Ch. 61Shield and Sword

Summary: Shield and Sword

Key Plot Points

  • Defense Against the Dark Arts class is a joint Gryffindor/Slytherin lesson taught by Zhang Wen, with Artoria Pendragon as assistant
  • Lesson focuses on advanced Shield Charms, moving beyond basic Protego
  • Artoria demonstrates shield techniques: blocking, deflecting, pushing, and counterattacking
  • Students participate in combat drills where Zhang Wen fires low-powered jinxes at them to practice Shield Charms
  • Each student's individual strengths and weaknesses are identified through the exercise

Character Developments

  • Hermione: Has excellent spellcasting precision and quick shield formation, but relies too heavily on consciously judging spell direction before reacting — needs to develop instinctive responses
  • Harry: Has exceptionally abundant magical output (the strongest in his year) but poor control — pours too much magic into his shield, making it unstable; needs to use less for steadier results
  • Ron: Demonstrates surprising natural defensive talent — his body instinctively positions his shield correctly before his mind consciously reacts; receives rare professor praise for "talent"
  • Malfoy: Shows restraint in class since the Dueling Club incident; casts Shield Charm competently and receives brief approval, but his gaze toward Neville suggests ongoing tension

Significant Themes

  • Defense vs. offense: True defense isn't passive — it creates counterattack opportunities; defense wins fights
  • Instinct vs. analysis: In real combat, thinking is too slow; instinctive reaction must precede conscious thought
  • Control vs. power: More magical output isn't always better; precise control often creates stronger results than raw force
  • Individualized learning: Different students have different natural strengths requiring different approaches to improvement

Character Interactions

  • Zhang Wen and Artoria work as co-teachers, with Artoria providing the philosophical/knightly perspective on defense
  • Hermione answers Artoria's question correctly, showing her intellectual engagement
  • Harry and Ron exchange brief supportive words after Harry's assessment
  • Malfoy's gaze toward Neville signals continuing friction beneath his improved behavior

Ch. 62Neville's Swordsmanship

Summary: Neville's Swordsmanship

Key Plot Points

  • During a second-year Defense class, Neville repeatedly fails to cast a Shield Charm, shattering under Zhang Wen's basic spell
  • Artoria intervenes, reframing Neville's mindset and teaching him to hold his wand like a sword
  • She introduces a new combat principle: after blocking a spell, immediately step forward and strike the opponent's wand-wrist with the wand tip to disarm them
  • Neville successfully blocks Zhang Wen's spell (the shield finally holds)
  • In a sparring match against Theodore Nott, Neville blocks Nott's Impedimenta, then disarms him with the precise wrist-strike technique—winning in under three seconds
  • The classroom erupts; Neville's transformation astonishes classmates and silences the Slytherins

Character Developments

  • Neville Longbottom: Gains genuine confidence for the first time; his hand stops trembling; discovers an unexpected aptitude for physical/martial-style magic (foreshadowing his later growth). His defining trait shifts from timidity to quiet determination
  • Artoria Pendragon: Demonstrates exceptional mentorship—she identifies the root of Neville's failure (fear, not lack of skill) and translates sword-fighting principles into wand combat
  • Mordred: Shows a rough, pragmatic edge to her advice ("punch them"); her violent philosophy is framed as legitimate combat wisdom, but softened by the chapter's tone
  • Zhang Wen: Acts as the architect of growth, deliberately creating escalating challenges for Neville

Significant Themes

  • Mindset over technique: Neville succeeds when he stops asking "Can I block it?" and thinks only "This spell cannot touch me"
  • Defense enables offense: Teaching that the Shield Charm isn't passive—it's the first half of a counterattack rhythm
  • The bridge between physical and magical combat: Wands treated as short swords; classical mechanics humorously endorsed as combat theory
  • Growth through supported risk: A student flourishes when given structure, encouragement, and the freedom to fail

Character Interactions

  • Artoria → Neville: Central relationship; she crouches to meet his eyes, adjusts his grip, and gives him a single, simple mental focus. Her final approving nod carries immense weight
  • Mordred → Neville: Blunt but effective encouragement; her "punch them" advice gets the twins' approval and is legitimized by Artoria
  • Zhang Wen → Artoria/Mordred: Tolerates their unorthodox contributions; his teaching style is quietly complementary to theirs
  • Malfoy / Slytherins: Their contemptuous certainty that Neville would fail is visibly shattered
  • Gryffindors: Collective celebration; notably, Ron is stunned speechless before finding words
  • Nott: Shows quiet respect after his defeat—no bitterness, just acknowledgment

Ch. 63The Frightening Mordred

Summary of “The Frightening Mordred”

1. Key Plot Points / Events

  • At 10:00 p.m., Mordred arrives at Gryffindor Tower. The Fat Lady is visibly terrified and immediately fetches Fred and George.
  • Fred and George are already prepared, with the Marauder’s Map ready. The trio heads to the dungeon corridor, avoiding Filch and Snape.
  • Using the map, they spot four sets of footprints ahead: three older Slytherins (Montague, Warrington, Bletchley) and a smaller student who has been crouching in a blind corner.
  • They overhear the Slytherin fourth-years forcing a young second-year half-blood to write Snape’s Potions essay for them. The bullies threaten him and make pure-blood supremacist remarks.
  • Mordred wants to attack immediately, but Fred and George restrain her, arguing they need evidence. Fred uses a modified Extendable Ear with a recording crystal to capture the whole conversation.
  • After the bullies leave, Mordred finds the crying victim, retrieves his discarded wand from the floor, and tries to return it. The boy is too frightened to trust her and remains terrified.

2. Character Developments

  • Mordred: Shows her warrior instincts and protective nature, but learns to hold back and use strategy instead of brute force. Her fearsome reputation precedes her, making even allies and victims afraid.
  • Fred & George: Resourceful, quick-thinking, and more cautious than Mordred. They value tactical evidence and use their own inventions (Marauder’s Map, Extendable Ear) to solve problems.
  • The unnamed victim: A small, traumatized Slytherin boy, already conditioned to expect cruelty from others; clearly a victim of ongoing bullying.

3. Significant Themes

  • Bullying and abuse of power: Older pure-blood Slytherins exploit younger half-blood students, treating them as servants.
  • Justice vs. evidence: Mordred’s impulse is to fight, but the twins teach her that winning politically requires proof.
  • Fear and reputation: Mordred’s frightening presence causes submission, but it also makes vulnerable people unable to see her as a protector.
  • Unity in resistance: The twins and Mordred work together as a small team, combining force with cunning.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred ↔ Fred & George: Teasing and banter, but with genuine cooperation and mutual respect.
  • Mordred ↔ Fat Lady: One-sided fear; the portrait is obsequious and eager to please.
  • Mordred ↔ Slytherin bullies: No direct confrontation yet; she memorizes their faces and waits.
  • Mordred ↔ victim: A poignant moment—she tries to help by returning his wand, but the boy trembles in fear, initially mistaking her for another tormentor.

