Hollywood Queen: Directing from 17
Chapter 50

A New Editing Style

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A week later, Irene asked the school for another leave of absence and headed into Fox's professional editing suite.

The editor was the familiar Hill Cook, whom Fox had specifically borrowed from Zoetrope Studios in the hope of repeating the success of the previous film as closely as possible.

Following the successful formula of the previous film, Legally Blonde, he had already set up bright, vivid filters for the rough cut of Mean Girls and selected several upbeat, lively pop songs as options.

"Irene, what do you think? We'll stick to our previous style and make sure the audience leaves in a good mood." Hill handed Irene his coffee and confidently pressed play.

The opening scenes played smoothly on the monitor: Cady's unease as she entered the school for the first time, her initial clash with The Plastics... The visuals were bright, the music pleasant, and the storytelling clear. It was practically the standard formula for teen movies these days, and barely differed from the original film Irene remembered.

Irene watched the rough cut in silence, her arms folded. Her brow furrowed slightly, then she slowly shook her head.

"Hill, this time is different. Legally Blonde is an unabashed underdog story, so the overall tone is upbeat, light, and optimistic. But Mean Girls is a schoolyard war wrapped in a candy-colored exterior. It can be funny and lighthearted, but we need a faster pace and stronger underlying conflict—not a picture of perfect harmony."

"Cross-cut shots 06, 45, and 73 quickly, and keep each shot on screen for one second."

The shots intercut Cady's close-up as she secretly watched The Plastics for the first time, Regina tossing her hair, and Gretchen pursing her lips in disdain, setting them against one another.

Then she explained, "Use this in place of Cady's inner monologue. She's quickly evaluating the threats, analyzing everyone's status and personality. This editing rhythm shows how fast her mind is working."

Hill nodded thoughtfully and spliced the footage together as she had suggested.

Then, when showing the girls talking behind one another's backs, Irene boldly used jump cuts.

After a girl delivered a cutting remark, the image jumped slightly. She might shift into a different pose between one line and the next, but the conversation continued.

The discontinuity created an eerie comic effect and a sense of detachment, as if to say, "Look, their lives are made up of these fragments of cruelty." This storytelling approach gave the film more depth.

After Aaron invited Cady to a party, only for Regina to secretly sabotage the invitation, Irene cut the sentimental music Hill had planned for the scene where Cady felt dejected.

"No music here," she emphasized. "I want absolute silence, just ambient sound: the commotion in the hallway in the distance, the villa door opening and closing. Then give Cady a five-second close-up. We need to watch the light in her eyes go out, then see it catch fire again. Silence can be more powerful than any score. This is the beginning of her transformation, and the audience needs to clearly 'hear' the sound of her resolve."

At the end of the film, when Cady broke the crown in her hands and shared the pieces with everyone, Irene did more than simply record the moment. Instead, she built a complex montage: the look on Cady's face as she finally understood—the brightest diamond on the crown—the broken "limbs"—Regina's incredulous expression—the other girls' shocked faces—the shimmering reflections beneath the lights—and finally, the crowd cheering.

As she gave directions, Irene said, "We're combining the heroine's awakening with the celebration. The broken crown symbolizes her coming to her senses and leaving the murky past behind. This isn't a simple gesture; it's a ritual."

Hill Cook's initial confusion gradually gave way to wide-eyed astonishment, and finally, pure admiration.

Irene's techniques broke free of the blandness of contemporary teen movies and injected the film with a fast-paced tension more akin to an action movie.

She wasn't simply telling a story. She was dissecting and reassembling the characters' psychological journeys. This sharp editing style was an enormous leap forward from her first film.

Time always flew by in the editing suite. In just five days, Irene had organized the core footage with her precise sense of rhythm and strong command of the story. She still had to fine-tune some of the music, but had no clear ideas yet; she would have to wait until she could discuss it with the composer.

Meanwhile, she also cut a trailer and handed it to 20th Century Fox for its early promotional campaign.

One day, while Irene stepped outside for some fresh air during a break and stopped at a newsstand on the corner to buy a newspaper, she saw a scene she had expected—but whose impact had exceeded her expectations. News of her and Britney appearing at Victoria's Secret Night had spread all across North America.

Unlike the brief, straightforward text-and-image coverage typical of entertainment news, this time the breadth and depth of the coverage clearly bore the marks of careful planning. Irene knew Chen Shiyu and his team had begun to put their plan into action.

Chen Shiyu hadn't blindly spread their limited resources everywhere.

He steered clear of the crowded traditional entertainment pages and instead focused their carefully prepared articles and photos on the "Fashion" and "Entertainment" sections of emerging internet portals, as well as several early film forums with huge audiences.

The headlines weren't all the same, either. Each had been cleverly tailored to a different angle.

On some websites, the focus was on "Cross-Industry Inspiration! Rising Director Irene Appears at Victoria's Secret with Pop Icon Britney to Explore New Directions in Visual Art," elevating Irene's image to that of an "artistic explorer."

On other forums, the discussion was more fan-oriented: "Britney Succeeds in Meeting Her Idols Backstage at Victoria's Secret! Her Sweet Photos with the Supermodels Are Adorable." It greatly encouraged fans to share the news.

Most importantly, Chen Shiyu's team repeatedly emphasized the phrases "invited guest" and "exclusive backstage access" in its main press release, subtly shaping the public image of Irene and Britney as figures recognized by the highest echelons of the fashion world.

On the well-known Movie Database forum and several popular fan communities, posts from enthusiastic ordinary users began to appear. They looked as though they had been written by everyday people, with a natural style, but their message was clear.

"Has anyone seen photos of Director Irene at the Victoria's Secret show? She looks incredible. Sitting among all those celebrities, she doesn't look out of place at all!"

"Britney is so cute. I feel like she and Irene are genuinely good friends. They were whispering to each other the whole time they watched the show."

"Here's a wild guess: could Director Irene's next movie have something to do with fashion? Did she go to learn from the best?"

Of course, there was negative discussion too, such as, "Is a lingerie show really such a glamorous event? What's so special about it?" and "Britney Appears at a Lingerie Show—Is the Teen Idol Going Off the Rails?"

But Chen Shiyu's team quickly spotted such discussions and snuffed them out before they could spread.

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