Listen to Advice, First Three Chapters Revised

Eleven finally had the time during the holiday to sort through the various issues from before, taking this opportunity to make some adjustments to the first three chapters.

I will also be making adjustments to address some problems present in the later chapters in the near future.

I would also like to thank the experts who offered their various criticisms and suggestions.

Also, I am on duty today, so the next chapter will be updated a bit later.