"Was that the end?"
"If that was all there was to the ending, wasn't it a little too slapdash?"
"Huh? How could you say that? I put a lot of care into planning this ending! Besides, after everything they went through, it would be terribly unfair if the princess and prince still couldn't live happily together."
"Mm, that's true, but shouldn't reality be cruel...? The princess might never get to see her prince again, and the prince might never return in his entire life. Besides, after waiting that long, wouldn't her feelings change? What would she eat?"
At the table, a black-haired Little Loli was stuffing her mouth with the pastries on Feather Pen's desk, her little hands flipping through the freshly stapled draft as her big, round eyes skimmed rapidly over it.
She paid no attention whatsoever to Feather Pen's cheeks, which had already puffed up in anger.
"And another thing..."
As though she had discovered something else, the Little Loli innocently pointed a small finger at the contents of the draft.
"How did so many years just zip past before anyone noticed? You need to take this seriously too, Feather Pen. There were clearly loads and loads of things you could've written in between! Like, while she was waiting, the little princess could've fallen into a pit and broken her leg. Or she could've waited so long that she suddenly turned evil, then swooshed into the air and charged off to bravely fight the dragon!"
She jumped down from her chair and threw several quick punches.
"Then the princess wreaked havoc in the dragon's lair! She punched the dragon, kicked its minions, and rescued the prince in an incredibly cool pose! Then she patted him on the head and said, 'Idiot! You really embarrassed yourself! In the end,