Chapter 65 Final Speech + Reward Thanks
The first volume has been written and has sixty-four chapters, which means "King Wen's sixty-four hexagrams". Therefore, the last chapter has a bit too many words.
Personally, I still didn't write the feeling I should have. I originally wanted to try a multi-line perspective, and started with Heng Hua, Liuhui, and the old man at the same time.
It seems that the plots of Fu Danwei and Fu Henghua are not connected. In fact, Fu Henghua's actions involve part of the Demon Palace's energy. And it is Fu Danwei was sitting next to Coiling Dragon Island, and Demon Palace's five altar masters did not chase Heng Hua's group, which made Seven Calamities much weaker.
As Song Chunqiu said, Demon Palace both sides wanted to succeed, but in the end all wasted.
Of course, Song Chunqiu and Ji Mingfeng contributed a lot. After all, they held back Demon Palace and sent Heng Hua and his party to Erlong Ravine. Only then did we get the final satisfactory result.
Regarding these two characters, we will gradually mention them in the next few volumes. They are both involved with a hidden figure.
As for "Seven-Emotion Refinement of True Suchness, Human Tribulation generation Heavenly Tribulation", it is one of the two routes in the initial setting.
Whether to choose Heavenly Tribulation in Turtle-Burial Reef or directly use Seven-Emotion Tribulation to count. I thought about it for several days and chose the second option.
But the writing is not strong enough, the description of Seven Calamities is too sparse, and the three lines are mixed together. Everyone said that the plot is too dragging, so they should simply join together earlier and unify the multiple lines as soon as possible.
Regarding the plot of Northern Domain, Heng Hua fights Water Ghost. I should have taken the opportunity to understand a certain secret method that is very suitable for <Creation's Epoch-Reunion Art>. But after thinking about it, I moved the relevant plot and settings to the next volume. Metallurgy Daoist and Spirit Painter are already cumbersome enough, let's leave the ghost path behind.
According to the original plot setting, Fu Liuhui saved the panda mother and son midway, which wasted time. When she arrived at Earthflame Island, she was just in time to catch up with Ji Mingfeng and Origin Fire Altar, who were leading the battle. Then Dragon King was angry. Then she met Song Chunqiu and got his advice to guard Turtle-Burial Reef. In this way, Song Chunqiu's appearance would not be too sudden.
However, the main text deletes the plot of Fu Liuhui and only retains the outcome of this plot. It is mentioned in a few simple sentences, which is a bit blunt.
The content of the original seventy-two chapters was compressed to sixty-four. Although more words were crammed into the last few chapters, a rough calculation suggests that fifteen thousand words should have been deleted, right?
Therefore, Fu Liuhui, a female character that was originally planned to be well described in the first volume, has failed.
This also indirectly leads to the fact that in addition to Xiaoyu, which is relatively transparent and has no luminous point of its own, and Jin Xian'e, which is relatively flat, the first volume highlights the description of male characters.
The yang rises and the yin wanes.
As for Fu Tongjun, although it has been mentioned several times, it is just a buried clue after all, because she is the main character in the second volume.
In the conception, this book takes Heng Hua as the absolute protagonist and tells the story of the transformation of Lineage, a cultivator. In each volume, several Fu Family disciples will appear.
So I put a lot of thought into getting 12+1 brothers and sisters for Heng Hua. The first volume specially spent a lot of paragraphs describing those people.
For example, Fu Maiyuan, in a subtle way, allowed Fu Henghua to use the name of Fu Maiyuan. This is so that when Fu Maiyuan appears in the future, everyone can react immediately. Ah, this person is the fifth brother of Fu Henghua.
There are also six talents inherited by the Fu Family Baihuang Hall. In the future, these people will appear with different talents and show their different understanding and usage methods.
Fu Xiangfeng's understanding of Phoenix Speech and Wind Resonance was so weak in the first volume!
But this is to slowly strengthen in the next few volumes.
There are no weak abilities, only stupid users. This is what the first volume has been hinting at.
Heng Hua can solve a series of troubles even with <Horticultural Art>, which is in sharp contrast to Fu Xiangfeng.
The higher the level of exercises and spells, the better. The best ones are the ones that are suitable.
Next is the second volume. If the first volume is just for everyone to see Fu Family and see one page of the world of cultivation, it spends a lot of time describing the setting.
Then the second volume is the real plot confrontation, and there will be much less explanation about the setting.
So, this kind of slow-burn plot, which takes a whole volume to set up, will definitely make readers complain!
This volume actually describes a lot of hidden things.
For example, in Erlong Ravine, Fu Xuanxing controls Separation Flame, Nameless Sword Art and Song Chunqiu's inexplicable attitude towards the Fu Family, etc.
If nothing unexpected happens, it will be explained in the second volume. We have to see how the chapter is broken in the second volume. Personally, I hope to break it at the plot of Firegate Island. But due to length reasons, it is also possible to break it directly at the battle between the Fu Family and Wei Family. Anyway, it depends on the situation.
It's been one month and two since the article was published. Here's a record of the rewards from readers:
Mirror-Shadow Sage
A certain beauty's Yan Fei
Book Friends 20170218191327271
Day Yan
hazy distance
Bai Qingming from Luo Town
Memory stays at yesterday, Qidian reading iOS
555 read
Book Friends 20190802125135562
One-eyed old captain
Plain Primordial Hermit
Cowardly
Brother Zheng, Qidian reading iOS
Supreme Palace
The eternal mortal world
Lao Qi, give it to me
Lin Shenlu Yiming, Qidian Reading iOS
Water Dripping into Mystic Ice
Book Friends 20210301106458317362
Azu must work hard today
Fried potatoes belong to the same family
Cuttlefish ice dust
Book Friends 20190702183128953
Ou Bihai Zi Juezhi
Book Friends 20210911144855023
Going up the mountain without cutting firewood
Qianyubaba
National Major Officer
Book Friends 20191203113551733
Mu Yi Mu Yi Mu Yi
Book Friends 20200715224859115
Blood-stained youth
The boat and the island drift uncertainly
Tua Tuo pressed down
Nirvana0Rong
Lingjun Fu Ju
Enlightenment in a stone pit
Earthlings 1988
Book Friends 20170607143655611
Book Friends 20191116153907321, Qidian Reading iOS
The second volume "Reading by Reedlight" will be updated in the evening.