Ch. 64Ambiguity

Summary of Chapter: “Ambiguity”

1. Key Plot Points / Events

  • After confronting a group of Slytherin bullies, Mordred tries to comfort the victim, second-year Malcolm Baddock. She returns his wand and tells him to seek Professor Zhang Wen if the bullies bother him again.
  • Fred and George helpfully recorded the bullies’ conversation using an Extendable Ear; Mordred compiles the evidence into a reconnaissance report.
  • Back in Zhang Wen’s room, Mordred delivers the report and recording crystal. Zhang Wen praises her work and says he will hand the evidence to Snape.
  • The next morning, Zhang Wen gives Snape the evidence. Snape listens silently and says only, “I’ll handle it.”
  • Snape publicly punishes Montague, Warrington, and Bletchley: a month of nightly detention, essays in his office, and a severe scolding before the entire Slytherin common room. He declares that no one in his house may bully others because of blood status. Montague is reduced to tears.
  • Malfoy later relays the news to Zhang Wen, half-shocked and half-gloating.

2. Character Developments

  • Mordred: Shows a rare, softer side beneath her aggressive exterior. She helps a bullied child, gives credit to Fred and George, and notices (with dry annoyance) the growing closeness between Zhang Wen and Artoria.
  • Zhang Wen: Acts as a careful, principled teacher: he gathers evidence, chooses the right authority to handle the situation, and reflects on Snape’s motivations.
  • Snape: Proves unexpectedly fair and harsh even toward his own house. His personal history as a half-blood clearly influences his response.
  • Artoria: Quietly admires Mordred for the first time; her subtle physical closeness to Zhang Wen reveals growing romantic tension.
  • Fred and George: Supportive, clever, and observant—they see through Mordred’s tough act and tease her affectionately.
  • Malfoy: Shows a complicated reaction—amused at the Slytherins’ disgrace, but unsettled by Snape’s words about blood status.

3. Significant Themes

  • Bullying and blood purity: The chapter tackles discrimination against half-bloods within Slytherin and the importance of standing against it.
  • Justice vs. protection: Zhang Wen uses proper channels and evidence rather than personal force.
  • Ambiguity / hidden softness: Mordred’s fierce exterior conceals genuine warmth; Snape’s harshness conceals deep personal pain.
  • Romantic tension / unspoken feelings: Artoria and Zhang Wen’s near-touching hands and unspoken closeness echo the chapter’s title.
  • Found family / trust: Fred, George, Mordred, and Zhang Wen work together as a team; Snape is trusted despite past bitterness.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred & Baddock: Awkward but sincere comfort; she gives him a lifeline in Zhang Wen.
  • Mordred & Fred/George: Bickering but fond; they silently acknowledge her fierce warmth.
  • Mordred & Zhang Wen/Artoria: She notes their mutual attraction and teasingly exits, pretending not to see it.
  • Zhang Wen & Snape: A terse, significant exchange; Snape’s four-word promise carries weight.
  • Malfoy & Zhang Wen: Malfoy voluntarily shares news, showing a flicker of complicated respect or curiosity.

Ch. 65The Third-Floor Armor Recruit Company

Summary: The Third-Floor Armor Recruit Company

Key Plot Points

  • Hogwarts' suits of armor are normally unruly—they attack students, sing badly, and answer to no one (Filch, Dumbledore, and McGonagall have all failed to control them over the years).
  • Fred and George Weasley are the first to notice the Third-Floor Corridor's armor behaving strangely: standing perfectly still, helmets on straight, weapons held properly.
  • Harry, Ron, and Hermione investigate; they find no binding spells or enchantments on the armor, yet it remains completely motionless and unresponsive.
  • Malfoy, Crabbe, and Goyle witness the truth: as Artoria walks through the corridor, every suit of armor snaps to attention and salutes her with their weapons. She solemnly returns the salute.
  • Filch discovers the orderly armor and joyfully reports to the teachers' dinner, believing it's the castle's magic "restoring order" and proof of Dumbledore's effective education.
  • Dumbledore subtly questions Artoria at dinner about whether she's passed through the Third-Floor Corridor; she calmly confirms she has.
  • That night, Zhang Wen asks Artoria directly. She explains she "corrected" the armor because their weapon-holding postures were "absurdly wrong" and "an insult to the weapons"—she couldn't stand to watch it.

Character Developments

  • Artoria: Demonstrates her unshakeable knightly mindset—even enchanted castle armor must maintain proper weapon discipline. She corrects centuries-old magical chaos with matter-of-fact seriousness.
  • Dumbledore: Perceptive but restrained; he notices the connection and lets it go without pressing.
  • Filch: Gets a rare moment of genuine happiness, providing comic relief.
  • Zhang Wen: Recognizes the pattern of Artoria being responsible for seemingly impossible changes.

Significant Themes

  • The clash between Hogwarts' chaotic, whimsical magic and Artoria's rigid knightly order.
  • Artoria's knightly identity as inseparable from her being—she treats armor as genuine weapons bearer and cannot tolerate improper form.
  • Comedy arising from the absurd, deadpan application of knightly standards to ordinary castle décor.

Key Interactions

  • Twins' suspicion and mutual observation about the changed armor.
  • Harry/Ron/Hermione's cautious investigation (Ron: "Have they been nailed down?").
  • Malfoy's stunned reaction—his father told him the armor answers to no one, yet it salutes "Teaching Assistant Pendragon."
  • Filch's ecstatic report to the professors, met with general bewilderment.
  • Dumbledore's gentle, knowing question to Artoria, and Artoria's unbothered reply.
  • Zhang Wen's private interrogation of Artoria, ending with his speechless reaction to her knightly rationale.

Ch. 66Artoria's Image to Maintain

Summary: "Artoria's Image to Maintain"

1. Key Plot Points and Events

  • Mordred sneaks into the room while Artoria and Zhang Wen are talking, eating an apple.
  • She hints that she knows the full truth about the "armor-dismantling incident" and offers to tell Zhang Wen.
  • Artoria tries to shut her down with a calm, authoritative look and then with direct orders.
  • Mordred pouts, teases her mother, and exposes that Artoria is hiding a Muggle romance novel inside a Potions book cover.
  • Artoria quietly slides the book under a sofa cushion, trying and failing to be inconspicuous.
  • Artoria orders Mordred out, escalating to counting to three—but only counts to one before giving the punishment of extra laps.
  • Mordred leaves, but at the door tells Zhang Wen that Artoria is actually "a very adorable person."
  • After the door shuts, Zhang Wen notices Artoria’s red ears and slightly flustered behavior. He gently plays along with her cover story, and Artoria's embarrassment deepens.

2. Character Developments

  • Artoria: Shows a softer, more embarrassed side beneath her composed "King of Britain" persona. She tries to control the situation with authority but is visibly flustered when her private reading habit is exposed. Her attempt to maintain dignity in front of Zhang Wen is humorous and humanizing.
  • Mordred: Defiant, playful, and unafraid of her mother's authority. She clearly enjoys teasing Artoria and openly tries to be close to Zhang Wen, calling him "Father." She also shows affection in her own mischievous way.
  • Zhang Wen: Observant and supportive. He notices Artoria’s subtle tells (skipped counting, hair-brushing gesture, red ears) and chooses to cooperate with her cover-up rather than tease her, showing his care and understanding.

