Spirit City.
Papal Palace.
Having just finished a tiring day of administrative duties, Bibi Dong did not intend to think about work anymore.
She casually removed her luxurious Long Dress and crown, leaving only a simple purple Camisole Dress on her body before quietly lying down on the bed.
Though Bibi Dong was no longer young, as a Soul Master of the Douluo Continent, her body remained in its most alluring state.
Her fair, exquisite features were more delicate than anyone's even without makeup. Her curvaceous figure, especially the boundless charm of her ample chest, coupled with her slender, pale legs stretching over a meter long beneath her—
Veiled by the purple Camisole Dress, both above and below were faintly visible, displaying her nearly flawless beauty.
With the noble bearing of one in power combined with the Charm of a mature woman, anyone who took a single look would likely fall completely under her spell.
Just as she lay down more languidly and prepared to rest—
A faint point of light abruptly appeared in her right hand.
Bibi Dong's attention was drawn to it, and she murmured in confusion, "What is this?"
She swung her arm, only to find that the faint light seemed to have merged into her body and could not be shaken off, leaving her greatly astonished.
"What is this thing? How did it enter my body without a sound?"
Then Bibi Dong touched it with her other hand, and the next second, a Light Screen visible only to her appeared.
At the very top was a title resembling a question, while the space beneath it was blank.
Bibi Dong looked at the title and read aloud:
"Please give a sharp review of Bibi Dong's view on love?"
"Hmm?!"
Bibi Dong's expression changed drastically. What was this thing? Why had it appeared for no reason and involved her?
Before Bibi Dong could examine the specific sharp review, she noticed a large amount of information.
For instance, beneath the title was something resembling a pen name.
"Is this person the author?"
This person's pen name was [Ye Ye Sheng Ge], a name carrying hints of teasing and pleasure.
Moreover, beneath the blank space was something like a comment section.
The next second, a comment popped up:
[Chief Miss]: "What is this? Why does it even contain content about the Pope of Spirit Hall?"
[Buzhun Chutu]: "Bibi Dong? Is Bibi Dong the Pope of Spirit Hall? Bibi Dong, I curse your whole family to die!"
Bibi Dong was utterly baffled by such bizarre content.
"Wh-what is this? People can actually speak on it?"
"Can I...?"
She tried touching it and indeed discovered that she could also post something resembling a comment.
Furthermore, she could choose her own name. As the Pope, there was naturally no need for her to hide anything.
[Bibi Dong]: "What is this thing?! Who sent it here?! And what is with that title? Give me an explanation!!"
However, just as she sent that comment, she immediately saw the Light Screen begin to change.
In the vast blank area beneath the title, text finally began to appear...
The western side of Spirit City.
Martial Soul Village, inside a house.
Song Ye looked at the virtual keyboard created by the system before him, along with a clear screen, and felt as though he had returned to his previous life.
"Ugh, I've been transported to Douluo for sixteen whole years, and the system only awakened on my birthday today!"
"This system is pretty bizarre too. I have to give sharp reviews of the characters and Matters it provides every day before I can receive rewards..."
[Please give a sharp review of Bibi Dong's view on love]
Looking at the huge title before him, Song Ye began typing his first sentence:
"Bibi Dong's view on love, if rated on a scale of one hundred, would receive -100 from me!"
Then, while thinking it over, he slowly typed out his review.
"The system will give me rewards based on the result of my sharp review. I wonder whether it can improve my Martial Soul and talent."
"It would have been fine if I had no cheat in the early stages, but when my Martial Soul awakened ten years ago, I actually got some useless weed Martial Soul that was worse than Blue Silver Grass."
"My Innate Soul Power was only half a level. After working myself to the bone, I've only reached level 19 by now and managed to get a spot as a laborer for Spirit Hall..."
"System, I'll do my best to make this sharp review vicious. Your rewards had better be worthwhile!"
After sighing a few times, Song Ye immersed himself in typing again, preparing to curse that idiot Bibi Dong more viciously.
Since it was a Sharp Commentary System, the harsher his insults were, the more rewards he would surely receive—and the better they would be.
With that thought, he typed his complaints with even greater effort, determined to write something capable of making Bibi Dong break defense...
Heaven Dou Empire.
Qian Renxue looked at the content in the Light Screen and sneered disdainfully.
"It seems this is some kind of information transmission device."
"The top is the title or theme, while the blank space below should be where someone is writing commentary about Bibi Dong based on that title..."
"As for those comments at the bottom, they are probably from people like me, who happened to connect to this Light Screen."
"Only those who connect can see the writer's sharp review and post things resembling comments."
"I just wonder who exactly is writing these sharp review words..."
Qian Renxue looked at the first line of the sharp review that had appeared and found it laughable.
[Bibi Dong's view on love, if rated on a scale of one hundred, would receive -100 from me!]
If someone else were reviewing Bibi Dong's view on love, they would at most have a little interest in the topic.
But to Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong was her mother, yet she had never fulfilled a mother's duties and was fundamentally unworthy of being human!
Anything that reflected negatively on Bibi Dong was something she was happy to see.
This first sentence had directly denied Bibi Dong's view on love, leaving Qian Renxue highly satisfied.
She immediately set a name and posted a comment.
[Wo Shi Gu'er]: "This Light Screen's evaluation is indeed perfectly reasonable! Bibi Dong, you idiot, what view on love could you possibly have?"
Papal Palace.
When Bibi Dong saw the Light Screen's evaluation of her, merely reading the first sentence filled her with uncontrollable rage.
"Who—who wrote this evaluation?!"
"Since when has my view on love been something The others can evaluate?!"
"How outrageous! And who is this [Wo Shi Gu'er], daring to insult This Seat?!"
She immediately posted a rebuttal below.
[Bibi Dong]: "@[Wo Shi Gu'er], how dare you! Who are you? Is This Seat someone you can belittle at will?"
But as soon as she said this, The others replied below.
[Buzhun Chutu]: "Bibi Dong, I am an Accountant! What the hell do you count for?! So what if I insult you? I'm insulting you today! I say it was good for this Light Screen to appear—it's right!"
[Yanyan Deyi]: "Well cursed! My Grandfather always said the Pope of Spirit Hall was no good. Today, this treasure can even give sharp reviews of the Pope on behalf of others? Interesting!"
The moment Bibi Dong replied, two people immediately joined forces to curse her.
Bibi Dong was instantly enraged. How dare they! What kind of trash were these people?
It was bad enough that a Light Screen dared to give her a sharp review, yet a group of people could actually refute her below it and even curse her anonymously?
Fine, this Light Screen had embarked upon the Path to Death!
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