Naruto: I Drew Dual Kamui at the Start
Chapter 2

Stat-Adding System / D-Class Magical Beast: Iron-Horned Sheep

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Substitution Technique: LV0 (12/100) + Clone Technique: LV0 (14/100) + Transformation Technique: LV0 (8/100) + Kekkei Genkai: None Chakra Level: 0.03 (Kakashi) + Earth Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Water Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Wind Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Fire Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Lightning Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Yin Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Yang Attribute: LV0 (0/100) — Locked Available Attribute Points: 1 (1 point added daily at midnight) Current Task: Raise any one of the Three Body Techniques to level 1 (Reward: 2 available Attribute Points) Overall Assessment: Ninja Apprentice Unclaimed Bound Starter Pack: 1/1

"There's a starter pack too? Claim!"

"Bound starter pack claimed. Congratulations, Host, you've obtained the Sharingan (fixed progression: Kamui Mangekyou)."

"Holy crap, I actually got the Kamui Eye!" Su Bai leaped up from his hospital bed, overjoyed!

He knew about Kamui. It was Uchiha Obito's Sharingan, and countless Naruto fans considered it the most perfect Dojutsu in all of Naruto: it was useful for both offense and defense, and let its user appear and disappear without a trace.

With just his right eye, Uchiha Obito could roam the perilous Shinobi World as if it were his own backyard, going wherever he pleased and stirring up trouble without anyone able to stop him. He'd had it easy!

Perhaps Kamui was too overpowered, so Kishimoto had waited until the very end to give Kakashi both Kamui eyes. After letting him bask in the glory for a while, he took them away again...

But that made sense. Obito could dominate the Shinobi World with just his right eye, though he also had Hashirama Cells... Still, it was an incredible power. If it hadn't been nerfed, how could anyone else compete?

Kamui was a Space-Time Ninjutsu. It could transport targets at close range into its user's personal dimension, let the user hide in that dimension to phase through attacks, and even allow entry into someone else's space-time.

In addition, Kamui could absorb objects. Anything focused on by the Sharingan would be absorbed, either in its entirety or only in part.

Su Bai remembered Kakashi using this technique in the original story to sever Deidara's arm and the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path's arm. It was the kind of Ninjutsu that was almost impossible to guard against!

The ability worked like spatial separation: the user could interrupt the transfer midway, leaving part of the target's body in another dimension.

At that point, one part of the target's body remained in the current space while the rest was in the Kamui Dimension, splitting the target apart.

Kamui had its own separate dimension. It could transport people as well as objects, much like the spatial rings in fantasy novels, except that it also had an irresistible transfer ability.

Though it wasn't absolutely irresistible. Kamui took a brief moment to activate, and a strong enough target could escape.

But there weren't many people like that. In the original story, only the Fourth Hokage, Namikaze Minato, had ever escaped it, using another godlike Ninjutsu: the Flying Thunder God.

But Minato was the Fourth Hokage, the only genius in the entire Shinobi World to master the Flying Thunder God to its full potential. Even the technique's creator, the Second Hokage Tobirama Senju, hadn't mastered it to the same absurd degree.

On top of that, Minato had exceptional combat instincts, while Obito was a greenhorn with plenty of power but little combat experience. That was how he managed to dodge Kamui.

Still, Kamui wasn't invincible. It had weaknesses, too.

Its greatest weakness was that its user had to be tangible while absorbing or releasing something. They couldn't phase out at the same time.

And because the user had to concentrate chakra in their eye to activate Kamui, they were extremely vulnerable to attack.

The Fourth Hokage had identified this weakness in the original story and used it to defeat Obito in one fell swoop.

The second weakness was that absorbing or transferring oneself took longer than transferring someone else. The user was also immobilized during the transfer, giving opponents an opening.

The third was that Kamui's phasing mode could last only about five minutes at most. Any longer, and it would fail.

When Konan fought Obito in the original story, she used the Paper Person of God Technique to detonate paper bombs continuously for more than ten minutes, forcing him to use another divine technique of the Uchiha Clan, Izanagi, to survive!

