetence and lack of responsibility are exposed. He shifts blame, avoids responsibility, and fails to provide any solutions to the problem, revealing his unworthiness as the chief editor.

Significant Themes

• Responsibility: The theme of responsibility is explored through Tang Yao's refusal to take the blame for Ding Yilong's negligence and the subsequent consequences.
• Professionalism: Tang Yao's dedication and understanding of her role as an editor contrast with Ding Yilong's lack of professionalism and disregard for his responsibilities.
• Leadership: Ding Yilong's failures as a leader are highlighted, as he fails to take responsibility, provide solutions, or support his team.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao vs. Ding Yilong: Tang Yao confronts Ding Yilong, challenging his authority and exposing his incompetence. She refuses to take the blame for his mistakes and demands that he take responsibility.
• Tang Yao vs. Shang Tao: Although not directly interacting, Shang Tao's presence and reaction to Tang Yao's words suggest his surprise and possible agreement with Tang Yao's assessment of Ding Yilong's incompetence.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Editor Tang Yao confronts Editor-in-Chief Ding Yilong about manga artist Ou Congquan's controversial plot.
• Ding Yilong shifts blame onto Tang Yao and decides to dismiss her.
• Director Shang Tao, sent by Vice President Zhao, arrives to discuss the issue.
• Tang Yao shares her concerns about Ou Congquan's future plans and the promotional slogan 'AORI'.
• Shang Tao reveals the impending launch of the website and manga awards, which could be jeopardized by the controversy.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: Shows professional responsibility and insight, offering a solution to the problem.
• Ding Yilong: Reveals his incompetence and selfishness, shifting blame and avoiding responsibility.
• Shang Tao: Demonstrates concern for the company's projects and a willingness to listen to Tang Yao's ideas.

Significant Themes

• Responsibility vs. Irresponsibility: Tang Yao takes responsibility for her work, while Ding Yilong shirks his duties.
• Blame and Accountability: Ding Yilong shifts blame onto Tang Yao to avoid responsibility.
• Professionalism vs. Incompetence: Tang Yao's professionalism contrasts with Ding Yilong's incompetence.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Ding Yilong: Their interaction highlights Ding Yilong's incompetence and Tang Yao's professionalism.
• Tang Yao and Shang Tao: Their interaction shows Shang Tao's willingness to listen to Tang Yao's ideas and consider her perspective.

Key Plot Points and Events

• The manga awards and the upcoming website are facing boycotts due to the controversial ending of 'Girl, Boy, and Sword'.
• Tang Yao suggests using this controversy to drive traffic to the website by releasing excellent works from the manga awards in advance.
• Shang Tao initially agrees but later realizes that promoting the manga awards heavily might put 'Girl, Boy, and Sword' on the spot.
• Tang Yao offers to change Ou Congquan's mind and make her manga, AORI, a reality to pave the way for future explosive developments.
• Tang Yao requests that two of her recommended works be included in the advance release lineup.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: She demonstrates her professionalism and dedication to her work, going above and beyond her role as an editor to help the company and the website. She also shows her strategic thinking and persuasive skills.
• Shang Tao: He shows respect and admiration for Tang Yao's ideas and professionalism. He also demonstrates his understanding of the company's priorities and his willingness to take responsibility for his department's actions.

Significant Themes

• Deception vs. Honesty: Tang Yao uses deception (or misdirection, as the chapter title suggests) to persuade Shang Tao to agree to her plan. However, her deception is ultimately for the benefit of the company and the Manga Artists, highlighting the theme of honest intentions behind deceptive actions.
• Responsibility: Both Tang Yao and Shang Tao take responsibility for their actions and decisions, showing their commitment to their roles and the company's success.
• Strategic Thinking: Tang Yao's plan to use the controversy to drive traffic to the website demonstrates her strategic thinking and understanding of the situation.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Shang Tao: Their interaction is professional and respectful. Tang Yao persuades Shang Tao to agree to her plan, and he shows admiration for her ideas and dedication.
• Implied Interaction between Shang Tao and Ding Yilong: Shang Tao's thoughts about Ding Yilong show his disapproval of Ding Yilong's behavior and his respect for Tang Yao's professionalism.

