Reflections on Volume One and a Look Ahead to Volume Two

Reflection:

1. Too much plot buildup resulted in a lack of climaxes, making the story somewhat bland after its release. 2. Character development. The younger sister's character development was decent, but Ms. M was somewhat lacking, making her seem like a godlike figure, failing to achieve the intended goal. The original intention was to create a crazy, powerful, and unpredictable villain, but this seems unsuccessful. Next volume title: Abyss. Highlights:

1. Lanevus, heavily pregnant, chases after the protagonist. 2. First meeting with members of the Tarot Club. 3. A real-life encounter with Great Detective Moriarty.