Ch. 21What if It Could Predict the Future?

Copies of Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, Part One arrived at Hogwarts, and Harry's friends discovered that its account of his childhood and school life was accurate. Dumbledore and Snape debated whether the forthcoming second half could predict the future, leaving Dumbledore uncertain as he watched the dusk.

  • Owls delivered copies of Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, Part One to students, and Hermione, Ron, and Harry began reading them.
  • Harry confirmed to his classmates that he had lived in a cupboard under the stairs for eleven years, and Hermione reassured him that he was not a freak.
  • Ron and Harry discussed the book's portrayal of Malfoy, who angrily denied its account when Harry challenged him about their meeting on the train.
  • At the Slytherin table, Malfoy dismissed the book as rubbish and suspected Dumbledore was behind it.
  • Dumbledore told Snape that the second half of the book would soon be published, and they debated whether it could predict the future.
  • After Snape left, Dumbledore watched the darkening sky and quietly repeated, "Predict the future..."

Ch. 22Prime Minister: I Stand with Great Britain

The Prime Minister refused Fudge’s demand to ban Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone, arguing that the book was helping Britain’s economy. He ordered a campaign to promote it at home and abroad, hoping it could revive Britain’s cultural influence and strengthen his own position.

  • Fudge visited the Prime Minister and demanded that the government ban and confiscate Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone to protect the Wizarding World’s secrets.
  • The Prime Minister refused, citing the book’s sales, economic benefits, and his duty to Britain.
  • After Fudge left, the Prime Minister reflected on Britain’s political and economic troubles and saw the book as a rare opportunity to rebuild the country’s cultural exports.
  • The Prime Minister instructed the Ministry of Publicity to arrange favorable newspaper coverage, promote the book overseas, and have the BBC produce a special program about its success.
  • The Prime Minister opened the book and hoped it would become a tremendous success.

Ch. 23A pre-order frenzy!

A BBC feature praised Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone and announced that its second half would go on sale on October 1, setting off a nationwide buying frenzy. Barry increased Bloomsbury’s print capacity as booksellers placed enormous orders and pre-orders for Part Two poured in.

  • Richard Whiteley’s BBC program presented praise for the novel from Professor James Blackwell, schoolchildren, and Guardian editor Henry Ford, then announced Part Two’s October 1 release.
  • After the program aired, readers flocked to bookstores, and schoolchildren imitated spells from the book.
  • Booksellers Alfred, Simon, and William called Barry to request thousands more copies of Part One as their shops sold out or faced long queues.
  • Barry told his assistant to increase the number of production lines from six to eight, with more capacity if needed.
  • Waterstones purchasing director Michael Jones ordered two hundred thousand copies of Part Two for the chain’s branches.
  • Barry instructed the printer to expand to twelve production lines, run them around the clock, and hire temporary workers at higher wages.

Ch. 24A smash-hit release! Giving an exclusive interview is my honor (double-length chapter)

On the release day of Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, Part Two, crowds overwhelmed bookshops across Great Britain as the book sold rapidly. After finishing it, fantasy writer Philip Pullman judged the complete story a masterpiece and agreed to give Literary Review an interview.

  • David Carter encountered enormous queues outside London bookshops and saw that people had gathered to buy Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, Part Two.
  • James, Mary, and Peter opened their London bookshop at ten, and customers rushed in to buy copies as fast as staff could restock them.
  • Simon, William, and Duncan struggled to meet demand at bookshops in Manchester, Liverpool, and Edinburgh, where Duncan sold out and told waiting customers to return the next morning.
  • Philip Pullman read the second half, followed Harry, Ron, and Hermione through the story, and concluded that the complete book was a fantasy masterpiece.
  • Catherine of Literary Review called Philip Pullman to request an interview, and he agreed, calling it his honor.

Ch. 25Reviews from all sides: we're far ahead!

Major British newspapers and critics praised Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone for its storytelling, cultural impact, and commercial success. As Allen Vane continued writing the sequel, the system awarded him increased magic power and an exclusive wand.

  • The Times critic Andrew Norris called Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone a major work and praised its structure, imagination, and emotional resonance.
  • The Guardian’s Henry Ford described the book as uniting readers and strengthening Britain’s cultural exports.
  • Philip Pullman praised Allen Vane’s narrative talent and Harry’s flawed but courageous character in an interview with Literary Review.
  • The Daily Telegraph reported that the books and merchandise had generated major sales and were expected to benefit Britain’s publishing and retail industries.
  • Allen Vane continued writing Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets as the system gave the completed first book an S+ rating and rewarded him with a tier-two magic power increase and an exclusive wand.