3. Significant Themes

  • Image vs. Vulnerability: Artoria wants to preserve a composed, serious image in front of Zhang Wen, but her embarrassment and small slip-ups show her humanity.
  • Parent–Child Dynamics: Mordred challenges Artoria's authority but also reveals affection; their relationship mixes teasing, discipline, and warmth.
  • Domestic Comedy: The chapter is lighthearted, centering on a small, silly secret rather than grand conflict.
  • Authority and Defiance: Mordred's refusal to obey until faced with real consequences highlights the push-and-pull of her relationship with Artoria.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred ↔ Artoria: Mostly teasing and adversarial. Mordred deliberately exposes Artoria's secret, while Artoria responds with increasingly desperate attempts to dismiss her, culminating in a fake countdown.
  • Mordred ↔ Zhang Wen: Warm and affectionate. She calls him "Father," says she wants to stay and listen, and gives him a playful parting remark about Artoria.
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Artoria: Quietly supportive. He notices her embarrassment and avoids making it worse by politely echoing her denials and pretending to believe her excuses.

Ch. 67A Guide to Bullying in the Four Houses

Summary: A Guide to Bullying in the Four Houses (Extra Chapter)

Key Plot Points

  1. The Second Report — Mordred and the Weasley twins submit a much thicker investigative report on bullying across all four Houses, having used up the Weasley family's entire parchment stock in the process.
  2. Slytherin's Findings — The most severe and systematic bullying. Rooted in bloodline supremacy, with a clearly defined hierarchy (pure-bloods on top, Muggle-borns at the bottom). Upper-years enforce an unwritten "supervision" system where younger students serve as unpaid servants. Resistance leads to collective ostracism, theft, destruction of belongings, and even pouring cold water on sleeping victims. Reporting to Snape has historically backfired—the reporters were bullied even worse afterward, and the system is too entrenched for one Head of House to dismantle.
  3. Gryffindor's Findings — Less severe but still pervasive. The bullying is based on "courage standards" — students who are shy, fearful, or struggle academically (like Neville Longbottom) are mocked for "not being Gryffindor enough." Hermione's past breakdown (hiding in the girls' bathroom) is also mentioned. The Weasley twins admit they themselves teased Neville in their first year and acknowledge it wasn't actually a joke.
  4. Ravenclaw's Findings — The most hidden form: intellectual humiliation and psychological crushing. Exam results are publicly ranked across the entire House; bottom-ranked students face mockery and public discussion questioning their worthiness for Ravenclaw. Victims report nothing because the bullies don't consider themselves bullies, and the victims can't articulate their suffering. One known case ended with a student nearly dropping out, only saved by a Muggle-university relative taking him away.
  5. Hufflepuff's Findings — The mildest but still problematic: inconspicuous exploitation. Older students habitually "ask for help" (errands, carrying things, saving seats) from younger students until it becomes a daily burden. Hufflepuff children's loyalty and friendship values make them least likely to refuse.

Character Developments

  • Mordred — Shows genuine competence and maturity as an investigator; knows the report by heart and delivers findings calmly. Her "scoring system" for Zhang Wen and Artoria's unconscious gestures reveals personal growth and good-humored detachment.
  • Fred & George Weasley — Experience genuine remorse for past bullying of Neville, reflected in their unusually serious demeanor throughout the meeting. They acknowledge their past behavior was wrong.
  • Zhang Wen — Displays controlled, patient anger as he reads the reports. His calm questioning and quiet listening show his methodical, thoughtful approach to gathering full information before acting.
  • Artoria — Provides subtle, quiet support to Zhang Wen (the carefully placed tea—her left hand aiming with precision at his elbow, no words needed). Speaks only once, to validate that Ravenclaw's form of bullying is "the hardest to deal with."

Significant Themes

  • Systemic bullying — Bullying isn't just individual cruelty but is embedded in each House's culture and core values (blood purity, courage, intellect, loyalty).
  • Invisible harm — The most damaging cruelty is often the kind nobody reports and bullies themselves don't recognize as bullying.
  • House identity as both pride and prison — Slytherin's bloodline supremacy, Gryffindor's narrow courage, Ravenclaw's intellectual elitism all weaponize House identity against those who don't conform.
  • The limits of institutional authority — Snape's intervention proved insufficient against a decades-old system; even well-meaning institutional fixes can backfire.
  • Remorse and accountability — The Weasley twins' recognition of their past actions as genuine wrongdoing, not harmless jokes.

Character Interactions

  • Mordred ↔ Zhang Wen — Efficient, professional reporter-to-editor dynamic; Mordred requests more parchment with casual familiarity ("Father, buy more next time you restock for us").
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Artoria — Wordless domestic intimacy. Artoria preemptively places tea exactly where his elbow will rest; Zhang Wen says "Thank you" without even looking up. Their silent partnership is noted with amusement by Fred ("I get it" / "Shut up").
  • Fred & George ↔ Zhang Wen — The twins remain uncharacteristically solemn, hands out of pockets. When admitting their past teasing of Neville, Zhang Wen's response is gentle wisdom: "The fact that you can recognize that is already a form of growth."
  • Mordred ↔ Artoria — Mordred's internal commentary about Artoria's "score" (eight points for the tea, ten was reserved for the collar-straightening incident) shows a surprisingly warm, accepting attitude toward her father's relationship.

Ch. 68The Nature of Bloodline Supremacy

Summary of "The Nature of Bloodline Supremacy"

Key Plot Points

  • In his office, Zhang Wen meets with Mordred, Fred, and George after reviewing reports on Hogwarts House problems.
  • He surprises them by saying Slytherin's bullying problem is actually the easiest to solve — despite being the most serious.
  • Zhang Wen argues that Slytherin's true core value is not bloodline purity but fear of the strong. Bloodline theory is just a mask.
  • He uses Voldemort as an example: pure-blood aristocrats followed him because of his power, not his bloodline. If he had been weak and ordinary, they would have ignored him.
  • He also points out that even pure-blood families rank each other by status and power, not just blood. And no one mocks Dumbledore's humble/messy family history because Dumbledore himself is overwhelmingly powerful.
  • Conclusion: the strong do not need to prove their bloodline — they become the start of a bloodline.
  • The real solution is not debating bloodline ideology, but making bullied students strong enough that the system collapses on its own.
  • Fred and George grasp the strategic implication: Zhang Wen intends to reshape Slytherin's internal power structure, not just punish bullies.
  • Zhang Wen sends Mordred out that night to gather detailed intelligence on Slytherin's "rules of obedience" — how upperclassmen control lowerclassmen — to find the system's weakest point.
  • After the others leave, Zhang Wen and Artoria sit alone, share awkward silence, then talk. Artoria admits she had no friends in Camelot; Zhang Wen says he doesn't know how to chat either. They agree to learn together, and she gives him a genuine smile.

Character Developments

  • Zhang Wen: Shows a coldly analytical, strategic mindset — he treats Slytherin's culture as a structure to be dismantled, not just a moral problem.
  • Mordred: Loyal and efficient, carries out orders without hesitation; comfortable enough to tease her father for nagging. She also shows independence as she works better alone.
  • Fred and George: Moved from joking troublemakers to serious thinkers; deeply impressed by Zhang Wen's analysis, even suggesting Arthur Weasley should hear it.
  • Artoria: Reveals a rare moment of vulnerability — admitting loneliness and lack of friendship. Her smile at the end marks emotional warmth and growing closeness with Zhang Wen.