• Key Plot Points: Tang Yao, worried about promoting her manga 'Fate Zero,' decides to use the current turmoil to her advantage. She convinces Shang Tao, the new media director, to help promote her manga through the manga awards and the website's launch. She plans to finish drawing the beginning of 'Fate Zero' in the next few days and improve Ou Congquan's condition to ensure the manga's success.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: She shows strategic thinking and determination in promoting her manga, demonstrating her resolve and resourcefulness.
• Shang Tao: He is convinced by Tang Yao's plan and becomes enthusiastic about promoting the manga awards and the website's launch.
• Ou Congquan: He remains arrogant and confident in his abilities, leading to potential issues with his manga's plot development.
• Significant Themes: The importance of promotion in the success of a new game or manga, the challenges of serialization, and the struggle between an editor's responsibility and personal feelings towards an author.
• Character Interactions: Tang Yao and Shang Tao exchange contact information and agree to keep each other informed about their progress. Tang Yao plans to visit Ou Congquan to discuss his manga's plot development further.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Shang Tao proposes using the controversy surrounding 'Girl, Boy, and Sword' to promote the manga awards and the online website.
• Zhao Fang Sheng, the Vice President, initially disapproves but considers the plan after hearing Shang Tao's explanation.
• Shang Tao reveals the dire situation with 'Girl, Boy, and Sword', including Ding Yilong's inaction and Tang Yao's attempts to change the manga's direction.
• Zhao Fang Sheng decides to let Tang Yao try again, with Shang Tao closely monitoring her progress.

Character Developments

• Shang Tao: Shows operational acumen and understanding of the company's dynamics. He's willing to take risks to improve the website's situation.
• Zhao Fang Sheng: Demonstrates concern for the company's well-being and a willingness to intervene when necessary. He's displeased with Ding Yilong's actions.
• Ding Yilong: Revealed to be complacent and irresponsible, shirking his duties as editor-in-chief.
• Tang Yao: Shows determination and capability in her attempts to change 'Girl, Boy, and Sword''s direction. Her potential is recognized by higher-ups.

Significant Themes

• The tension between creativity and commercial success.
• The challenges of managing and guiding creative talent.
• The consequences of complacency and neglect of duty.

Character Interactions

• Shang Tao and Zhao Fang Sheng: They discuss strategies and share concerns about the company's future. Zhao Fang Sheng listens to Shang Tao's insights and considers his plans.
• Shang Tao and Ding Yilong: Shang Tao reveals Ding Yilong's lack of responsibility, leading to Zhao Fang Sheng's displeasure.
• Tang Yao and Ou Congquan: Their dynamic is hinted at, with Tang Yao trying to change Ou Congquan's mind about the manga's direction.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao visits Ou Congquan's apartment to discuss the manga's plot controversy.
• Ou Congquan is in a poor mental state due to negative reader feedback.
• Tang Yao confronts Ou Congquan about his poor psychological resilience and lack of communication with his editor.

Character Developments

• Ou Congquan: Struggles with reader criticism, exhibits poor psychological resilience, and has difficulty accepting editorial feedback.
• Tang Yao: Shows confidence and assertiveness in her role as an editor, remains calm under pressure, and demonstrates understanding of Ou Congquan's manga.

Significant Themes

• Communication and collaboration between manga artists and editors.
• The impact of reader feedback on manga artists' mental health and creative process.
• The importance of understanding and addressing the root cause of problems.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Ou Congquan: Their interaction is tense and confrontational, with Tang Yao pushing Ou Congquan to address his issues and Ou Congquan lashing out due to frustration and insecurity.
• Tang Yao and Li Jiang (Ou Congquan's assistant): Li Jiang is concerned about Tang Yao's safety and tries to warn her about Ou Congquan's state, but Tang Yao remains determined to address the issue.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao confronts Ou Congquan about his disregard for her editorial input.
• Ou Congquan, after initially being defensive, becomes shocked and excited upon reading Tang Yao's detailed and insightful revision suggestions.
• Tang Yao delivers a scathing critique of Ou Congquan's behavior and lack of professionalism, refusing to take responsibility for his work in the future.

