Ch. 21Hermione's Intuition
1. Key Plot Points and Events
- Zhang Wen deliberately "runs into" Hermione to ask about Ginny Weasley, expressing concern about her adjustment.
- Hermione reveals Ginny’s mood swings, distraction, and a hidden black notebook that she hides when approached.
- Zhang Wen asks Hermione to talk to Ginny (as a friend) without prying, offering a plausible but misleading explanation (first-year loneliness).
- In the second-year class, Zhang Wen notices Theodore Nott’s bandaged right wrist, which is self-wrapped rather than treated at the Hospital Wing. He suspects abuse but decides not to act immediately.
- Zhang Wen receives a second letter from Lucius Malfoy: the Board plans to review the Dueling Club’s safety at the November meeting (a threat), while Lucius also probes Draco’s relationship with Zhang Wen.
- Zhang Wen plans a countermeasure: send letters to parents praising their children’s progress in the Dueling Club, building parental support as leverage against Lucius.
- During a patrol with Artoria, Zhang Wen hears the Basilisk moving inside the pipes on the fifth floor, heading downward. They retreat and mark its route on his pipe map—the path leads toward Moaning Myrtle’s bathroom (the Chamber entrance).
- Concluding the attack is imminent (likely Halloween, two weeks away), Zhang Wen sets three priorities:
- Strengthen Ginny’s social network (via Hermione).
- Deploy roosters near pipe exits in high-risk areas.
- Tell Dumbledore about the threat (without revealing his sources).
- Artoria argues that Zhang Wen has a support network too; they agree he will speak to Dumbledore alone.
- The chapter ends late at night, with Artoria leaving Zhang Wen a cup of tea as he works on the pipe map.
2. Character Developments
- Zhang Wen grows more realistic about his limits, acknowledging he cannot handle the crisis alone and needs to involve Dumbledore. He also shows an increased appreciation for Artoria’s quiet support (the tea).
- Hermione demonstrates sharp intuition—she suspects Zhang Wen’s explanation isn’t the whole truth, yet willingly helps with genuine care for Ginny.
- Ginny (offstage) shows classic signs of Diary erosion: memory lapses, distraction, secretive behavior, emotional withdrawal.
- Theodore Nott emerges as a quiet, self-reliant victim of possible abuse; his bandaging skill suggests repeated injury.
- Lucius Malfoy is portrayed as a political operator who uses institutional authority to pressure opponents rather than direct confrontation.
- Artoria shows both tactical pragmatism (training Neville, advising Zhang Wen) and personal warmth (the tea). She also quietly notes that even she cannot guarantee who will need to fight.
3. Significant Themes
- Protecting the vulnerable: Ginny is being slowly consumed by the Diary; Nott may be abused; Neville is being prepared for possible combat.
- Trust and secrecy: Zhang Wen uses half-truths with Hermione, plans partial disclosure to Dumbledore, and must balance his foreknowledge with caution.
- Preparation vs. uncertainty: The story stresses building networks (social, physical, political) while acknowledging that events may deviate from the original timeline.
- Political maneuvering: Lucius’s letter and Zhang Wen’s counter-plan highlight how institutional power and parental support can be leveraged.
- Support systems: Both Ginny and Zhang Wen need their own nets of trust—Hermione, Artoria, Dumbledore.
4. Character Interactions
- Zhang Wen ↔ Hermione: His careful, oblique approach; her observant but guarded responses; he successfully enlists her help while raising her suspicion.
- Zhang Wen ↔ Theodore Nott: A brief, chilly exchange—Nott lies about his injury, Zhang Wen notices but suppresses his concern, and their distance underscores Nott’s isolation.
- Zhang Wen ↔ Lucius Malfoy (letter): An adversarial, diplomatic correspondence—Lucius threatens, Zhang Wen feigns submission while planning his defense.
- Zhang Wen ↔ Artoria: Their dialogue is practical and strategic (Nott, Basilisk, Dumbledore), but also shows growing intimacy—Artoria’s insistence that he has support and her final gesture of the tea.
- Artoria ↔ Neville (mentioned): She continues his combat training, pushing him toward readiness despite time constraints.
- Hermione ↔ Ginny (future, implied): Hermione pledges to engage Ginny with empathy, as Zhang Wen requested.