Significant Themes

  • Bloodline supremacy as a facade: Real Slytherin loyalty is to power, not ancestry.
  • Bullying as power dynamics: Bullies target the weak, not "impure" blood; strength, not argument, breaks the system.
  • Systemic change: Instead of fighting ideology head-on, find the weakest link and let the structure collapse.
  • Companionship and vulnerability: Even legendary figures struggle with ordinary human connection; learning to be friends is itself meaningful.

Character Interactions

  • Zhang Wen ↔ Fred/George: Teacher-student dynamic evolves into mutual respect; the twins absorb a harsh political lesson.
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Mordred: Father-daughter teamwork; Mordred is capable and teasing, Zhang Wen is protective and detail-oriented.
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Artoria: Quiet, awkward intimacy — two people unsure how to "chat," bonding over shared inexperience and mutual trust.

Ch. 69Window Paper

Chapter Summary: Window Paper

Key Plot Points

  • Mordred returns home from a reconnaissance mission in the Slytherin Common Room, having gathered intelligence on how upper-year students oppress younger ones
  • She presents a hand-drawn map—extremely messy and near-incomprehensible
  • Intelligence report: seventh-years (led by Montague) run an assignment system; at exactly 8pm each night, a fifth-year distributes "work" from upper-years to younger students (9–11pm), who must deliver completed work outside the sixth-year boys' dormitory; upper-years inspect it the next morning and punish poor work
  • The mission premise: these Slytherin children need to be "saved"

Character Developments

  • Zhang Wen & Artoria: Their mutual attraction continues to grow. While Mordred explains the report, they unknowingly lean close together, nearly touching foreheads. Artoria's ears turn red; Zhang Wen's focus completely melts. Both are too shy and cautious to acknowledge their feelings—they are still at the "pretending nothing happened" stage.
  • Mordred: Grows increasingly exasperated with her oblivious parents. She physically hits Zhang Wen with a rolled parchment to break their trance. Internally, she laments being stuck between them and plans to ask the Weasley Brothers for a spell to hurry up their confession.

Significant Themes

  • Unspoken Romance / Awkward Tension: The comedy of two people clearly drawn to each other but unable to admit it; proximity causes both to lose composure
  • Family Dynamic: Mordred plays the frustrated, beleaguered child caught between two love-struck guardians
  • Duty vs. Distraction: Serious intelligence work is repeatedly derailed by personal feelings
  • Humor through Physical Comedy: Paper-tube whack, springing backward, drinking cold tea with perfect poise to hide embarrassment

Character Interactions

  • Mordred ↔ Zhang Wen/Artoria: She reports earnestly, notices they aren't listening, hits Zhang Wen on the head, lectures them, then resumes her report with visible exasperation
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Artoria: Silent, unconscious synchronization—they lean together, smell each other (tea and honey for Artoria), then forcibly separate themselves; after being scolded, their shoulders slowly drift back together "one fist's width" apart
  • Mordred's internal narration reveals she feels this romantic stagnation is exhausting her more than any battlefield

Notable Ending Beat

Despite being caught and scolded, Zhang Wen and Artoria once again quietly move closer together, and Mordred tightens her grip on the parchment tube, prepared to knock them again.

Ch. 70The Kitchen Breach Incident

Summary: The Kitchen Breach Incident

Key Plot Points

  • Breakfast at Hogwarts is noticeably sparse—all four house tables have less than two-thirds the usual food.
  • Students (Harry, Ron, Hermione, and the Weasley twins) notice the shortage and speculate about strikes or kitchen problems.
  • Professor McGonagall investigates and corners Winky, who admits that Assistant Pendragon and her "distant cousin" visited the kitchens from 11 PM to 4 AM under the guise of "gathering intelligence on campus bullying."
  • During those five hours, they ate more than half of the food prepared for breakfast, despite house-elf attempts to stop them.
  • McGonagall reports to Dumbledore, who react with amusement and forbearance, suggesting it's a "good thing" and ordering double lunch instead of punishment.
  • McGonagall confronts Professor Zhang Wen, who apologizes profusely and promises to discipline the two Pendragon ladies strictly, while McGonagall warns him she'll have the kitchens watched.

Character Developments

  • Zhang Wen shows responsibility and accountability, accepting the burden of his household's actions.
  • Dumbledore displays his characteristic leniency and strategic pragmatism, turning the incident into a minor matter.
  • McGonagall balances stern discipline with fairness, giving Zhang Wen a chance rather than escalating.

Significant Themes

  • Humor through everyday magical life: even Hogwarts staff struggle with overindulgent guests.
  • Consequences of unchecked appetite and privilege—echoes of broader entitlement.
  • Authority and responsibility: how staff manage misbehavior without excessive punishment.

Key Character Interactions

  • Ron and Hermione: comedic bickering over food and growth.
  • Fred and George: deadpan counting of sausages, highlighting the shortage's impact.
  • McGonagall and Winky: interrogation with ear-twitching tells.
  • Dumbledore and McGonagall: contrast between his relaxed wisdom and her practical concern.
  • McGonagall and Zhang Wen: a formal but civil confrontation, ending with a promise and a warning.

Ch. 71Half a Loaf of Bread

Summary of "Half a Loaf of Bread"

1. Key Plot Points

  • Zhang Wen returns to his quarters to find Artoria and Mordred eating half an apple each—they split his apple because breakfast wasn't enough for them.
  • Professor McGonagall had informed Zhang Wen that the two stayed in the Hogwarts kitchen from 11 PM until 4 AM and consumed most of the food prepared for the day's breakfast.
  • Zhang Wen confronts them about this. They claim they were "gathering intelligence" from the house-elves about campus bullying.
  • Artoria and Mordred admit they ate most of the food but insist they were "holding back" and left "half a loaf of bread" for the house-elves.
  • Zhang Wen offers to accompany them on future midnight snacks, help control the pace, and pay the kitchen extra to compensate the house-elves.
  • Artoria quietly agrees, her ears turning red. Mordred leaves to find the Weasley Brothers, sensing the atmosphere between them.
  • In the kitchen, Winky proposes increasing food preparation by 50%, as "the appetites of those two are enough to feed an entire Gryffindor House."

2. Character Developments

  • Artoria: Shows a rare moment of embarrassment and softness when Zhang Wen offers to help her, agreeing quietly and apologizing for causing trouble. She promises to hold back next time.
  • Mordred: Displays sharp observation and social awareness by leaving the room to give Zhang Wen and Artoria privacy, despite finding their dynamic uncomfortable.
  • Zhang Wen: Demonstrates care and responsibility—he doesn't simply scold them but offers practical solutions (joining them, paying compensation). He ultimately tells Artoria she doesn't need to restrain herself too much.

3. Significant Themes

  • Found family and care: Zhang Wen's concern is not about punishment but about managing the situation fairly for everyone involved.
  • Humor through absurdity: The running joke of the two powerful characters eating an entire kitchen's worth of food and rationalizing it as "holding back."
  • Moments of quiet intimacy: The subtle emotional beat between Zhang Wen and Artoria—understated but meaningful.