Ch. 26A myth from the East

The system gave Allen Vane a wand made from Jianmu and Zhulong Whisker, materials suited to his soul’s passage across worlds and timelines. Its first resonance unleashed a pillar of light over London, but Allen learned that his home was hidden in a subspace and went to sleep with the wand beside him.

  • The system analyzed Allen’s essence and chose Jianmu wood and a Zhulong Whisker core for his wand.
  • Allen took hold of the wand and felt it resonate with his magic.
  • Allen lost control of his magic, sending a silvery-white pillar of light through his apartment and into the London sky.
  • People near Baker Street saw the light vanish and speculated about its cause.
  • The system told Allen that his building occupied a hidden subspace that neither Muggle technology nor wizard detection spells could locate.
  • Allen praised the wand, placed it beside his pillow, and went to sleep.

Ch. 27One memorable quote after another

Readers and newspapers across Britain praised the wisdom and emotional depth of Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, focusing on memorable lines about dreams, death, truth, courage, and love. Meanwhile, a wizard noticed that Muggles had reported a mysterious pillar of light over London and wondered who had performed the magic.

  • Arthur Pendleton wrote to Literary Review, reflecting on Dumbledore's warning to Harry not to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
  • Richard Halloran praised Dumbledore's description of death as the next great adventure, and newspapers highlighted other memorable lines from the book.
  • James Harper discussed the dangers and value of truth, while The Independent examined the courage it took to stand up to friends.
  • The Sunday Times explored the protection Lily Potter's love gave Harry, and a counselor described how the book helped her reassure clients.
  • Newspapers widely covered Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, while tabloids reported a mysterious pillar of light over London.
  • A man in an ill-fitting overcoat picked up a tabloid near Baker Street and wondered who had performed the magic.

Ch. 28A critical reading was in order

Elias Hunt returned to the Ministry of Magic and learned that Minister Fudge had banned Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone, ordering confiscated copies transferred to the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. As Hunt and his colleagues began moving the books, they decided to secretly read them instead, leaving the transfer delayed.

  • Hunt discussed the unexplained pillar of light and the popular Harry Potter book with Tom at the Leaky Cauldron.
  • Hunt and Martha learned that Fudge had banned the book and that the Ministry was considering stricter penalties for possessing it.
  • Hunt’s colleagues described the disruption caused by Muggles searching for the wizarding world and revealed they had confiscated thousands of copies.
  • Silas Quildon ordered the department to transfer all confiscated books to the Department of Magical Law Enforcement before evening.
  • Hunt, Brown, Lillian, and their colleagues chose to pause the work and secretly read the confiscated books.

Ch. 29The gathering storm

A massive thunderstorm disrupted Bloomsbury Publishing’s overseas shipment of Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone, scattering copies from the sky. Books began falling into the wizarding world, where Hagrid and Blotts found them, and Rita Skeeter spotted one at her window.

  • Christopher felt uneasy despite Barry’s report that the book’s overseas publishing plans were going smoothly, as a severe storm gathered over Britain.
  • Pilot Jack steered the cargo plane carrying more than a hundred thousand copies beneath the storm clouds, but turbulence caused the left engine to fail.
  • Hagrid found a copy of the book outside his hut and went inside to read it by the fire.
  • Blotts was struck by a falling copy in Diagon Alley, then saw countless books raining down and hurried toward Flourish and Blotts.
  • Rita Skeeter saw a copy of the complete edition strike her window and land on the windowsill.

Ch. 30You-Know-Who...

Lucius Malfoy, Tom, Molly Weasley, and Ministry workers read the complete book about Harry Potter and discovered what happened during Harry’s first year at Hogwarts. Hunt reached the revelation that Professor Quirrell was serving You-Know-Who, whose face was hidden on the back of Quirrell’s head.

  • Lucius Malfoy found the complete book and realized it revealed Draco’s midnight-duel trick to the Wizarding World.
  • Tom read about Ron defeating a troll with the Levitation Charm and praised the first-year Weasley to patrons at the Leaky Cauldron.
  • Molly Weasley read about Harry seeing his parents in the Mirror of Erised and felt sympathy for him, then smiled at Ron’s ambitions.
  • Hunt, Brown, and Lillian read that Quirrell was the real villain and that Snape had secretly protected Harry.
  • Hunt saw the face on the back of Quirrell’s head and recognized it as You-Know-Who.

Ch. 31Dumbledore: Had my plan failed?

Dumbledore realized the book accurately described events at Hogwarts and feared his plan to kill Voldemort would fail. After Hagrid reported that Voldemort had returned, Dumbledore explained that the book was not a prophecy and considered using its details to stop him.

