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Not bad and a decent idea. last third feels very rushed. Problem is that it has 3 power systems and all feel half done at best.

9/10. Very good Naruto fanfic. Although the protag gets OP relatively quickly, the journey there and the change in focus after that is also fun.

Started well the kinda drifted off midway is around the point I dropped it. This author does have some good ideas but they tend to drag a bit in the middle.

+1 on the unexpectedly good novel. Not trashy like the usual system novels, system is not omnipotent but is also not useless, it's role is moderated well. MC has critical thinking and planning ability, not a horn dog. Pretty enjoyable.

Brainrot. Literal Brainrot. I only read 3 chapters but their are already idiots provoking mc even though he can slap them to death. Soul Hall is a demonic faction, not an idiotic one. An early stage Dou Ancestor provoking a late stage Dou Venerate even though he know the mc’s cultivation is at Dou Venerate.

For some reason all chapters after chapter 50 are cutoff. The original is fine, but the translation is cutoff

What the hell is going through the author's head when they were writing this? MC kills Gu Rong then suddenly later in the novel Gu Rong is suddenly alive and completely fine after being BITEN IN HALF by Tail. And afterwards when he kills Ghost Douluo, suddenly later Ghost Douluo is alive and well when he was clearly stated to have been killed by Acheron. And don't get me on ch 150! Tang Hao was in despair after Gu Rong was killed because he knew the MC was only going to get stronger, so Tang Hao wouldn't get revenge... But in ch 150 he (Tang Hao) has suddenly gotten all his will back doesn't even remember the MC, the guy that has his wife's Soul Bone!

Ch150 excerpt:
Tang Hao was shocked and asked in confusion, "Who... who are you two?"
Lu Jiang replied neither servile nor overbearing, "I am Lu Jiang, and this is Fei Xiao."
Tang Hao's face was filled with bewilderment; it was clear he had never heard these names before.

I repeat: WHAT THE HELL, DUDE?!

I stand corrected. The author even retconned the Four Single Attribute Clan leaders (who were clearly killed in the Heaven Dou Coup) to be rebels... You know what? This novel is trash, trash slop. I'm outta here.

The power scaling in this novel is illogical. The author gives the MC a system cheat of 100 million Dou Qi levels, yet he’s portrayed as a weak. Even in the early chapters, his power is comparable to a standard Dou Master, and by chapter 63, he’s still struggling against Dou Emperors. The system claims he’d be a Dou Di instantly with Origin Qi, but with 100 million levels, he should be effortlessly shattering space-time regardless of his rank. His strength isn’t based on logic or the system’s numbers—it’s arbitrary and shifts based on the author’s mood. It’s hard to take the story seriously when the MC is supposedly a god on paper but a weakling in practice just to prolong the plot.
I skip to chapter 201, where he fights Gu Yuan with the same 100 million Dou Qi, rendering the initial chapters meaningless as he struggles with the same power fighting dou king or dou emperor but now using same power he is fighting Gu Yuan

The timeline is so screwed up and makes no sense. The MC is 6yr old and Tang San is apparantely 10yr old at start of story with no soul ring and needing to cultivate to 10 soul power even tho it was mentioned that he was innate full soul power. When we get to Shrek part the MC is still 6yr old while Tang San is now 12 with Xiao Wu somehow being 6yr old too. Yet Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing are somehow at Shrek also....i just don't know wtf is going on so i'm just going to stop here. 😮‍💨

10/10. I don't really know how to describe this novel. All I can say is this is one of the best pieces of fiction I've read. The MC and the world building and power systems are the shining points of this novel, so try reading around 40 chaps before deciding if this is for you.

Started well, became neutral in the middle and the entire war arc and its aftermath was bad really bad. Don't recommend
The biggest problem is he suddenly avoids killing randomly for no good reason, hypocrisy levels go off the charts and then suddenly he starts killing the very people he didnt kill during the war for stupid plot reasons.

From ch 114 onward, the sentences are all over the place

Update please 🙏

This seems to be basically a copy of the Douluo: Spirit Pearl Divine Sword (on this site). Its very similar.

9.5/10. Quite good. The explanation for chakra and the many buggy jutsu was done quite well by the author.

Solid Novel with good character development, more comedic than serious.

Really great novel however as of chapter 250+ the chapters start being a mix of different novels that disrupts flow of story and also makes you miss half the context of the plot.

To the person who is turning 元神 into Nascent Soul again and again: 元神 is Yuan SHEN. It is not Nascent Soul, which is Yuan YING. 元婴 is Yuan Ying. They are completely different. 元神 is Primordial Spirit.

Think Diesel and Diesel Engine. What you are doing is turning the word that means Diesel, into Diesel Engine.

Who the hell would start reading something 13 million words long and its still ongoing?

mc doesn’t take shit from anyone lol. If bro hates them, he let’s them know.

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