4. Character Interactions

  • Zhang Wen vs. Artoria & Mordred: He tries to be stern but is repeatedly undercut by their matter-of-fact responses and complete lack of guilt.
  • Artoria & Mordred: Display perfect mother-daughter synchronization when they speak in unison ("Half a loaf of bread").
  • Zhang Wen & Artoria: A soft, almost romantic tension develops as he offers to help and she grows flustered, ending with her ears turning red.
  • Mordred: Acts as the observer, silently rolling her eyes and leaving them alone—she is the one who recognizes the shift in atmosphere and gives them space.

Ch. 72The List

Chapter Summary: "The List"

Key Plot Points & Events

  • Classroom setup: Second-year Gryffindor and Slytherin students attend joint Defense Against the Dark Arts class, seated on opposite sides by invisible social convention.
  • Dueling Club announcement: Professor Zhang Wen announces a new training program focused on combat skills—specifically, "how to become as strong as Mordred," including fighting multiple opponents alone.
  • Mordred's demonstration: She crushes an ordinary egg-sized stone to pebbles with her bare hand, electrifying Gryffindors and awing Slytherins.
  • The List: Zhang Wen unrolls a parchment naming specific bullied and ostracized students across all four houses—including Slytherin's own secret victims—with exact details of their incidents (names, circumstances, times, places).
  • Revelation of source: The list came from Mordred and her mother Artoria, who spent five hours in the Hogwarts kitchens the night before, gently questioning house-elves (who see everything but are rarely asked). This was the "fruit" of the "Kitchen Breach Incident" that consumed the school's breakfast.
  • Malfoy's reaction: After Zhang Wen refuses to reveal his sources, Malfoy privately reviews his own misdeeds and resolves to behave better.

Character Developments

  • Mordred: Revels in her reputation; displays pride and theatricality in demonstrating her strength; secretly competent in intelligence-gathering via house-elves.
  • Zhang Wen: Established as a professor with mysterious, far-reaching information channels; strategic in how he dispenses knowledge; frames combat training as accessible to all four houses.
  • Malfoy: Shifts from fear of Mordred to a complex mix of awe, envy, and ambition; ends the chapter intimidated by Zhang Wen's omniscience, deciding to reform his behavior.
  • Slytherin students collectively: Briefly wary of Mordred's presence, but her display of raw power triggers their house's core value—reverence for strength—shifting their unease into eager ambition to join the program.

Significant Themes

  • Power and intimidation: Physical strength (Mordred's stone-crushing) functions as universal proof of capability, transcending house divisions.
  • Slytherin's culture of strength: The chapter explicitly notes that Slytherin's surface ideology of "pure-blood" is really a pursuit of strength—the strong are naturally deemed noble.
  • Knowledge as power: Zhang Wen's list demonstrates that information itself is a form of intimidation and control; the house-elves' secret surveillance grants quiet authority.
  • Opportunity and social mobility: The training program represents a chance for bullied and marginalized students to gain standing within the house hierarchy.
  • Surveillance and consequences: Even the smallest victims (first-years, half-bloods) are now seen and accounted for by authority.

Character Interactions

  • Mordred & Zhang Wen: She stands beside the lectern as living proof of his promises; he casually defers to her demonstration as validation of the curriculum.
  • Fred & George: Their usual banter ("My blood is boiling") shows excitement; they are notably humbled, admitting Zhang Wen's intelligence network surpasses their own.
  • Mordred & students: She scolds the excited Gryffindors ("Don't get so excited—this is only the basics"), enjoying their hero-worship.
  • Malfoy & Slytherin house: Shared expressions of fear-excitement-envy; Malfoy's quiet self-audit of his "small misdeeds" marks an internal turning point.
  • Zhang Wen & Slytherin: His revelation of their house secrets plants awe, vigilance, and fear—redefining how the Slytherins perceive him.
    Tone/Notable style: The chapter uses clipped, fragmented dialogue lines for rapid back-and-forth exchanges; it carries a darkly comic note (the list as a byproduct of a kitchen raid) while building toward a more disciplined student body under Zhang Wen's scheming care.

Ch. 73Golden Leaves

Summary: Chapter "Golden Leaves"

1. Key Plot Points & Events

  • Following the announcement of the key training list in class, the entire classroom dynamic shifts: Slytherins are shockingly cooperative (Quiet, eager to answer questions), while Gryffindors (even Ron and the Weasley twins) are newly enthusiastic and taking notes seriously.
  • After class, Fred and George try to pump Mordred for insider information but fail; Mordred informs Zhang Wen that Artoria is waiting for him in the corridor.
  • Artoria admits she eavesdropped on his class. She explains that his public revelation of Slytherin's secret matters created genuine "shock" in the students, forcing them to reassess him.
  • Reflecting on her Camelot past, Artoria says that someone like Zhang Wen—who would step forward and speak for the bullied and isolated—might have changed how things ended back then.
  • Zhang Wen picks a fallen golden leaf off Artoria's shoulder; both pause uncomfortably at the fleeting closeness. Artoria asks for the leaf and quietly keeps it in her notebook.
  • Professor Flitwick happens by, notices the scene, says nothing, hums a cheerful tune, and leaves. Artoria's ears turn red.
  • They walk back together, physically closer than before, with Artoria softly thanking him three times (for comfort, for the leaf, and for his work in class).

2. Character Developments

  • Zhang Wen: Shows boldness in using his insider knowledge to humble Slytherins; proves he is willing to bear pressure to protect bullied students. Around Artoria, he becomes shy and flustered (blushing, awkward pauses), but also quietly bolder—gradually increasing their close physical distance.
  • Artoria: Reveals a deeper emotional layer—regret over Camelot and a longing for someone who would have stood up for the weak. She shows an unprecedented, genuine "girl's smile" free of kingly/teacher personas, and shows affection by keeping the leaf and moving a hair closer to him.
  • Mordred: Playfully teases Zhang Wen about blushing, acts as an enabling daughter for the relationship, and steers the Weasley twins away.
  • Students (briefly): Slytherins humbled into compliance; Gryffindor twins and Ron show renewed (comical) motivation.

3. Significant Themes

  • Courage & moral responsibility: Zhang Wen's willingness to publicly confront injustice is framed as rare and world-changing—especially contrasted against Artoria's tragic Camelot past.
  • Regret and "what might have been": Artoria's reflection posits that even a single person willing to speak up could alter a doomed destiny.
  • Quiet intimacy and romance: The chapter is built on subtle, wordless romantic beats—stolen glances, a pause over a leaf, a faint smile, a tightened notebook grip, and the reduction of physical distance from one fist to a third of one.
  • Fate and healing: Zhang Wen offers that their meeting was "fate's" purpose, softly addressing Artoria's old wounds.

4. Character Interactions

  • Zhang Wen & Artoria: Core interaction—her sincere praise of his teaching, their shared tender moment with the leaf, and her three quiet "thank yous," marking a clear step forward in their relationship.
  • Zhang Wen & Mordred: Playful, teasing, and warm—Mordred exposes his blushing and orchestrates the meeting.
  • Artoria & Mordred: Mordred relays information with knowing annoyance, acting as the bridge for the romance.
  • Flitwick & them: Brief comedic cameo—observes the scene, wisely says nothing, and cheerfully moves on, causing Artoria embarrassment.