Character Developments

• Ou Congquan: Starts off defensive and arrogant, but becomes remorseful and introspective after understanding the value of Tang Yao's input.
• Tang Yao: Demonstrates professionalism, assertiveness, and a deep understanding of Ou Congquan's work, earning her respect.
• Li Jiang: Acts as a mediator and witness to the tense exchange between Tang Yao and Ou Congquan.

Significant Themes

• Professionalism vs. Arrogance: Tang Yao's professional conduct contrasts with Ou Congquan's arrogant disregard for her input.
• Communication and Collaboration: The importance of open communication and collaboration between authors and editors is highlighted.
• Responsibility and Consequences: Ou Congquan's actions have consequences, and he must face the repercussions of his decisions.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Ou Congquan: Their interaction is tense and confrontational, with Tang Yao challenging Ou Congquan's arrogance and lack of professionalism.
• Li Jiang and Ou Congquan: Li Jiang acts as a witness and intermediary, sensing the tension between Tang Yao and Ou Congquan.
• Li Jiang and Tang Yao: Li Jiang shows respect and appreciation for Tang Yao's professionalism and assertiveness.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Ou Congquan, initially dismissive of editors, has a change of heart after Tang Yao's intervention.
• He decides to follow Tang Yao's revised draft and even apologizes for his past arrogance.
• Ding Yilong, the editor-in-chief, calls Ou Congquan to discuss the recent issue, but Ou Congquan lashes out at him.

Character Developments

• Ou Congquan: Realizes the value of editors, specifically Tang Yao, and starts reflecting on his past arrogance.
• Ding Yilong: Remains oblivious to the impact of his actions and tries to shift blame onto Tang Yao.

Significant Themes

• The value and importance of editors in the creative process.
• The consequences of arrogance and dismissiveness towards others.
• The potential for personal growth and change.

Character Interactions

• Ou Congquan and Li Jiang: Ou Congquan shares his newfound appreciation for editors with Li Jiang, who is surprised and supportive.
• Ou Congquan and Ding Yilong: Ou Congquan, now aware of Ding Yilong's incompetence, lashes out at him during their phone call.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao returns home earlier than usual and finds her room clean, indicating Tang Xun's care.
• Tang Yao starts working on her manga, 'Fate Zero,' with a tight deadline.
• Tang Xun returns home and finds Tang Yao engrossed in her work.
• Tang Yao shares her aspirations for her new manga and encourages Tang Xun to pursue her dreams.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: Shows dedication to her work, nostalgia for old manga trends, and support for Tang Xun's dreams.
• Tang Xun: Initially cool and reserved, she warms up to Tang Yao, showing affection and understanding towards her sister's aspirations.

Significant Themes

• Pursuit of dreams and aspirations.
• Sisterly bond and mutual support.
• The changing landscape of manga trends.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Tang Xun: Their relationship deepens as they express their feelings and support for each other's dreams. Tang Yao's encouragement helps Tang Xun open up, and they share a heartfelt moment.

Key Plot Points and Events

• The public's outcry against Ou Congquan intensifies after the magazine release.
• Readers also call for the editor (Tang Yao) to speak out.
• Tang Yao decides to stay home to work on her manga, keeping it a secret from Tang Xun.
• Ou Congquan finishes the storyboards for the next issue surprisingly quickly.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: Starts working on her manga, feels enhanced drawing skills and memory.
• Tang Xun: Shows maturity and understanding, supports her sister.
• Ou Congquan: Works tirelessly on the storyboards, eager to please Tang Yao.

