Starting from The Smiling, Proud Wanderer, Infinite Passive Auras
Chapter 368

The plot was too scattered, with no sense of immersion at all

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Duan Yu shrugged and said, "To be honest, I don't know what I'm supposed to do either."

These are all system tasks, what can he do?

From the moment he transmigrated to this world, the system kept assigning him tasks, turning him into a complete slave to those tasks. He had nowhere to complain about his suffering!

"How many times have I told you? When I hit you, you just give up and keep fighting back. In the end, you suffer, and I suffer too!"

What kind of ridiculous reason is that? The Captain and the others were speechless. What did they mean by saying they'd surrender if they were attacked?

"Do you admit defeat or not?" Duan Yu asked the Captain, looking at him with a slight headache.

"I surrender!" the Captain said, then turned and left.

What can I do if he won't admit defeat? This guy is absolutely insane.

You're always causing trouble for the S.H.I.E.L.D.. At least give a reason for causing trouble, right? You don't have one at all.

They're just looking for trouble for the sake of looking for trouble; the key is, they beat you until you admit defeat and then leave.

But to call them utterly wicked or evil wouldn't be an accusation.

Even if he controlled Hydra and became Hydra leader.

But what is Hydra doing these days? Helping old ladies cross the street, punishing the wicked and cracking down on criminals? Is this what Hydra should be doing?

Three aircraft carriers were in the sky, and although the constant firing of their cannons looked intimidating, it was all just noise; the shells all landed in the sea and caused no damage whatsoever.

Thor was unconvinced, but was so badly beaten that he became depressed and returned to Asgard, where he has not yet returned.

The Hulk now runs away whenever he sees Duan Yu; otherwise, he'll be " Northern Darkness Northern Darkness " (a technique that causes Hulk to revert from Hulk form to Dr. Banner).

After several encounters, Banner was quite friendly to Duan Yu; basically, as long as Duan Yu was Duan Yu, the Hulk wouldn't dare to show up.

In just over half a year, Duan Yu defeated most of the heroes and villains in the Marvel.

Now all that's missing is the Mage of Kamar-Taj, All-Father Odin of Asgard, Captain Marvel who's wandering the universe, and Thanos his the Snap.

As for other characters such as Scarlet Witch and Doctor Strange, it's not their turn to appear yet.

Duan Yu waved his hand, and a bolt of Thunder flashed as he disappeared.

The Captain picked up the shield, went to Nick and the others, and asked, "What do we do?"

"Next time you run into him, don't hide. Just admit defeat. This guy's not right in the head. Just treat him like you've run into a lunatic," Nick said with a dark face.

"That's a lunatic." Barton flexed his wrist; the bizarre position he'd been in was incredibly uncomfortable, and the paralyzing effect of the Silk made him feel utterly terrible.

Seeing this, Ling Yi didn't know what to say.

I tapped the keyboard and switched to another screen.

This is the world of "Drawing Sword," where Hung Chun-nam is wreaking havoc on the battlefield.

Hung Chun-nam Sweep the enemy lines at breakneck speed, his bullets flying wildly in all directions, leaving enemies to fall in droves wherever he went.

Watching all this from behind, Li Yunlong stroked a heavy machine gun, his face full of worry.

"Three battles in a row, and my specially brewed weapon hasn't fired a single shot or cannon shot. The enemy has been completely wiped out by Monk Wei alone. We can't let him take action next time, otherwise our specially brewed weapon will become nothing more than logistics troops!"

"Battalion Commander, let Monk Wei fight here, and we'll go attack Xiaoke Village," the chief of staff said.

"No, we're not going. There are only a few dozen enemies there, not even enough for a few shells. By the time we get there, they'll probably be long gone."

"What kind of nonsense is this? With this kind of fighting style, Monk Wei could march straight to the enemy's home base."

"That's great, let the little... enemy know what it feels like to be invaded."

Ling Yi watched it with great interest; although it had the feel of a ridiculous drama, it was still very enjoyable to watch.

At that moment, a massive soul appeared before Ling Yi.

" Whitebeard, who died from his injuries while saving his son at Summit War, had a hobby of adopting sons."

"Ha ha ha, Director, be my son!" the Whitebeard laughed loudly.

"You really dare to say that."

Ling Yi tapped the keyboard a few times and said, "If you like having sons so much, go and have some monsters as your sons! Ultraman world, here we go!"

Whitebeard's size and Combat wouldn't be suitable for most worlds, but the Ultraman world would be a good fit.

Whitebeard vs. Godzilla? Or Whitebeard vs. Ultraman? Who cares, just beat them both up, and then they'll all yell "Oto-san!"

"The plot of this world is somewhat scattered, and the main storyline is unclear, or perhaps there isn't a main storyline at all."

As for the Protagonist, he's currently in an endless cycle of dying and coming back to life.

The world the Protagonist travels to is the current world.

However, the Protagonist's transmigration has nothing to do with his Transmigration Matters Management Office; he transmigrated from another Parallel World.

However, the location they found themselves in was rather unfortunate; they ended up deep in the ocean.

He was drowned the moment he transmigrated, and what's even more tragic is that his cheat ability is Infinite Resurrection System.

It's unlikely we'll be able to break out of the loop and start the story anytime soon.

Ling Yi felt that this world didn't seem suitable for him to stay in for long.

A disjointed plot makes it difficult for readers to connect with the story, which is not a good thing.

After thinking it over, Ling Yi simply unsealed his power and directly created World Passage.

A moment later, Yin Wanqing emerged from the World Passage carrying Mengmeng.