But as far as Su Bai was concerned, these weaknesses could be overcome. The Kamui he'd obtained was different from the one in the original story. He had the complete pair of Kamui Sharingan!

With both eyes, Kamui activated and transferred targets many times faster than with just one!

Kishimoto had never specified exactly how much faster, but Su Bai was sure that having both Kamui Sharingan was the best possible start. If he could master them completely one day, they'd benefit him for the rest of his life!

"What a ridiculously good start... If I still can't make something of myself in this life, I'll be a total nobody!" Su Bai clenched his fists slightly, remembering what had happened before he crossed over...

His life in his previous world had been the cruelest joke fate could have played on him. His parents had worked hard to put him through university, but before he could even start his first job, a car accident took his legs and his family.

The girl he'd once loved, Xia Xueqing, had also given up on him, driven away by his shame after the accident.

If not for that car accident... he and the girl might have stayed together, gotten married, and had children. They'd been a couple for seven years and had shared a strong bond. That was why Xia Xueqing had been so heartbroken when Su Bai sent her away...

Now his parents were alive and well, and he had been spared the miserable fate of his previous life. Su Bai was incredibly grateful to fate for giving him the chance to cross over!

"In this life... I'll protect my family!"

Chapter 3: The Stat-Adding System

After looking over his character panel, Su Bai stared at the three words "Locked" beside Kekkei Genkai and fell into thought.

"Maybe I can't awaken it because I haven't become a ninja yet. I don't have enough chakra to make my eyes awaken."

Su Bai thought of the Uchiha Clan in the original story. Every member who awakened their eyes had been at least a Genin. He wasn't in the world of Naruto now, but there had to be some connection.

"Why not just ask the system?" Su Bai slapped his forehead. "System, explain this."

"System?"

"No response?"

He called out twice, but the system didn't answer. Su Bai scratched his head.

"Could it be that I can't communicate with this system? Do I have to figure everything out on my own?"

He'd read plenty of system novels in his previous life, and their systems had come in all shapes and sizes, so he wasn't too surprised.

"Whatever. I'll figure it out myself. As long as I've got Kamui Mangekyou, I don't need to worry." Su Bai began to study the system carefully.

"The new task is to raise my overall assessment to Genin. I can't worry about that for now."

The task section was easy enough to understand: just follow the instructions. He couldn't complete the current task yet, so he turned his attention elsewhere.

"All seven attributes are locked. Does that mean I can unlock them later? Become an all-attribute ninja?"

"The Three Body Techniques show my progress. That must be the progress my original body made in training."

"The system is called the Stat-Adding System, and there's a plus sign after the Three Body Techniques and Chakra Level. The meaning is obvious: I can use points to change the stats."

"And I get one Attribute Point every day, plus more from completing tasks. Looks like I'll need to do plenty of tasks from now on."

"I'll try using an Attribute Point first and see what the ratio is."

Su Bai was a little worried. If Attribute Points and the numbers in parentheses, which looked like experience, had a one-to-one ratio, then Attribute Points would be pretty useless.

"Which one should I pick?" Su Bai thought for a moment, then decided to put it into "Clone Technique."

He had three reasons for doing so. First, the Three Body Techniques were a major standard in the college entrance exams and directly affected a student's score.

Second, before ninjas learned advanced Ninjutsu, the Three Body Techniques were incredibly useful in combat. They were essential skills for every ninja.

There were only thirteen days left until the college entrance exams. If he could master the Three Body Techniques, he could get into university.

This world and the world of ninjas were still somewhat alike. The only ways to obtain advanced Ninjutsu were to risk your life in a Secret Realm or learn it at school.

Of course, people from powerful clans could draw on their clan's resources and get a head start without having to work for it.

But Su Bai was just an ordinary person. His parents weren't even ninjas, so he could only rely on himself.

Getting into a good university was the most important thing right now!

The third reason was the system task: raise any one of the Three Body Techniques to level one. Clone Technique had the most experience, so it was the best choice.

Su Bai focused his mind and used his only available Attribute Point on "Clone Technique"!