Ch. 74Encirclement

1. Key Plot Points and Events

  • Mordred patrols Hogwarts at night with Fred and George, using the Marauder’s Map to spot bullying incidents.
  • She detects first-year Ellie Perkins cornered in an abandoned storeroom by three seventh-year Slytherins: Avery, Rosier, and Yaxley.
  • Fred is sent to fetch Professor Zhang Wen; George stays as backup; Mordred kicks the door off its hinges and confronts the Slytherins.
  • Mordred recovers Ellie’s wand, hides the girl behind her, and reveals she has detailed evidence of the bullies’ past misconduct.
  • She gives them a choice: leave and stop bullying, or she will give the evidence to their Head of House and the dean, potentially getting them expelled.
  • The Slytherins laugh, citing their powerful pure-blood families (the Sacred Twenty-Eight), Snape’s support, and Hogwarts’ dependence on their family donations. They dismiss the evidence as useless.
  • They order Mordred to leave, but she refuses and reaches for her wand.
  • More than a dozen seventh-year Slytherins arrive as reinforcements; their leader tells Mordred that sending for help was “too late.”

2. Character Developments

  • Mordred: Shows growing vigilance, bravery, and protectiveness. She is learning to read suspicious patterns on the map and is willing to stand alone against overwhelming odds. She keeps her temper partly controlled, but her defiance remains reckless.
  • The Weasley Twins: Act as loyal, strategic allies — one fetches help, the other stays as backup. They are cautious and aware of the Slytherins’ political power.
  • Avery, Rosier, and Yaxley: Display arrogance, entitlement, and collective intimidation. They believe family status places them above punishment.
  • Mordred’s enemies: Reveal themselves as organized — the arrival of a dozen reinforcements suggests premeditation and a network of older Slytherin students.

3. Significant Themes

  • Privilege and Immunity: The Sacred Twenty-Eight families expect to escape consequences regardless of evidence.
  • Bullying and Institutional Corruption: The anti-bullying system is undermined by wealth, blood status, and faculty favoritism.
  • Courage vs. Overwhelming Force: Mordred chooses to fight even when outnumbered, highlighting both heroism and potential recklessness.
  • Moral Leadership vs. Systemic Limits: One person’s vigilance is not enough when the institution protects the powerful.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred & The Twins: Tactical, trusting, and efficient — they work as a team.
  • Mordred & Ellie Perkins: Protective and reassuring; she returns the girl’s wand and physically shields her.
  • Mordred & The Three Slytherins: Tense, confrontational negotiation that quickly turns into mockery and threats.
  • Mordred & The Reinforcements: Escalation from isolated bullying to a coordinated show of force, leaving Mordred isolated and outnumbered.

Ch. 75Rebellion Against My Magnificent Father

Summary of the Chapter

Plot / Key Events

  • Mordred and George are cornered in a Hogwarts storage room by more than a dozen Slytherin seventh-years. A frightened first-year girl is with them.
  • The Slytherins surround them in a practiced formation, implying they have done this before.
  • George suggests fetching Professor McGonagall, but Mordred tells him to stay still; Fred has already gone to get Father.
  • The Slytherin leader, Avery, demands the first-year girl apologize for disrespecting them in the common room.
  • Avery then threatens Mordred’s father, Professor Zhang Wen, warning that he must “be careful” — at night, in Diagon Alley, even while sleeping — and that no Hogwarts professor is safe forever.
  • Mordred has George write down the threats.
  • Mordred refuses to back down, spits on the ground at Avery’s feet, and declares: “I alone am enough.”
  • Mordred summons a broad, dark crimson sword out of thin air. It is named Clarent — its full title: “Rebellion Against My Magnificent Father.”
  • The sword’s presence terrifies the Slytherins. Mordred takes a step forward, the blade glowing with red arcs of heat, and the passage ends with them frozen in fear.

Character Developments

  • Mordred is shown as fiercely protective, defiant, and unafraid of overwhelming odds. The summoning of Clarent hints at a legendary or dangerous inheritance and a personal rebellion against a powerful father figure. Mordred is not merely a student; there is something ancient and ruthless beneath the surface.
  • George is anxious and loyal but trusts Mordred’s judgment. He follows instructions despite his fear.
  • Avery and the Slytherins are arrogant bullies who rely on numbers and intimidation, but they crack the moment genuine power is revealed.
  • The first-year girl is vulnerable and traumatized, clinging to Mordred for protection.

Significant Themes

  • Bullying and institutional abuse of power at Hogwarts.
  • Protection of family and the willingness to fight back.
  • The contrast between borrowed authority and true power.
  • Redemption/defiance through the symbolism of the sword “Rebellion Against My Magnificent Father” — a weapon named after overthrowing a tyrant father.

Character Interactions

  • Mordred calmly directs George while the Slytherins threaten her. She turns Avery’s threats against her father into a trigger for violent defiance.
  • Avery escalates from insults to veiled assassination threats; Mordred responds with contempt and action, not words.
  • The dynamic between Mordred and the first-year girl is protective and silencing — she speaks through action.

Ch. 76Shocking Words

Summary: “Shocking Words”

1. Key Plot Points

  • Mordred draws Clarent, unleashing a powerful red arc that triggers Hogwarts’ ancient defensive alarm: a deep “heartbeat” sound and rows of enchanted suits of armor marching in from both ends of the corridor, armed and ready.
  • The Slytherin seventh-years (Avery, Rosier, Yaxley, etc.) realize the castle has classified Mordred’s magic as hostile and are frozen in fear.
  • Professors rush to the scene: Zhang Wen arrives first, then Artoria, followed by Dumbledore, McGonagall, Sprout, Flitwick, Filch, and finally Snape.
  • Mordred refuses to sheathe Clarent because the Slytherins threatened Zhang Wen. Artoria calmly insists she put it away, saying “at Hogwarts, a sword should not be the solution.”
  • Dumbledore investigates, and Avery claims Mordred broke in and used a “Dark magical weapon,” while also invoking his family’s pureblood status and claiming Snape would support them.
  • Avery makes the fatal, arrogant mistake of openly insulting Snape: implying Snape is only Head of Slytherin because of the Sacred Twenty-Eight’s tolerance, calling him a half-blood who owes his position to old families.
  • The room falls into absolute silence; Snape, expressionless but with dangerous eyes, steps into the storeroom.

2. Character Developments

  • Mordred: Shows fierce, impulsive protectiveness toward Zhang Wen, ready to kill those who threatened him. She hesitates to obey Zhang Wen but slightly softens under Artoria’s calm authority—though she doesn’t fully yield until the moment is interrupted.
  • Artoria: Remains ice-calm and authoritative, reinforcing her moral stance: swords are not the answer within Hogwarts. Her presence alone cools the room.
  • Zhang Wen: Acts as the steady father figure, trying to de-escalate Mordred’s rage.
  • Dumbledore: Masterfully controlled; he ignores provocations, gently reframes the situation, and steers the inquiry toward the Slytherins’ actual wrongdoing.
  • Avery: Arrogant and politically tone-deaf; he digs his own grave by insulting Snape in front of everyone, revealing the pureblood entitlement of the Sacred Twenty-Eight.
  • Snape: Initially composed, but Avery’s words ignite something cold and dangerous beneath his blank expression—signaling serious consequences.