  • Dumbledore reviewed his plan to lure Voldemort to Hogwarts and noticed the book described Harry’s progress and the midnight duel accurately.
  • Dumbledore questioned Filch, who confirmed that someone had warned him about students going to the Trophy Room at midnight.
  • Dumbledore concluded that Voldemort would escape and wondered whether Grindelwald was connected to the mysterious book’s author.
  • Hagrid arrived with a copy of the book and told Dumbledore that You-Know-Who was back and possessing Professor Quirrell.
  • Dumbledore refused to inform the Ministry without evidence and promised Hagrid he would protect Harry.
  • Dumbledore told Hagrid the book was too detailed to be a prophecy, and Hagrid asked whether they could use it to capture or destroy Voldemort.

Ch. 32Reconvening the Order of the Phoenix!

Dumbledore decided Voldemort’s weakened state was an opportunity to act, so he planned to assemble the Order of the Phoenix while Hagrid watched Quirrell and informed Harry. At the Ministry, Quildon reported the book’s warning to Fudge, who struggled to accept that Voldemort was possessing Professor Quirrell at Hogwarts.

  • Dumbledore told Hagrid that Voldemort was possessing Quirrell and that they needed to act before Voldemort regained strength.
  • Dumbledore planned to summon former members of the Order of the Phoenix and ordered Hagrid to watch Quirrell, keep the matter secret, and inform Harry.
  • Dumbledore left by Floo Powder to gather the Order, while Hagrid went to watch the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher’s office.
  • Hunt, Brown, and Lillian reported to Quildon that the book’s second half said Voldemort was possessing Professor Quirrell.
  • Quildon told Hunt, Brown, and Lillian to keep quiet, then took the book to Minister Fudge and warned him that Voldemort was at Hogwarts.

Ch. 33Fudge: Before Dumbledore

Fudge called an emergency Ministry meeting after learning that the book claimed Voldemort was alive at Hogwarts, then ordered Aurors to capture Quirrell before Dumbledore could act. At Malfoy Manor, Lucius decided to distance himself from Voldemort and rallied pure-blood families to support Dumbledore.

  • Fudge rejected the book's claims at first, but Quildon urged him to act after Department of Mysteries experts confirmed its accuracy.
  • Fudge summoned department heads, and Quildon told them that Voldemort had possessed a Hogwarts professor and sought the Philosopher's Stone.
  • Hector Barlow reported that Dumbledore was making frequent visits to members of the Order of the Phoenix.
  • Fudge ordered Rufus Scrimgeour to mobilize the Aurors and arrest Quirrell before Dumbledore arrived.
  • Lucius Malfoy read the book, judged that Voldemort was too weak to back, and wrote to pure-blood family heads urging them to support Dumbledore.

Ch. 34What do you mean I'm in the world of "Harry Potter"?!

After learning that he had transmigrated into the Harry Potter world, Allen received rewards for his book’s impact, including greater magic power and Flitwick’s duelling skills. The system then sent him on a mandatory emergency quest at St Margaret’s Bay, and he teleported there.

  • Allen learned that the Wizarding World existed and that his book had become widely read despite being banned by the Ministry of Magic.
  • The system reassured Allen that no magical means could locate his subspace and awarded him a Quirrell character card and a third-tier magic power enhancement.
  • Allen drew Filius Flitwick’s max-level magical combat techniques and absorbed his duelling knowledge.
  • The system triggered a nonrefusable quest to eliminate the effects of an unforeseen incident at St Margaret’s Bay in Kent.
  • Allen accepted the quest and used the system’s temporary teleportation service to leave his apartment.

Ch. 35"Then call me a hero for fun"

Voldemort escaped the Aurors at Hogwarts and fled to St Margaret’s Bay, where a mysterious newcomer stopped him from killing a fisherman. The newcomer introduced himself as “a hero for fun.”

  • Voldemort took control of Quirrell’s body and escaped through the office window, evading the Aurors with a Flight Spell, black mist, and an enchanted incense burner.
  • The Aurors found Quirrell’s office empty, while Dumbledore freed Hagrid and blamed Fudge’s unauthorized raid for alerting Voldemort.
  • Voldemort fled Hogwarts, exhausted himself with successive spells, and eventually reached St Margaret’s Bay.
  • Voldemort ordered a fisherman to take him out to sea and fired a Killing Curse when the man refused.
  • A trench-coated stranger deflected Voldemort’s curse and called himself “a hero for fun.”

Ch. 36Courage overcame reason, the body took over consciousness

Allen encountered Voldemort on a beach at St Margaret's Bay and stopped him from killing a fisherman, using the Quirrell character card. After the fisherman escaped, Voldemort handed control of his body to Quirrell, who prepared to fight Allen.