After he did, the number in parentheses beside Clone Technique changed from "14/100" to "114/200," and its level changed from "LV0" to "LV1." Along with it came a strange sensation.

A line of text appeared before his eyes—[Task completed. Reward distributed.]

"Attribute Points and experience have a one-to-one-hundred ratio?" With this information, Su Bai excitedly jumped out of bed and formed Hand Seals, following his body's memories.

Ram—Snake—Tiger

Two seconds later, a puff of white smoke burst into the hospital room with a bang. When it cleared, a clone identical to him stood there!

"Fantastic! Just as I thought, level one means I've mastered the basics!"

Su Bai was delighted as he looked at the clone before him.

As far as he knew, mastering the basics of the Three Body Techniques was enough to meet the admission requirements for an ordinary university.

He still had two Attribute Points. If he put them into Substitution Technique and Transformation Technique, he'd meet the requirements for university admission right away!

But he wasn't going to settle for that. In the past, he hadn't had any other options, so getting into an ordinary university would've been more than enough. Now, though, he wouldn't think that way.

He had a system now. If he was going to university, he was going to the best!

There were three top universities on Blue Star: Jiuzhou University, Europe University, and America University.

All three were equally powerful, each representing the highest level of education on its continent. They were the dream schools of countless students!

Just then, a new task appeared.

[Raise overall assessment to Genin. Reward: 5 available Attribute Points]

"Genin, huh?" Su Bai murmured as he looked at the task panel.

From his memories, he knew how this world ranked ninjas and Ninjutsu. From strongest to weakest, the ranks of Ninjutsu were: S-Rank (Ultimate), A-Rank, B-Rank, C-Rank, and D-Rank.

The ninja ranks were:

Genin: Master one D-Rank Ninjutsu and have at least 1 Kakashi.

Chunin: Master two C-Rank Ninjutsu and have a Chakra Level of at least 100 Kakashi.

Elite Chunin: Master three C-Rank Ninjutsu or one B-Rank Ninjutsu and have a Chakra Level of over 500.

Special Jonin: Have a Chakra Level of at least 700 and one ability that meets Jonin standards.

Jonin: Master two attributes and one A-Rank Ninjutsu, and have a Chakra Level of at least 1,000.

Elite Jonin: Have a Chakra Level of at least 3,000, know Ninjutsu of at least three attributes, and have mastered one S-Rank Ninjutsu.

That was all the information Su Bai could get his hands on for now. There might be even stronger ninjas above Elite Jonin, but they were beyond his reach.

He was also confused about chakra levels.

From his memories, even Genin had an astonishing amount of chakra. In one fight, they could use a hundred or so D-Rank Ninjutsu with no problem. That was more chakra than an average Jonin in the original story!

Looking at the unit used to measure chakra on the panel, Su Bai complained,

"Kakashi... Does that mean this unit is based on Kakashi?"

He remembered a chart that netizens had made in his previous life to mock Kakashi for being "out of chakra." It showed that one Naruto was worth several hundred Kakashis...

Chapter 4: D-Class Magical Beast: Iron-Horned Sheep

Yang City, officially called Yang City Base City, covered more than 6,000 square kilometers and had a population close to 100 million. It was a medium-sized city in the Kyushu District.

"Base City" was the term humanity had come up with for the safe zones where people lived and raised families after the Magic Beasts invaded. Security in the city was extremely tight. Not only were high-ranking ninjas stationed there, but it was also stocked with countless modern weapons!

The total population of Blue Star was now under five billion. Only one percent of them were ninjas, roughly fifty million. The rest were ordinary people without the talent to train.

Of those fifty million ninjas, Genin and Chunin made up more than ninety-five percent. Jonin accounted for less than five percent.

That figure also included many "Special Jonin." If you excluded these "pseudo-Jonin," who met the standards in only one particular area... true Jonin probably made up less than one percent. They were extremely rare.

Jonin enjoyed enormous privileges. They could kill someone without facing any consequences, and their social status was unimaginable.

That was why Su Bai wanted to become a ninja. On this dangerous Blue Star, only by becoming a Jonin could he protect himself and his family.

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