Douluo: Fantasy System, I Can Modify the Plot
Chapter 1

Fantasy System

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[Fantasy System binding...]

[System binding successful!]

[Obtained Newbie Gift Pack: Modification Count *1!]

[Under the gaze of Fang Qingshan and Su Yuntao, a writing brush manifested in Duan Fan's right hand. Su Yuntao was somewhat surprised; it was his first time seeing someone with a writing brush as their Spirit. He was also somewhat disappointed—what could a writing brush possibly be used for in the future? It was destined to be a trash Spirit. Subsequently, with Su Yuntao's assistance, Duan Fan underwent the innate spirit power test, which resulted in a level five innate spirit power.]

[Keyword [Innate Spirit Power] detected, level modification available!]

Seeing the text before him, Duan Fan was incredibly shocked, followed immediately by wild joy. A system?! The system had finally arrived! Duan Fan had been in this world for six years, waiting every day for the system's arrival, and today, he had finally waited it out! He was originally from Blue Star, having transmigrated to the Douluo World after dying suddenly from working overtime. His parents in this world were both deacons of the Spirit Hall, but they had both passed away while out on a mission. It was his father's friend, Fang Qingshan, who adopted him and raised him to this day. Today was the day of Duan Fan's Spirit awakening, and early in the morning, Fang Qingshan had brought him to the Notting City Spirit Branch Hall. At this moment, they were outside the Spirit awakening room on the second floor of the branch hall, waiting for the branch deacon to arrive. While waiting, Duan Fan had fantasized about the results of his Spirit awakening. Suddenly, a mechanical female voice rang out deep in his mind, leading to the current scene.

Suppressing the excitement in his heart, Duan Fan carefully examined the information before him. So Su Yuntao is the one awakening my Spirit, my Spirit is a writing brush, and my innate spirit power level is five. After reading it, Duan Fan couldn't help but mutter in his heart: Is what is written here what is about to happen next?

Before Duan Fan could think too much, the sound of footsteps came from the other side of the corridor, followed by the voice of a young man. "Teacher Fang, I'm sorry to have kept you waiting!" Duan Fan followed the sound and saw a young man in a white martial outfit walking toward them, a look of apologetic warmth on his handsome face. "Not at all, we just arrived. Yuntao, we are the ones causing you trouble." A hearty laugh rang out beside Duan Fan as Fang Qingshan, dressed in a green robe and standing nearly two meters tall, walked forward to greet Su Yuntao. Fang Qingshan made a brief introduction: "Xiao Fan, this is Master Su Yuntao! Call him Uncle!" "Yuntao, this is my nephew, Duan Fan."

The one awakening my Spirit really is Su Yuntao! Duan Fan was slightly stunned, then immediately called out obediently: "Hello, Uncle!" Su Yuntao gave Duan Fan a gentle smile and nodded slightly.

After some pleasantries, Su Yuntao led Fang Qingshan and Duan Fan into the Spirit awakening room. It was a very spacious room with no extra decorations, save for a set of table and chairs placed by the window. Six black round stones were embedded in the floor, arranged in a hexagon. Su Yuntao walked straight to the wooden table, took out a blue crystal ball and placed it on the table, then took out a pen and a record book and handed them to Fang Qingshan. "Teacher Fang, please trouble yourself to register the information." "Very well." After Fang Qingshan took them, before he could even start writing, Su Yuntao had already told Duan Fan to stand in the middle of the six round stones.

"Lone Wolf, possess!" Su Yuntao gave a low shout, green light released from between his brows, his hair turning gray and growing longer, and gray fur sprouting on his hands. At the same time, his body expanded, his entire frame filled with muscle, his eyes turned green, sharp claws extended from his ten fingers, and two rings of light—one white and one yellow—floated beneath his feet. "Don't be afraid, little one. Close your eyes and feel it carefully; it will be over soon." Duan Fan nodded and did as he was told, his face showing no signs of fear; it wasn't his first time seeing a Spirit Master. His uncle, Fang Qingshan, was a Spirit Master—an Azure Ox Spirit, a level thirty-four Spirit Elder who worked at the Notting Junior Spirit Master Academy.