"Their popularity has declined!" Yin Wanqing said first after appearing.

"Okay!" Ling Yi nodded.

Then he shared the memories of this world with Yin Wanqing.

"Forget about worlds like this in the future; this kind of world setting isn't suitable for grinding through the story."

"Dad, can I play on the Computer?" Mengmeng asked, pointing to the Computer on the table.

"This can't be played around with carelessly." Ling Yi shook his head.

"But I find it really interesting," Mengmeng said, darting out of Yin Wanqing's arms and sitting down at the Computer desk.

"It can actually arrange for people to travel to different worlds." Mengmeng's face showed an extremely interested expression, and then she started typing on the Computer.

Ling Yi had almost forgotten that this daughter he'd picked up for free seemed to be quite extraordinary.

"Since you want to leave, then let Mengmeng play here. Don't treat her like a child; I trust she'll handle it."

"How's things going on your end?" Ling Yi asked.

"Things have come to a temporary halt, but I've gained a lot of inspiration from Mengmeng, which has helped me refine some of my previous ideas."

"Perhaps I should go back to the post-apocalyptic world." Ling Yi recalled the mysterious law that he had always neglected in the previous post-apocalyptic world.

Yin Wanqing shook her head and said, "It's not the right time yet. Like I said, without enough popularity and Karmic Luck, everything else is useless."

After thinking for a moment, Yin Wanqing added, "Right now, everything is based on popularity and the plot."

"Sigh, if only you were the author, the problem wouldn't just be the plot; the author's writing style and everything else would be terrible."

Yin Wanqing shook her head and smiled wryly, "It's not entirely like that. You may not understand the growth process of an online novel author. An online novel author goes through several stages from novice to gradually mature."

"Beginner, imitation, bottleneck, style, maturity!"

"The worst stage isn't the novice stage. Novice authors are full of enthusiasm, and all sorts of creative ideas come to mind, so although the writing style might not be very good, the storyline can be very interesting."

"The worst stage is actually the style period, which is the stage when the author is gradually forming their own writing style."

"The author stops imitating, the thought process gradually becomes formulaic, and the author develops their own writing habits. At this stage, the author gradually blocks out the reader's thoughts and becomes completely immersed in their own world."

"It's a terrible thing for an author to become detached from their readers; an author should always serve their readers."

Ling Yi asked helplessly, "So?"

"So, this is where we come in. We need to do our best to keep the plot exciting and make sure the Uncle doesn't go astray."

"This is really annoying!" Ling Yi was extremely displeased, and his desire to Boundary Breaking grew even stronger.

"Don't be impatient. Once this Uncle author gets through this phase, he'll become a true online novelist, and things will be much easier for us all."

Just then, a somewhat lewd-looking soul suddenly appeared.

" Wei Xiaobao, do you know your crime!" Before the man could speak, Mengmeng stood on the chair and scolded him.

"You wouldn't happen to be the director, would you? Don't talk nonsense. Let me tell you, I, Wei Xiaobao, have a clear conscience and a clear conscience. If you say I'm guilty, produce the evidence first."

Wei Xiaobao squinted at Mengmeng from head to toe with a sly look, his gaze pausing several times.

His gaze caused Ling Yi, Yin Wanqing, and Mengmeng's faces to darken.

"1942 world, identity, a fat pig with four broken legs that Landlord Fan found on the road, golden finger, Infinite Resurrection System," Ling Yi said in an icy voice.

Wei Xiaobao was stunned. A pig, with four broken legs, capable of endless Resurrection? Wouldn't that mean it would be endlessly slaughtered and turned into an inexhaustible food source?

" Wei Xiaobao, this world is suffering from a famine, and the people are starving and eating dirt. I believe that once you travel there, you will be able to save many lives!"

Ling Yi looked at Mengmeng and asked, "Do you know how to operate it?"

"Tch, Dad, have you forgotten what I used to do? This toy's rules are really simple."

As Mengmeng spoke, she operated the device, and the next moment, a Transmigration Passage appeared in front of Wei Xiaobao.

"I was wrong, please forgive me..."

Ling Yi kicked it inside.

"That person's gaze is so annoying," Mengmeng said angrily.

"Alright, stop thinking about him. Are you going to stay here and have fun, or come back to the Ling Realm with me?" Yin Wanqing asked.

"I'll play for a while first; this world is really interesting."

"Alright, go back to the Ling Realm when you're done playing."

After speaking, Yin Wanqing looked at Ling Yi and asked, "Are you leaving now?"

"Hmm, there's really no way to progress through the story in this world. Continuing is just a waste of time, and I feel like I'm not really involved. I'd better give up."

"Dad, are you leaving?"

"Yes, you can play, but don't change the main rules!"

"Uh-huh!"

"I'm gone!" Ling Yi took a deep breath, and his figure disappeared.

Mengmeng stared blankly in the direction Ling Yi had left.

"What's wrong?"

"Daddy isn't happy at all," Mengmeng said.

Yin Wanqing nodded. "Yes, if Mengmeng hadn't appeared, things might have been even worse."

"Is that so?"

"Certainly!"

I want to help my dad, but I don't know how!

Yin Wanqing ruffled her hair and smiled with satisfaction.

Yin Wanqing knew perfectly well that Ling Yi was unhappy. But in order to Boundary Breaking, Ling Yi had to travel through one world after another. Yin Wanqing could see that Ling Yi was very tired.

It was Mengmeng's appearance that gave Ling Yi hope, and also gave her hope.

" Uncle, please stop using the surname Ren!"

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