  • Allen spotted Voldemort threatening a fisherman and learned from the system that Voldemort had escaped Hogwarts because of the Ministry of Magic's early operation, triggered by Allen's book.
  • As Voldemort fired the Killing Curse at the fisherman, Allen instinctively used the Quirrell character card and deflected the curse with a red beam.
  • Allen told Voldemort he was protecting the fisherman, then urged the terrified man to run; the fisherman fled toward the village.
  • Voldemort chose not to pursue the fisherman and, low on magic, gave control of his body to Quirrell and ordered him to deal with Allen.
  • Quirrell pointed his wand at Allen and was surprised to see that Allen's opening stance resembled his own.

Ch. 37No longer as in youth

Allen defeated Quirrell in a duel, but Quirrell chose to die on Allen’s wand, allowing Voldemort’s remnant soul to escape. Allen erased the fisherman’s memories and left the beach, where Ministry investigators soon discovered Quirrell’s body.

  • Allen and Quirrell exchanged spells on the beach, and Allen dodged Quirrell’s silent Killing Curse before disarming him.
  • Quirrell reflected on his past and his crimes, then lunged onto the tip of Allen’s wand and died.
  • Voldemort’s remnant soul emerged from Quirrell and escaped after Allen’s spells passed through it.
  • Allen erased the fisherman’s memories of the incident and Apparated away from the beach.
  • Hunt, Brown, and Lillian arrived to investigate the magical disturbance, and Hunt recognized Quirrell’s body.

Ch. 38Teaching the Master

Scrimgeour investigated Quirrell’s death and used a Time-Turner to observe the events at St Margaret’s Bay, hoping to identify Quirrell’s killer. When he focused on the stranger’s wand, a mysterious eye overwhelmed him, shattering the hourglass and leaving him injured.

  • Scrimgeour examined Quirrell’s body, found signs that You-Know-Who had left it, and learned that a fisherman’s memory had been charmed.
  • Scrimgeour reported his findings to Amelia Bones, who lent him a Time-Turner so he could observe the scene without interfering.
  • Scrimgeour traveled back an hour and watched You-Know-Who threaten the fisherman before a man in a black trench coat approached.
  • Scrimgeour became fixated on the stranger’s wand and saw a vast, time-filled eye that looked down at him with contempt.
  • The vision shattered, and Scrimgeour returned to the fishing village with bleeding eyes as the broken Time-Turner and its spilled sand lay at his feet.

Ch. 39This was absolute domination

Scrimgeour reported that a mysterious wizard with a slit pupil had thrown him back to his original time, but the crucial moment was missing from his memory. At St. Mungo’s, Dumbledore and the others watched the fisherman’s restored memories and saw the trench-coated wizard effortlessly defeat Quirrell, leaving Dumbledore wondering whether the stranger was a “champion of justice for fun.”

  • Scrimgeour returned to the Ministry and told Dumbledore and Fudge that a mysterious wizard had intervened on the beach, shown him a divine-looking slit pupil, and shattered his Time-Turner.
  • Dumbledore examined Scrimgeour’s memory in the Pensieve but found the encounter missing, so he arranged for the Department of Mysteries to investigate.
  • A Ministry messenger reported that the fisherman’s memories had mostly been restored, and Dumbledore and Scrimgeour went to St. Mungo’s while Fudge stayed behind.
  • Dumbledore drew the fisherman’s memory into a Pensieve, and the assembled Order members and Ministry wizards watched Voldemort threaten the fisherman before the trench-coated stranger intervened.
  • The trench-coated stranger overwhelmed Quirrell with a relentless barrage of spells, disarmed him, and watched him take his own life as Voldemort’s remnant fled.
  • Dumbledore replayed the duel as the group marveled at the stranger’s skill, then wondered aloud whether he was a champion of justice for fun.

Ch. 40"Minister Fudge, give the Wizarding World an explanation"

After Allen returned from Kent and completed an emergency mission, a Daily Prophet article about Voldemort possessing Quirrell triggered panic across the Wizarding World. Dumbledore assured Hogwarts that the castle was safe but refused to explain Quirrell’s absence, while the Ministry faced growing public demands for answers.

  • Allen used Apparition six times to return to London, completed his mission, gained Quirrell’s nonverbal spellcasting techniques, and fell asleep from exhaustion.
  • A veteran Daily Prophet editor published an article suggesting Voldemort had possessed Quirrell, and rumors spread through Diagon Alley.
  • Parents sent Howlers urging students to leave Hogwarts, but Dumbledore told the Great Hall that the castle was safe and said Quirrell was unwell.
  • Harry and Hermione questioned Dumbledore’s explanation while students speculated about Quirrell and Snape.
  • Reporters confronted Dumbledore outside Hogwarts, but he refused to reveal where Quirrell was recuperating, intensifying rumors about Quirrell’s death and Voldemort’s return.
  • Crowds gathered outside the Ministry of Magic and demanded that Minister Fudge explain what had happened.
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