Well, before I knew it, tomorrow was the day this novel went premium. It was a little moving.
The reason I started writing this book was that I'd been too absorbed in Pokémon and Naruto fanfiction lately, so I wanted to write one myself. Pokémon required too much trouble when it came to researching tactics, so I chose Naruto. That was how it started.
Then, there were a few issues readers brought up. One of them was that I was too wordy, and personally, I felt like that might not be something I could fix.
After all, it had become a habit. I figured I picked it up from writing essays in middle and high school. My essay scores weren't high, but I wrote fast... haha.
Still, I could cut back on phrases like "he sighed." If readers hadn't pointed it out, I definitely wouldn't have noticed it myself. Now that I had, I'd do my best to keep it under control.
Another point was analysis. Well, you could tell from why I started writing this that I wrote because of my interests, so I had the urge to put all my thoughts into it.
But there probably wouldn't be as much later on as there was in the beginning. If there was, I'd try to control it, and any analysis would be related to the protagonist's next actions.
For example, during the Uchiha Clan Massacre, you might think it was just more analysis, but I felt that was necessary psychological activity for the protagonist, used to extinguish his unrealistic thoughts. It might seem wordy, but it was crucial to his character.
To put it bluntly, although he wanted to become stronger, he was actually pretty laid-back and put his own life first. So he would have ideas, but if