Thank you to all the readers in the book review section for their comments. Thank you to every book friend for pointing out the shortcomings of this book. Some of them replied, and some of them wanted to reply, but they were busy with work and forgot about it again.
But I have seen them all, thank you, thank you very much.
As a newcomer, what I am actually afraid of is not criticism, but that no one will read it, so I wrote the novel as a stand-alone novel.
There are many problems with this volume. For example, everyone said that the turning point of Jiang Yan is too sudden... Mainly because the newcomers can't grasp the length. At first, I wanted to write the first volume to 300,000 words, followed by Mount Li, First Emperor's Mausoleum, and others. A witchcraft battle between Confucian School, Xiang Jun and Ling Canal, Nanyue, a prominent scholar of the time... As a result, it was only after I started writing the book that I realized that a copy of Zhutian Infinite Current only has about 100,000 words at most.
So it can only be ended hastily.
There are a lot of unfinished stories, a lot of foreshadowing that haven't been laid, and a lot of little stories behind people that haven't been told, which is a pity.
But I turned the protagonist into a big disgusting monster like a mountain of meat. I wrote this and I was completely satisfied.
This book was written to turn the protagonist into a Cthulhu-like monster, a plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings.
Another problem is that after signing the contract and confirming the title of the book, I found out when I read Gu Huo Bird again that Flesh of Vision had already appeared, and Zha Xiaodao was killed.
Originally, I wanted to write a separate story within the framework of Yanfu that had nothing to do with Li Yan and the others, so they had to be related.
Moreover, when Zha Xiaodao met Flesh of Vision, Flesh of Vision was not too strong. Due to this consideration, it was destined that Chen Jin would not be too strong at the end of the first volume.
It's too strong. If it reaches Nine Luminaries, you won't be able to enter the escape-type event.
So it is not for the sake of torturing the owner that Chen Jin has almost nothing to gain from Great Qin.
Later Chen Jin will have a great sale!
Then, I hope you will comment more and criticize more. As a social creature, I can only think about the plot when I am doing mindless work. I may have thought about some plots in my mind countless times, but when I wrote it down, I subconsciously treated it as if it had been mentioned before, so I didn't mention it to avoid being verbose.
As a result, when some readers commented, I realized that I had forgotten to write it, resulting in some parts that people could not understand.
I will make more changes and work hard to improve, so please bear with me.