Since it was put on the shelves, some book friends have put forward some suggestions and criticisms in book reviews and chapter chapters. I have summarized them and briefly replied here.
First, the problem of hydrology and updates. To be blunt, I am not a full-time author. I have tried my best to ensure three updates a day. I need to go to work during the day, and the only time I can update is at noon and after get off work in the evening. Occasionally, when I am not busy at work, I can secretly code. The only time I can really loosely code is weekends. This is based on the fact that I don't have to work overtime.
Some readers complained that it was too watery, and the text could be simplified. I saw it all, and it's not that it can't be done. Speaking of which, I spent time reading my own novel over the weekend, and I did find that it could be reduced to at least two-thirds of the original text. However, being able to do it does not mean that it can be done. The most important thing is that I don't have time.
Let me do the math for you. I coded 2,000 words in one chapter. It took almost an hour or more, not counting errors and various unexpected factors. Generally speaking, it takes about four hours to code three chapters a day. It takes seven or eight hours to go to work in a day. After deducting the time spent sleeping, eating, and commuting back and forth to work, it should be clear to everyone that my entertainment and rest time is almost zero. Unless I can fish and code during work hours, I may still find time to watch anime and play games for a while in the evening. Otherwise, everything is a luxury.
When time is so tight, I basically just write down whatever comes to my mind. It is impossible for me to think about and consider every word like those full-time writers, so as to streamline the text. This is not because I want to perfuse everyone, but because I really don't have the time and time. In terms of energy, if I really want to carefully study the text and streamline the plot of each chapter, it will take more than two hours to write a chapter like this. If I update it three times a day, I will never be able to devote seven or eight hours to coding. It is not that it is difficult for me, but that I simply cannot do it.
Because of this, typos often appear in my novels. It's not really because of my low cultural level, but because I don't have time to check, so this problem easily occurs.
I would like to apologize to all the book lovers here. If you find any wrong sentences or typos, please point them out. If I see them, I will correct them if I can. Also, please don't go online and mention the author's low quality and lack of education, or even say that the author has not read Hokage. That is really hurtful.
The second question is that some readers complained about the strength grading in the novel. This is actually a secondary issue of the fan author. Original Work Hokage is a passionate comic, not a cultivator, nor a fantasy. Types of film and television works, of course, have no strength levels. The so-called Genin, Chunin, Jōnin, and shadow are just identities in Original Work.
The reason why we fan authors have set up: Genin, Chunin, Elite Chūnin, Special Jōnin, Jōnin, Elite Jōnin, Quasi-Kage, Kage Level, Strong Kage, Super Kage, Six Paths Level are all because we write novels, which are not as expressive and tense as comics and animations. We need such words to embellish them, so that the novels seem to have a sense of picture and strength.
It's not that we want to mess around, but it would be more reasonable to set it up like this. It can be said that 99% of Hokage fan authors do this.
The third question is that some readers are worried about whether their grades are not popular and whether they will be eunuchs. I can guarantee that they will definitely not be eunuchs. Again, when this book was put on the shelves on November 1, the total collection was only 1,300! Nowadays, the high order volume is over 3,000, and the average subscription is 1,100+. I have no reason to be eunuch. Readers who have read the content of the first five chapters should know that at that time, I had a plan of ordering tens to a hundred, and writing for at least three or four months. I would cut off all the branch plots and only write the main plot to complete the book.
With this achievement now, not to mention the main plot, I can write all the branches. I have ordered more than 1,000, plus the perfect attendance bonus and one month's remuneration. If I don't count my own five insurances and one housing fund, the remuneration is equal to my salary. I have no reason to give up. So, please rest assured that this book will be completed according to the original outline plan. No matter what, I can write nearly two million words, so please don't worry! above!