Significant Themes

• Sisterly bond and support between Tang Yao and Tang Xun.
• Work ethic and dedication, as shown by both Tang Yao and Ou Congquan.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Tang Xun: The sisters interact affectionately, with Tang Xun showing understanding and support.
• Tang Yao and Ou Congquan (through Li Jiang): Tang Yao is suspicious of Ou Congquan's quick work, while Ou Congquan is eager to please her.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao commutes to work during off-peak hours, avoiding crowds.
• She arrives at the Editorial Department, where Ding Yilong is absent.
• Kang Ming, a new recruit, informs Tang Yao that readers are asking about AORI.
• Tang Yao retrieves the storyboards for the next issue, which have been sent by Li Jiang.
• Shang Tao messages Tang Yao about Ou Congquan's situation.
• Tang Yao meets with Shang Tao to hand over Ou Congquan's storyboards and other manga for early release consideration.
• Shang Tao rushes to inform Zhao Fang Sheng about the resolved situation with Ou Congquan.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao demonstrates her dedication and responsibility as an editor, working hard to improve Ou Congquan's manga and considering the readers' perspective.
• Kang Ming gains a newfound admiration for Tang Yao's professionalism and dedication.
• Shang Tao shows excitement and enthusiasm about the manga awards and the early release lineup.

Significant Themes

• The importance of communication and understanding between creators and readers.
• The responsibility and dedication of editors in the manga industry.
• The impact of readers' feedback on the creative process.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Kang Ming discuss Ou Congquan's situation and the impact of AORI.
• Tang Yao and Shang Tao meet to discuss the manga awards and early release lineup.
• Shang Tao and Zhao Fang Sheng discuss the resolved situation with Ou Congquan and examine the storyboards together.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Vice President Zhao reviews the storyboards for the next issue of "Girl, Boy, and Sword" and is shocked by the changes in plot and style.
• The manga's plot has significantly changed, with a focus on the 'evil collective' concept and a shift in the female protagonist's hallucinations, favoring the male protagonist over the second male lead.
• Zhao Fang Sheng suspects that either Ou Congquan (the manga artist) has drastically changed his style or someone else (possibly Editor Tang) wrote the storyboards.

Character Developments

• Zhao Fang Sheng: Shows deep understanding of the manga's history and the manga artist's style, demonstrating his professionalism and dedication to his work.
• Shang Tao: Grows more serious and attentive as he realizes the gravity of the situation and the potential implications of the storyboards.

Significant Themes

• Change and Adaptation: The manga's plot and style have changed drastically, raising questions about who initiated these changes and why.
• Communication and Collaboration: The lack of communication between the editor and the manga artist is highlighted as a potential cause for the unusual storyboards.

Character Interactions

• Zhao Fang Sheng and Shang Tao: Their conversation reveals their shared understanding of the manga industry and their concern for the magazine's success. They work together to unravel the mystery behind the storyboards.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Zhao Fang Sheng contacts Ou Congquan to confirm the storyboards.
• Ou Congquan reveals that Tang Yao provided the plot and setting for the manga.
• Zhao Fang Sheng learns that Ding Yilong tried to shift blame onto Tang Yao.
• Zhao Fang Sheng decides to include Tang Yao's recommended manga, "Head Balloon," in the early release lineup.
• Zhao Fang Sheng wants to meet Tang Yao.

Character Developments

• Zhao Fang Sheng: Realizes Tang Yao's exceptional talent and decides to support her career progression.
• Shang Tao: Gains a better understanding of Tang Yao's capabilities and her influence on the manga's success.

Significant Themes

• Talent recognition and support.
• The impact of external influences on creative processes.
• The consequences of unethical behavior (Ding Yilong's attempt to shift blame).

Character Interactions

• Zhao Fang Sheng and Shang Tao: Collaborate to resolve the manga award issue and discuss Tang Yao's future.
• Zhao Fang Sheng and Ou Congquan: Have a phone conversation where Ou Congquan reveals Tang Yao's significant contributions to the manga.
• Tang Yao (off-page): Her reputation and influence grow as her recommendations and work quality impress higher-ups.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Zhao Fang Sheng, the Vice President, learns about Tang Yao's young age and struggles with the idea of appointing an 18-year-old as editor-in-chief.
• He reads the manga storyboards recommended by Tang Yao, including 'Uzumaki' and 'Fate/Zero', and is impressed by their quality.
• Zhao Fang Sheng decides to include both manga in the early release lineup for the manga award, seeing it as an opportunity to observe readers' acceptance of 'Fate/Zero' before its official magazine serialization.

