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The Iron Man 3 storyline I added temporarily seems to have gotten a bit too complicated, with too many characters and plot threads involved.
I didn't really feel much when I outlined this section, but once I actually started writing, it was different~ It's a problem, and I don't seem to know how to fix it for now!
Some people said they weren't familiar with the characters. Well, watching Red, Suicide Squad, The Bourne Legacy, Shooter, and The Equalizer might help.
I don't usually follow the plots, but knowing a little about the characters might make it easier to get immersed.
To be honest, there are a few too many characters in this book, and I can't spend too much time describing someone readers might already know.
Original characters like Harvey need more attention, though. Otherwise, longtime readers might find it awkward.
I've actually been pretty restrained. There aren't that many people around Alvin; I need these characters to move the plot forward.
I originally thought I'd add a note whenever a new character appeared, but then I decided against it!
That would leave this chapter's comments with less to read! Besides, other than the names being hard to remember, it doesn't really affect the reading experience, since the story's different from the original anyway.
And guessing who the characters are is part of the fun~
I'll update the character list at the beginning from time to time. If you need it, take a look!