3. Significant Themes

  • Authority and Justice: Hogwarts’ defense system reacts impartially; Dumbledore seeks fair inquiry rather than hasty judgment; Artoria insists on restraint.
  • Family Loyalty and Protectiveness: Mordred’s rage stems from perceived threats to her father; Zhang Wen and Artoria both try to guide her.
  • Pureblood Arrogance vs. Merit: Avery’s reliance on family status and his contempt for Snape’s half-blood heritage highlight Slytherin’s internal politics and class prejudice.
  • Consequences of Words: Avery’s “shocking words” against Snape—not the sword—become the true turning point, ensuring his downfall.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred & Zhang Wen: A tense father-daughter confrontation: he orders her to sheathe Clarent; she refuses out of anger; he repeats more firmly.
  • Mordred & Artoria: A silent battle of wills—Artoria’s calm, weighty command nearly prevails, showing her unique influence over Mordred.
  • Avery & Dumbledore: Avery tries to deflect with pureblood politics; Dumbledore gently but firmly dismantles his excuses.
  • Avery & Snape: Avery publicly insults Snape, expecting support; the room’s frozen reaction and Snape’s unreadable fury become the chapter’s cliffhanger.

Ch. 77Today, I Escaped Death

Chapter Summary: "Today, I Escaped Death"

Key Plot Points

  • Snape confronts Avery over the claim that he became Head of Slytherin House only through the "tacit approval of the Sacred Twenty-Eight." He systematically dismantles the argument, forcing Avery to admit he cannot cite any procedures, documents, or meetings.
  • Dumbledore publicly settles the matter: as Headmaster, he alone holds the authority to appoint Snape. The position has nothing to do with outside families or blood-purity politics.
  • Snape then pressures Avery to clarify whether his words were his family's position or his personal opinion — either way, Avery faces serious consequences from his father. Avery cannot answer.
  • Dumbledore turns to Mordred, who is still holding Clarent. He acknowledges the sword's immense, destructive magic and asks her to calm down.
  • Mordred recounts the Slytherin students' threats in detail: they threatened to send her and a first-year girl to St. Mungo's, and threatened Professor Zhang Wen's safety (warning him to be careful at home, at night, in Diagon Alley, drinking tea, and sleeping).
  • Dumbledore promises maximum punishment under Hogwarts rules — including expulsion, Ministry investigation for the threats against Zhang Wen, and personal review of all submitted bullying evidence.
  • Mordred, moved by Dumbledore's genuine promise, lowers and dissipates Clarent.
  • She then coldly tells the Slytherin students they "got a second chance at life" — a statement delivered as fact, not threat.
  • The chapter ends with Zhang Wen silently taking Artoria's hand; she returns the gesture. The suits of armor outside remain vigilant, and Hogwarts's alarm falls silent.

Character Developments

  • Mordred: Demonstrates terrifying power held in check. Her decision to stand down comes not from fear but from experiencing someone genuinely caring — Dumbledore's sincere promise protects her, the first-year girl, and her father. This is a rare moment of trust for her.
  • Dumbledore: Firm and authoritative, publicly affirming Snape's legitimacy and taking a clear stand against pure-blood entitlement. His promise to Mordred is specific and earnest.
  • Snape: Calm, controlled, and quietly devastating in his interrogation of Avery. Shows the faintest trace of anger for the first time, but remains measured and precise.
  • Avery/Rosier/Yaxley and the seventh-years: Completely humiliated and terrified, physically collapsing as they realize they genuinely almost died. Their sense of pure-blood superiority is shattered.
  • McGonagall, Sprout, Flitwick: All visibly angered by the threats, showing solidarity with Zhang Wen.

Significant Themes

  • Institutional authority vs. blood-purity politics: Dumbledore decisively rejects the Sacred Twenty-Eight's claimed influence over Hogwarts appointments.
  • Care and trust: Mordred's restraint is enabled by the first genuine, concrete demonstration that adults will protect her and those she loves.
  • Consequences: The chapter emphasizes that threats and bullying carry real weight, and that the students' actions nearly cost them their lives.
  • Restraint as strength: Mordred's choice not to act is framed as a gift — one she makes explicitly conditional on Dumbledore keeping his word.

Character Interactions

  • Snape & Avery: A brutal Socratic interrogation that reduces Avery to silence and collapse.
  • Snape & Dumbledore: A scripted public exchange intended to settle the matter permanently, with Dumbledore fully backing his professor.
  • Mordred & Dumbledore: The emotional core — Mordred recounts the threats verbatim; Dumbledore listens, then makes a binding-style promise that persuades her to stand down.
  • Mordred & the Slytherin students: A chilling final statement marking her as someone who spared them, not someone they defeated.
  • Zhang Wen & Artoria: A wordless moment of mutual support, quietly grounding the chapter's emotional stakes.

Ch. 78Malfoy's Shock

Summary: "Malfoy's Shock"

1. Key Plot Points and Events

  • The confrontation in the storage room concludes. Dumbledore takes charge and orders all involved Slytherin seventh-years to remain in place.
  • Professor McGonagall escorts Ellie to the Hospital Wing. Before leaving, Ellie thanks Mordred and is told to come to her if trouble arises again.
  • The scene is witnessed by a crowd of students, including Malfoy, who observes everything from Mordred's intervention to Dumbledore's confirmation that Snape's authority as Head of House comes from Dumbledore himself, not the Sacred Twenty-Eight.
  • Zhang Wen publicly thanks Fred and George, offering two rewards: a paid trip and one personal request each from him.
  • Fred and George excitedly depart, immediately planning a trip to Paris.

2. Character Developments

Mordred: Shows unexpected kindness when Ellie thanks her—freezing awkwardly before responding. She dismisses her own role ("Don't let yourself get surrounded alone again") and deflects questions about her sword, claiming it was an illusion.
Malfoy: Undergoes significant growth after witnessing the upperclassmen's foolishness. He openly admits he used to be "somewhat stupid" and resolves to rely on his own intelligence rather than family background. He warns his friends to distance themselves from Avery's crowd, applying his father's lesson about the dangers of befriending stupid people. Pansy notably views him with newfound appreciation.
Fred and George: Mature through being formally thanked and rewarded for their courage by Zhang Wen, who emphasizes that their actions were genuinely brave, not obligatory.

3. Significant Themes

  • Intelligence vs. Stupidity: Malfoy's commentary contrasts smart enemies (who calculate accurately) with stupid allies (who drag you down indiscriminately). The chapter suggests that family status means little without personal wisdom.
  • Authority and Power: Dumbledore's intervention reinforces that institutional authority comes from legitimate sources, not blood status. Avery's Sacred Twenty-Eight argument collapses instantly.
  • Rewarding Right Action: Zhang Wen articulates that children need positive feedback when they do the right thing, otherwise they may stop doing so.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred & Ellie: A brief but meaningful moment—Ellie's small gesture of thanks and Mordred's awkward acceptance, ending with genuine concern for her safety.
  • Dumbledore & Avery: Dumbledore's gentle but firm warning silences Avery's protest, demonstrating his control.
  • Malfoy & His Friends: An unusually serious conversation where Malfoy lectures Crabbe, Goyle, and Pansy on avoiding the "stupid" upperclassmen. Notably, Crabbe defends Malfoy's intelligence, and Pansy shows real approval.
  • Zhang Wen & Fred/George: A formal thank-you that visibly moves the twins, followed by their childlike excitement about the rewards and immediate trip planning.

