Iron Throne of Ice and Fire
Chapter 507

Can't Hold On Anymore

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I silently watched the cigarette burn down...

Dear godfathers, please accept my deepest apologies. TT

I'd been traveling for work while squeezing in time to write on my phone. I only managed to force out that little bit each day, and even I felt miserable... According to the outline, the later parts were supposed to get more and more satisfying, but something felt off.

I was a miserable, tangled mess.

I broke my promise. My condition had been really bad; my mind felt completely empty.

If I kept forcing it like this, sooner or later I'd be finished.

Please forgive me. TT

As for the plot...

To increase Gryn's screen time, I cut the plotlines of Dragon Mother leading her army in a cheat-like conquest, as well as the Wildlings in the Vale's Mountains of the Moon.

According to the outline, after Cersei exited the story, Little Rose would serve as a transition, and Dragon Mother would take center stage afterward.

Along the way, there would also be events involving the Sea Monsters (that family isn't very popular, so a lot of their later content will be cut) and The Wall.

There was another thing troubling me: the arrangements for the Westerlands.

Given the protagonist's cautious personality as established, the Lannisters were destined to disappear. That created a conflict in terms of timing, because clearing out the Westerlands would take a reasonable amount of time, while the northern campaign against the zombies was about to begin. The protagonist had to stabilize matters internally as quickly as possible and gather all resources to face the darkness of the Long Night. So, dear godfathers, do you have any suggestions? (The author's tone was especially cautious.)

Lastly.

I really couldn't hold on any longer. Please allow me to take a day or two

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