Character Developments

• Zhao Fang Sheng: Realizes Tang Yao's talent in discovering and nurturing manga artists, and decides to support her despite her young age.
• Tang Yao: Unaware of the upcoming opportunity to become editor-in-chief, and might have continued as an editor for a few more years if not for Ding Yilong's interference.

Significant Themes

• Age and experience: The common belief that older individuals are more reliable and stable in leadership positions, and the struggle to accept a young, capable leader.
• Talent recognition: The importance of recognizing and nurturing talent, as seen in Tang Yao's discovery of 'Uzumaki' and 'Fate/Zero'.

Character Interactions

• Zhao Fang Sheng and Shang Tao: Discuss Tang Yao's age and the quality of her recommended manga, leading to Zhao Fang Sheng's decision to support her.
• Tang Yao (off-screen): Unknowingly on the brink of becoming editor-in-chief, but her young age causes Zhao Fang Sheng to hesitate.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao is confused by Shang Tao's sudden apology and strange behavior.
• Fate/Zero's serialization is secured without Tang Yao's intervention.
• Tang Yao meets Li Xue after work to discuss investment for her game project.
• Li Xue reveals she wants Tang Yao to keep her company, not just for business.
• Tang Yao gives Li Xue the game project proposal to review.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao shows determination and seriousness in her game project.
• Li Xue displays a more personal and vulnerable side, revealing her loneliness and desire for companionship.

Significant Themes

• Friendship and companionship.
• Work-life balance.
• Ambition and determination.

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Li Xue's friendship deepens as they spend more time together.
• Li Xue expresses her disappointment at Tang Yao's potential departure but ultimately accepts it.
• Tang Yao shows understanding and consideration for Li Xue's feelings.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao is hesitant to leave Li Xue and the company, revealing her fears and insecurities about her new venture.
• Li Xue playfully suggests a dramatic scene to convince Tang Yao to stay, which Tang Yao dismisses as cliché.
• Tang Yao confesses her fear of failure and her responsibility towards Li Xue, refusing to invite her to join her new venture until she's confident in its success.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao: Shows growth in self-awareness, acknowledging her fears and insecurities, and demonstrates responsibility and consideration for Li Xue's future.
• Li Xue: Reveals her understanding and support for Tang Yao's decision, showing maturity and selflessness.

Significant Themes

• Fear of failure and stepping out of one's comfort zone
• Responsibility and consideration for others' well-being
• The power of self-awareness and honesty in personal growth

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Li Xue's interaction highlights their mutual respect, understanding, and support for each other's decisions.
• Their conversation reveals their deep bond, with Li Xue acting as a mentor and confidante to Tang Yao.
• Despite their playful banter, their conversation underscores the seriousness of Tang Yao's new venture and the potential risks involved.

Key Plot Points and Events

• Tang Yao and Li Xue discuss the manga award and the game's progress.
• The new media department starts promoting the manga award, causing outrage among readers of 'Girl, Boy, and Sword'.
• Ou Congquan posts an apology and announcement about revisions for the next issue, further fueling reader anger.
• Tang Yao is surprised by the intense reader reaction.

Character Developments

• Tang Yao shows confidence in her plans and remains calm amidst the reader backlash.
• Li Xue is shocked by Tang Yao's preparations and the reader reaction.
• Ou Congquan apologizes for the recent serialization issues and announces revisions for the next issue.

Significant Themes

• The power of reader feedback and its impact on creators and publishers.
• The tension between appeasing readers and pursuing larger goals (in this case, the manga award).

Character Interactions

• Tang Yao and Li Xue discuss their plans and share their thoughts on the manga award and game progress.
• Su Deqiang and other readers express their anger and frustration towards Ou Congquan and the new media department.
• Ou Congquan apologizes to readers and announces revisions, attempting to appease them.