Honkai: Star Rail: The Battle-Damaged Fox Spirit Has a Cheat!
Chapter 1

Introduction + Rant

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I'll write whatever lines I dream up.

The protagonist became a god, and she's a stubborn mule (then again, how could she have become a god if she weren't?). She has things like the inventory from Honkai: Star Rail, so run while you can if that's a turnoff.

Baiheng, Dan Feng, and others will be revived (this is my own setting for the story: memories make up a person, and the soul is memory. As long as there are enough memories, a soul can be brought together. If memories are lost, the soul changes. So the matter of Dan Heng and Dan Feng goes beyond them just being two different people. You could say Dan Feng is Dan Heng's dad, and Baiheng's daughter is Bailu (not really)).

Aside from that setting, everything else is researched from the Honkai: Star Rail text. I might miss some things, so please point out any problems and I'll see if I can fix them. If I can't fix them and they're harmless details, just treat them as my own setting (I'm out of options).

If any of that puts you off, run now. Don't put yourself through this book! Seriously!

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There are no couples throughout the story. Ship whoever you like on your own, but don't stir things up.

If anyone is OOC, please @ me in the comments and I'll revise it. But don't just hurl abuse. Please point it out reasonably and leave suggestions for changes. If I think they fit, I'll make them.

If you do hurl abuse, I'll happily put your comment in the story and write a little essay about it in a "friendly" tone for everyone to enjoy, so all the readers can broaden their horizons.

If you have questions and there are a lot of them, I'll write a special extra chapter to explain. If there aren't many, I'll explain in the comments. This only applies if you're not just hurling abuse.

I'm a Phainon fan and an Aventurine fan. I also like Jing Yuan, Dan Heng, Anaxa, Sunday, Jiaoqiu, March 7th, Cyrene, Feixiao, Yaoguang, and some others I'm fond of (there may be more as the Honkai: Star Rail story progresses).

There aren't any characters I dislike.

Fellow fans, please come in and point out every instance of a character being OOC. I'll make revisions accordingly. The basic plot won't change, but OOC moments will definitely be revised. I'll try to respect the original story.

After all, I'm writing Honkai: Star Rail fanfiction, with a bit of my own material mixed into the plot. It isn't all my own material with nothing of the original.

The Honkai: Star Rail story will be changed a lot. For example, Aventurine's sister and people come back, Amphoreus becomes reality without having to wait any longer, and the High-Cloud Quintet reunites.

Since I used Caelus in my last book, I'm using Stelle in this one.

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All right, rant time.

I'm too lazy to rant about the plot of a certain book. Back when I read the story of a certain throne, I was so angry I wanted to curse someone out. After reading the plot of that book, I hereby apologize to that throne.

Seriously, it actually respected the original more than that book did!

Really, copying it outright would have been better than maliciously slandering it.

My Xiao Hei's body had been burned away by the Core Flame. Never mind flesh, it's questionable whether he even had any skin left, so why did he look so healthy and muscular?

I could have put up with Xiao Hei being drawn like that, but what was going on with Xiao Bai?! Even drawing him like Xiao Hei would have been better than this! Where was his strong body? How did he turn into someone delicate and easily pushed down?!!

And don't even get me started on this: Phainon held out for 33,550,336 cycles without bowing to Destruction, so how did he end up willingly choosing Destruction here?

Xiao Bai would have dropped dead on the spot the moment he heard that, okay?

As a Phainon fan whose cold, hard 900 pulls became a warm E6S1 Phainon the moment I finished the 3.4 story, I was already a cold corpse by the time I saw that.

And this was supposed to be Phainon-centered!

Right? This Phainon fan nearly died!

All right, the Phainon fan is done dying. Next up, time for the Cerydra fan to die a little. I always pull for the signature weapon of a character I like. Even if I don't get it this time, I'll definitely come back for it next time. Especially for support characters: I'll pull for key eidolons if I have the tickets, and if I don't, so be it, but if I like them, I'll definitely spend on their signature weapon.

If I have a support character's signature weapon, it means their story touched me at least once. Look at my E0S1 Cerydra. Because of one line from her—"I would rather be forgotten than defined"—I closed my eyes and went all in for E0S1. Let's not mention that one attempt at E1 turned into Bailu.

Ha, she conjured up a thirteenth Core Flame. Amazing. How about I die a little more?

And then there's Cyrene. I like Cyrene too. I wasn't planning to pull for her at first, but after the story, I happily got one copy. I'll pull for her signature weapon on her rerun.

And then... haha, hahaha, hahahahaha.

What, Cyrene turned into the big boss?

Let me die again.

And there's Kitty. I'm really fond of her, but... if an enemy kills your whole family, are you supposed to thank them? Not going after them and fighting them to the death only means you're carrying too much to dare to die!

Seriously, my Xiao Bai, Cyrene, Teacher Xiao Xia, and the others aren't taking part in this embarrassing event anymore.

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At this point, I basically have to open Honkai: Star Rail and revisit the story to cleanse my eyes. And now I've passionately started a new fic, getting ready to write and cleanse my eyes.

So I'm saying it here: whenever someone is OOC, I hope you'll @ me and point it out. Ideally, tell me how to fix it too. If I can change it, I will, and I'll try to stay true to the story.

One more reminder!

If there's anything OOC or incorrect, please point it out politely!

Please make sure to be polite!

For example, Teacher Xiao Xia is too hard to write, so I'll definitely make him OOC. I hope Anaxa fans can help point things out!

Oh, I'm following the original story's progression, so Anaxa fans can come in a little later. Looks away.

The female lead has no romantic pairing. She's a stubborn mule, the number-one troublemaker, and an infuriating kind of being who can make Dan Heng feel the call of the ancient sea. She sorts everyone else into four tiers in total, and her attitude is different for each tier. Dan Heng is in the second tier.

Updates will be extremely slow because I started this fic on impulse without a single chapter saved up.

Slacking off comes first, writing comes second. Yay!

As for the Nan You book, definitely next time. It's still blank too; I wrote the setting and then that was it. Who told Conan to fall from grace? Looks away.

I didn't draw the cover this time! My friend helped me make it! Doesn't it look so much better than mine?! I added a tiny bit of detail and put it up, hehe.

That's all for now. I'll add more if anything comes up. On with the story!

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