Ch. 79Like a Mother

Summary: Like a Mother (Chapter)

Key Plot Points

  • Zhang Wen, Artoria, and Mordred return to their residence late at night after the day's incident, while Dumbledore and Snape remain to handle the aftermath.
  • Zhang Wen praises Mordred for her conduct: protecting a girl, giving enemies two choices, staying calm, and waiting for Dumbledore instead of attacking—calling it "law enforcement, not revenge."
  • Artoria unexpectedly performs her first maternal gesture: she gently smooths Mordred's tousled hair, tucks a strand behind her ear, and softly says, "You worked hard."
  • Overwhelmed, Mordred flees to her room and slams the door.
  • Zhang Wen tells Artoria she "looked especially beautiful" when gentle with Mordred, flustering her deeply; she retreats to her room.
  • The chapter ends with all three in private: Mordred buries her face in her pillow, admitting she's happy; Artoria hides a gold leaf in her notebook and draws a tiny smiley face beside it; Zhang Wen smiles alone on the sofa.

Character Developments

  • Mordred: Receives genuine praise and maternal affection for the first time. Though she protests, "I'm not a child anymore," she privately confesses she is "actually really happy." Her emotional walls begin to soften.
  • Artoria: Takes her first step into a mother/daughter relationship with Mordred—something impossible in Camelot, where they were only king and traitor. She is visibly moved by Zhang Wen's compliment, revealing hidden softness and vulnerability beneath her regal exterior.
  • Zhang Wen: Acts as a bridge between mother and daughter, offering guidance and encouragement. His sincere compliment to Artoria shows his deepening feelings.

Significant Themes

  • Motherhood and reconciliation: Artoria's first tender gesture toward Mordred, healing a relationship that never existed in Camelot
  • Emotional vulnerability: All three characters struggle to express or accept affection, hiding behind embarrassment and flustered retreats
  • The quiet aftermath: How small, gentle moments carry more weight than grand actions
  • Healing family bonds: The slow, awkward process of becoming a real family

Character Interactions

  • Zhang Wen → Mordred: Earnest praise delivered with seriousness; Mordred hides her pleasure but clearly values it
  • Artoria → Mordred: A wordless, tender hair-straightening gesture; Mordred freezes, blushes, and escapes
  • Zhang Wen → Artoria: A bold, sincere compliment that leaves her speechless, blushing, and retreating "at a pace much faster than usual"
  • Private moments: Mordred's muffled confession to her pillow; Artoria's shy act of drawing a smiley face by the leaf; Zhang Wen's own flushed cheeks and uncontainable smile
    The chapter is a quiet, emotionally rich character piece focused on small gestures, unspoken feelings, and the fragile beginnings of a mother-daughter bond.

Ch. 80Aftermath

Summary: "Aftermath"

1. Key Plot Points

  • Rumors about Mordred's role in the storage room incident spread through Hogwarts in exaggerated versions (from "brave teaching assistant" to "took on a dozen seventh-years alone").
  • Bullied lower-year students begin approaching Mordred to report abuse; she starts collecting reports and working with Fred and George to address them.
  • Fred and George receive 17 new bullying reports in one week (including 8 from Slytherin, as expelled students proved reporting actually works).
  • A faction of older students—including Gryffindors and Ravenclaws—turns hostile toward Mordred, viewing her as an "outsider" violating Hogwarts's thousand-year tradition of upperclassmen disciplining younger students.
  • A Gryffindor seventh-year calls Fred and George "traitors" for helping Mordred; the brothers retaliate by slipping Puking Pastilles into his and his friends' pumpkin juice.
  • Zhang Wen, worried about Mordred's isolation, proposes a new Dueling Club format: mixed-year team battles (one older student + one or two younger students per team).
  • Artoria approves; the proposal is written up jointly.
  • Harry, Ron, and Hermione enthusiastically endorse the idea; Ron decides to write his mother about how good the new professor is.
  • Professor McGonagall smiles at Zhang Wen—an extremely rare event—and offers to help arrange Gryffindor student lists.
  • Snape, having witnessed McGonagall's approval, anonymously sends Zhang Wen a bottle of his own invigorating potion.

2. Character Developments

  • Mordred: Grows into an active protector role, systematizing anti-bullying efforts; her reputation expands but also draws resentment as she challenges entrenched traditions.
  • Fred and George Weasley: Evolve into Mordred's intelligence network, taking pride in their work; they refuse to cave to "traitor" accusations and respond with characteristic prank retaliation.
  • Zhang Wen: Demonstrates proactive problem-solving and genuine care for student welfare; his concern shifts from individual incidents to systemic school culture, proposing structural solutions.
  • Artoria: Continues as the serious, pragmatic counterpart—appreciating Zhang Wen's solutions and supporting him without excessive praise.
  • Professor McGonagall: Shows rare public approval of a new professor, signaling trust and endorsement.
  • Snape: Silently acknowledges Zhang Wen's worth through an anonymous gesture, without changing his outward demeanor.

3. Significant Themes

  • Tradition vs. reform: The tension between "how things have always been" and the moral right to change them; older students defend hierarchical discipline as tradition, while Mordred's group sees it as abuse.
  • Loyalty vs. doing what's right: Gryffindors accusing the Weasley brothers of betrayal for holding their own House accountable; the brothers argue true courage means justice, not covering for one's own.
  • Outsider status: Mordred's legitimacy is questioned because she isn't a real student; the chapter explores whether outsiders can legitimately reform a closed institution.
  • Breaking down barriers: The mixed-year team battle idea directly addresses inter-year hostility by creating structured cooperation rather than fighting it head-on.
  • Allies and quiet support: Change succeeds through a coalition—students, faculty (McGonagall, Snape, Artoria), and the institution's own mechanisms.

4. Character Interactions

  • Mordred ↔ First-year boy: A timid student reports extortion; Mordred reassures him with a concrete plan (bringing "the Weasley Brothers").
  • Mordred ↔ Fred & George: Efficient working relationship; brothers deliver intelligence, Mordred takes action.
  • Fred & George ↔ Gryffindor seventh-years: Verbal conflict ("traitors") resolved via Puking Pastilles prank; brothers remain unapologetic.
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Artoria: Collaborative planning; Zhang Wen proposes, Artoria analyzes and endorses; their dynamic is mutual respect and efficiency.
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Harry, Ron, Hermione: Students express genuine gratitude; Ron's earnest desire to tell his mother highlights Zhang Wen's positive impact on student lives.
  • Zhang Wen ↔ Professor McGonagall: Brief but significant—McGonagall's smile and offer of assistance signal institutional approval.
  • Snape (observing): Silent witness to McGonagall's approval; judges Zhang Wen's success by that measure and responds with an anonymous gift.
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