Could You Come In and Take a Look?

Was the pacing a bit too slow?

If there was anything wrong, could you please give me timely feedback so I could adjust the pacing and plot going forward.

It felt like I'd slipped into Qidian's slow-paced style.

If you noticed anything bad, I'd really appreciate it if you could point it out right away.

That way, I could make changes—for example, if the timeline was off somewhere, if there were mistakes or unreasonable settings, or if it just wasn't satisfying enough. You could also tell me what kind of plot you hoped to see next.