Without further ado, Su Yuntao immediately helped Duan Fan with his Spirit awakening. Su Yuntao clapped his hands repeatedly, and six beams of green light flew out, sinking into the six black stones. The next second, golden light bloomed from the black stones, rising up to form a golden light barrier that enveloped Duan Fan. Duan Fan only felt a wave of warmth instantly wrap around his entire body, and his whole person entered a state of extreme relaxation.

A warm current emerged within his body, guiding all the warm energy to surge toward the palm of his right hand.

Duan Fan instinctively raised his right hand, where black and white light condensed in his palm, finally taking the form of a brush about thirty centimeters long.

Its appearance was no different from an ordinary writing brush, save for being slightly larger in size; it featured a black handle and a slightly bulging ferrule that held a tuft of snow-white wolf hair.

"A brush Martial Soul?"

By this time, Su Yuntao had returned to his original form, his face showing a trace of surprise, though disappointment was more prominent.

Su Yuntao looked at Fang Qingshan and smiled faintly. "Teacher Fang, a brush Martial Soul is quite rare!"

Fang Qingshan nodded, looking at the brush in Duan Fan's hand with a complex gaze before saying, "Trouble yourself to test Xiaofan's innate soul power, Yuntao!"

Hearing that he was about to have his innate soul power tested, Duan Fan finally snapped back to reality.

Everything currently happening was basically consistent with the information he had seen on the system; if he didn't make any changes now, the result of his innate soul power test would most likely be level five.

Su Yuntao had already arrived in front of Duan Fan holding a blue glass ball. "Little guy, try to use your mind to retract your Martial Soul, then place your right hand on this."

"O-okay."

Duan Fan replied, then attempted to retract his Martial Soul while simultaneously contacting the system.

"I want to modify my innate soul power level."

[Please proceed with the modification!]

The system responded immediately, and at the same time, an information panel appeared before Duan Fan's eyes once more.

The innate soul power level written on it had become blank, as if waiting for Duan Fan to fill it in.

Duan Fan hesitated for only a second before thinking to himself, "Innate soul power level, one hundred!"

[Modification failed! Please make a reasonable modification!]

"Reasonable? Is my innate soul power level being one hundred not reasonable?"

Duan Fan didn't dwell on it too much and continued to modify it: "Innate soul power level, twenty!"

[Modification failed! Please make a reasonable modification!]

"Still not reasonable? Isn't Qian Renxue's innate soul power level twenty? Why can't I have it?"

"Fifteen!"

[Modification failed!]

"Twelve!"

[Modification failed!]

"Ten!"

[Confirm modification?]

"Confirm!"

After some trial and error, Duan Fan finally succeeded in modifying his innate soul power level to ten.

As expected, the highest I can modify it to is ten. Only god-tier Martial Souls can possess an innate soul power of twenty; the limit for ordinary Martial Souls must be ten.

By this time, Duan Fan had already retracted his brush Martial Soul and placed his right hand on the blue crystal ball, feeling its cold touch.

The next second, a terrifying suction force came from the blue crystal ball, and Duan Fan felt as if all the warmth in his body was about to be drained away.

Immediately following, a dazzling blue light bloomed from within the blue crystal ball, instantly spreading across the entire sphere and covering the whole room in a blue halo.

"Innate full soul power!"

Su Yuntao was dumbfounded, green light flashing across his hand as he pushed Duan Fan's hand away.

He looked at Duan Fan in disbelief, as if he were looking at a monster.

Equally shocked was Fang Qingshan, who also shouted excitedly, "It's innate full soul power! Brother Duan, did you see that? Xiaofan has innate full soul power!"

Compared to Su Yuntao and Fang Qingshan, Duan Fan, who had known the result in advance, appeared much calmer on the outside, though he was quite excited on the inside.

My innate soul power level really was successfully modified!

System, why don't you modify my Martial Soul as well and make it a twin Martial Soul?

[Insufficient modification attempts, unable to perform modification!]

So it really can be modified into a twin Martial Soul? Why didn't you say so earlier?

Then how do I obtain modification attempts?

[Detected that the original protagonist of the current world is Tang San. Reasonably modifying Tang San's destiny will grant system rewards and modification attempts!]

Modify Tang San's destiny? How do I modify it?

At this moment, a line of text appeared before Duan Fan's eyes, describing how Tang San had just finished practicing his Purple Demon Eye at dawn and was preparing to head home.

Is this what Tang San is currently experiencing? The system didn't give any prompts either. In what direction should I modify it? Am I supposed to just improvise?

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