This book has reached 1.5 million words. Along the way, many book friends have put forward various opinions and opinions. Some of them I think are very pertinent, and some of them I really think are unreasonable.
Some book friends have complained about Shuwen, complaining about using words such as "extreme" and "home" too frequently. These are real problems, and I will never deny them. I have said before that when I work part-time as a codewriter, it is difficult for me to simplify the text. It is very difficult for me to simplify the text. There are so many unnecessary explanations. Sometimes the ancient power in my body cannot bear it and I always want to write it out. Sometimes I really ignore it and write some explanations repeatedly. Of course, this is not to excuse myself, but to truly admit my mistakes.
There are too many explanations and some words are used too frequently. I can't promise that I will definitely change it, but I will say that I will try my best to make corrections so as not to bore readers too much. This is the limit of a part-time code writer.
In my opinion, the above views and opinions are still correct and reasonable.
The following part can even be said to be outrageous to me based on the opinions of more than a dozen book friends.
The first is the issue of address. I don't know whether you are 100% seeking our China form of dialogue, or whether you simply don't understand the address etiquette in the Japan culture.
I have already explained it before. Jun, Sang, Jiang, etc. are all common address suffixes in Japan culture.
Jiang basically translates to 'little', for example 'Kurotsuchi Jiang', which translates to little Kurotsuchi, is often used as a suffix for elders to address younger ones.
Jun is an equal title. Friends who often watch Japanese comics and dramas should understand that among classmates and colleagues, Japan is often addressed by "jun". If they are called by their first names at Japan, they are either very close, or the relationship is very distant or even bad.
Otherwise, the word "Jun" will usually be used.
And "Sang" is a pure honorific. In school, juniors and juniors should use "Sang" to address their seniors and seniors. In the company, those with junior qualifications and lower positions should use "Sang" to those with more seniority and higher positions. If you call you by your first name, it will be regarded as a provocation by others, which is an impolite behavior!
So those book friends complained and even criticized me for using the word "mulberry" just to deliberately lower the number of words. I didn't know what to say. Isn't this a normal term? Take Shōji and Kitsuchi as an example. Although there is a ten-year age difference between the two, Shōji calls Kitsuchi by his first name. Are you sure this is not an arrogant and provocative act?
I'm sure there are some problems with hydrology, improper wording, or too frequent use of words that cause aesthetic fatigue. If you want to criticize and complain, it's also the problem mentioned by the book friends above. Using these "suffixes" to make an article, I really can only say that you know too little about Japanese comic culture.
Of course, some book friends may say, you are writing a China online novel, and it is aimed at China readers. Why do you still need to use some Japan titles? Isn't it better to just China it?
To be honest, if I were to include some China-like conversational titles in the article, I would be criticized by another group of readers.
The second question is actually the combat power competition issue that is most often mentioned in this book, and even in all Hokage fan fiction!
I think the views of some book friends are very strange. In their view, as long as the protagonist is stronger than the opponent, he will never lose. Yes, this is the view of these book friends. They will not consider any rationality. In their view, the stronger one should win. Why should he lose?
But I really want to ask these book friends, when you are playing the game and your level and equipment are behind, do you just choose to surrender? Have you never played a comeback game?
Shouldn't it?
Of course, I will definitely not write that the protagonist really loses to an opponent who is weaker than him, but what I don't understand is that as long as it is mentioned in the article that XX has a certain probability of defeating the protagonist, or even killing the protagonist, at least one or two book friends will jump out and say, 'You are unreasonable! ' 'You can't do this! '
'How can the protagonist lose if he is so strong? '
I haven't even written about the protagonist's defeat. If I did, wouldn't it mean that I would be trolled all over the screen?
Just like a question raised by a book friend I replied to in this chapter today, do you think it is possible for a child to kill an adult while holding a sword?
Note that I didn't say it would definitely kill him, I asked if there was a probability.
The answer is obvious. Even if the probability is as low as one percent or even one thousandth, something with a probability is a probability, right?
For another example, if you are playing LOL, if someone says that level 1 Doran's Blade or straw sandals can defeat an opponent with level 18 full divine equipment, that would definitely be ridiculous. If you stand on the opposite side and let you fight, you may not be able to break the defense.
But if you have a level 10 two-piece set and beat someone else's level 11 three-piece set, even if the equipment and level are obviously behind, they still have a level two ultimate move. If you only have a level one ultimate move, there is still room for maneuver, right?
Let me tell you, you have a chance of winning. Isn't that an exaggeration?
not to mention.
If book friends ask me to write a book strictly according to the settings of Original Work, I'm sorry, the collapse of combat power is the standard feature of Original Work. For example, the famous Hatake 'Five-Five Open' will be half-dead when fighting Zabuza, and then it can actually fight against Ōtsutsuki Kaguya?
And Sakura may not be Kage Level, but he can actually participate in the decisive battle.
Isn't this the biggest combat effectiveness BUG problem?
In terms of combat power, to be honest, I have tried my best to configure it reasonably so that the logic is not so exaggerated. For example, Sakura and Kakashi can participate in the decisive battle instead of being killed by Kaguya with one hand. I have tried my best to come up with a reason why Kaguya has 0 combat experience and can take advantage of the opportunity.
Really, book lovers, in the Hokage fanfic, if you are entangled with the issue of combat effectiveness, you are really going too far. Among the Japan migrant workers comics, Hokage is the hot-blooded comic with the most bugs.
Not just this book, but also other novels written by Hokage fans.
My personal opinion is true. As long as the author doesn't write that when the protagonist Kage Level is 50-50 more powerful than an ordinary Chunin, or when Super Kage is, it still takes a lot of effort to win an ordinary Jōnin, it's actually reasonable!
The above is my little complaint after reading book reviews and chapters. I would also like to express my gratitude to you book friends who can understand. If you can't understand, there is nothing you can do about it. I will not continue to reply to similar questions in the future.
You can't waste your lunch break. You don't have to sleep anymore. You have to write more words. Some book friends have been asking for more updates before. I also expressed my sincerity. On the day Children's Day, I will write more to show my sincerity!
Thank you all book friends for your continued support!