PS: Because of the previous evaluation of me by a great master, he said that I had a good idea for writing a book, I was innovative enough, and the plot and description were decent, but I lacked emotion and the narrative was too rigid... For this reason, I also asked the great master to modify the plot of a chapter I wrote before and let me compare it myself.
I really didn't know it until I saw it, and I was shocked when I saw it. The plot was originally the same, but it was just changed, and the gap felt infinite. There was no comparison at all... This is the difference between a great master and a newcomer scumbag...
Therefore, in order to make this book better and give everyone a better reading experience, I have saved the revised plot given to me by this master. After that, when I describe any plot, I will compare it with the plot before writing. I believe that it won't be long before Madman's writing skills will get better and better, and the plots he writes will become more and more exciting. So, please continue to support Madman!!!
This chapter was written by a lunatic by referring to the plot modified by the master and imitating his writing style. It can be regarded as a preliminary attempt by the lunatic. I hope you all like it...
The following text:
"I didn't expect that the current Kirigakure situation has become so critical. Even Mei Terumi, who has such a strong temper, can't help but ask me for help. It seems... I really need to go to Kirigakure! However, before I go to Kirigakure, I still need to find someone."...
As he spoke, Jun Tianlin's lazy black pupils gradually exuded a fierceness, his cheeks were full of murderous aura, and the evil smile at the corner looked particularly ferocious at this moment!
"Bang"
The next second, only a soft sound was heard, and Jun Tianlin's figure was no longer in the room, leaving only the door still swinging, indicating Jun Tianlin's departure.
After several turns, Jun Tianlin appeared in front of a black door again. He quickly took a step forward and knocked on the black door casually. Then Jun Tianlin opened his mouth and shouted loudly to the door, "Brother, hurry up Gate of Opening, I have something to see you for"!
"Crunch"
With a series of soft sounds, the black door was opened, and a young man who was five points similar to Jun Tianlin came out. The two red Tomoe between his eyebrows and the head of white hair all proved this person's identity---Kaguya Clan Kimimaro!
"Tianlin, what do you want to see me for?" Kimimaro was extremely happy when he saw his biological brother, whom he hadn't seen for a long time, coming to see him. A happy smile was revealed on his handsome little face without any concealment.
"Brother, you make it sound like I'm ruthless. Can't I just come to you if I have nothing to do? We two... are brothers." Hearing Kimimaro's unconventional words, Jun Tianlin also raised his eyebrows in dissatisfaction and retorted unhappily.
"Yara Yala, that's right. We are brothers, so why should we care so much? However, I still understand your temperament to a certain extent. If there is nothing important, you will definitely not come to me! Tell me, what kind of trouble did you encounter this time? I want my brother to help you solve it."
Kimimaro smiled at Jun Tianlin, his eyes flashed slightly, revealing a gleam of wisdom, as if I had already seen through you, and asked Jun Tianlin unceremoniously.
Seeing Kimimaro being so witty, Jun Tianlin also smiled sheepishly, "As you said, brother, I really have something to come to you for. However, the one who is really in trouble is not me, but your younger siblings"!
"Eh? Wait, Tianlin, what did you... just say? Brother and sister? Good boy, when did you get so quick and take advantage of me when I wasn't paying attention to hook up a younger brother and sister? Is this what happened when you went out to Konoha?"
At first, Kimimaro didn't notice anything about you. After Kimimaro reacted, he opened his eyes wide and looked at Jun Tianlin in surprise, and said jokingly with a smirk on his face.
Hearing that his eldest brother had also become the eighth wife, Jun Tianlin's forehead was dripping with cold sweat. He hurriedly put Teuchi aside and Kimimaro continued to want to find out, and quickly opened his mouth to tell the purpose of his coming here.
"Brother, are you paying attention to the wrong point? The focus now is not how I got Mei Terumi, but that I came to you for help, so that we can help Mei Terumi solve the problem together!"
However, Kimimaro, who had already set up a circle waiting for Jun Tianlin to infiltrate, after hearing Jun's words, not only did the evil smile on his face not subside, but it intensified and became more serious.
"Nani Nani? It turns out that my sister-in-law's name is Mei Terumi. Tsk tsk tsk. This name is really good. It seems that your vision is quite good!
Not bad, this spirit is worth carrying forward, little brother, you must continue to work hard!
Moreover, I, Kaguya Clan, are the only two of us left now, but I am not a womanizer, my eldest brother, so the responsibility of carrying on the family lineage for my Kaguya Clan family falls entirely on you. Little brother, you have to work harder and bring me a few more younger siblings so that I can have my nephew as soon as possible!"
"Big brother"!
Hearing Kimimaro talking more and more, exposing his bones and going too far, Jun Tianlin, who couldn't resist it, had no choice but to yell in dissatisfaction, trying to stop Kimimaro from teasing him...
"Okay, okay, why don't I stop talking?"! I felt that my younger brother was really a little angry, and Kimimaro also decisively let go, no longer daring to continue to use words to stimulate Jun Tianlin. Otherwise, once Jun Tianlin was really angry, it would really not end well for Kimimaro, as the elder brother.
On the other side, seeing Kimimaro give up the intention of teasing and gossiping, he couldn't help but feel relieved. Chunin couldn't help but secretly think, "They all say that women gossip about the benefits of Mapo... But now it seems that once this man becomes the eighth wife, he will be ten times more powerful than the woman!"
Jun Tianlin, who was speechlessly complaining in his heart, collected his chaotic thoughts, exhaled softly, and said to Kimimaro with a serious face,
"Brother, I came here this time because I really have something important to come to you about. As I just said, it's about my wife Mei Terumi.
Speaking of which, this matter has a lot to do with the two of us, because my wife is now the Fifth Mizukage Successor of Kirigakure, and the New Government Faction leader of her village!
Because Fourth Mizukage Yagura's excessively brutal rule, coupled with the tragedy caused by Kirigakure, which he was responsible for in the past few years - the massacre of 'Bloody Mist Era', has made some other Kirigakure families feel rebellious, and thus Kirigakure New Government Faction is now led by Mei Terumi!
And now, this New Government Faction is about to be ruthlessly strangled by Yagura. Because of its lack of high-end combat power, Mei Terumi also sent me a letter asking for help, asking me to go to Kirigakure to wish her a helping hand.
The reason why I came here to see you, big brother, is because I want you to go to Kirigakure with me to help Mei Terumi... After all, by helping Mei Terumi, we are indirectly helping ourselves!
I will never forget, Kirigakure, no, it should be Fourth Mizukage Yagura, but you still owe us a bloody feud that has not been paid off!"