After carefully studying the novel Hathaway's Flash, I started writing my favorite Gundam again.
Personally, I still feel I've improved a lot compared with my last book.
Of course, there are still plenty of shortcomings. For example, many readers mentioned that in the 08th Team arc, the gradual development of feelings between Shiro and Aina felt a little stiff.
That's true. Looking back, I realized there were actually plenty of ways to create encounters between the two of them outside the battlefield, to lay the groundwork for their relationship's development.
Then there's the relationship between the protagonist and Sayla. Some people also said there wasn't any foreshadowing.
Sigh, feelings are such a thing... I, the author, was broken up with not long ago. I can't even get a grip on my own feelings, so trying to write other people's feelings is still a bit of a stretch.
Also, there were many setting-related issues I didn't properly verify. That was all my fault, sorry.
But stumbling along, in the end I still made it here, even if I was a lost child—
Sorry, I'm watching MyGO right now, and it bled into my writing.
In the end, I once again brought my work to the threshold of going premium. Seeing new comments every day makes me happy from the bottom of my heart.
I, the author, am a college student. I'd say my college life is fairly full, with a band, photography, and so on, so there are occasionally times when I don't have time to write. When that happens, I'll update four thousand words.
But generally, I'll do my best to guarantee six thousand words updated daily.
Lastly, thanks to Infinite Dragon Ball Legend, Auspicious Three Castles, Arkmornings, Book Friend 20210303155941595, Soldier 97, Spartan Warrior 101, and Book Friend 20200705203017794