[For example, the plot in the later stages where Du Busi self-destructs, intending to kill the Sun Moon Empire's Emperor, Xu Tianran.]
[Ye Xishui keeps claiming later on that the person she loves most is Long Xiaoyao.]
[But what is the result? Du Busi's self-destruction is about to endanger Long Xiaoyao's life.]
[Yet Ye Xishui doesn't care in the slightest about the life or death of her old lover; instead, she thinks about absorbing the power of the Sun Moon Empire's countless departed souls.]
[With behavior like this, you say she loves Long Xiaoyao? You say she isn't willing to become stronger?]
[Even Du Busi saw it before he died: Ye Xishui is merely using Long Xiaoyao!]
[Long Xiaoyao is a fool himself, too. Two idiots—no wonder they ended up together.]
[Ye Xishui wants to become stronger, yet she consistently abandons her greatest advantage—her twin martial souls—knowing only how to devour negative energy, which lowers her own ceiling.]
[Abandoning the long to pursue the short; you are truly a genius!]
[Beyond that, there are all the things Ye Xishui did. Earlier, she acted as if she had such great ambition, wanting to carry forward the Holy Spirit Cult.]
[But when the finale approached and Xu Tianran wanted to cooperate with her, Ye Xishui suddenly wasn't willing anymore, claiming she was tired.]
[Are you brain-damaged?]
[You women, can you ever figure out what you actually want?]
[One minute it's this, the next it's that. Does the whole world have to cater to your whims?]
[In the end, when Ye Xishui is blown to bits, she says she was already tired of living.]
[You should have said so earlier! If you were tired of living, then why did you spend all that time trying every means to gain power and throwing yourself into evil?]
[Finally, Ye Xishui still relies on the power of the Bright Phoenix to preserve her last bit of life.]
[You spent your whole life not cultivating the Phoenix, yet when you're about to die, you have to rely on the Bright Phoenix to save yourself, right?]
[The most disgusting part is later, when Ye Xishui knows her soul state cannot be maintained for long and tells the truth to Long Xiaoyao.]
[In other words, if you hadn't been dying, you would have truly kept it hidden until the end.]
[She even tells Long Xiaoyao that they have a son together, who also possesses the Bright Phoenix martial soul.]
[Ye Xishui's original surname was Yan, so their descendant also took the surname Yan and was sent to Shrek Academy.]
[The current Sea God Pavilion Master of Shrek Academy, Yan Shaozhe, is their descendant.]
[The most moronic part is here: in the original text, Ye Xishui says in one paragraph that Yan Shaozhe is their son, and in the next, she says he is their son's descendant.]
[Of course, this must be because that idiot Third Young Master wrote it inconsistently; it's not rare for the Third Young Master's settings to conflict with themselves every few paragraphs.]
[However, as a character in the writing, whether the Third Young Master wrote it intentionally or unintentionally, it is all part of the character.]
[With a brain like yours, you can't even distinguish between your own son and grandson?]
[Isn't this just adding a "stupid" label to yourself?]
[The most disgusting thing of all is that Ye Xishui later wants to pass her cultivation to Tang Wutong, saying that her physical body was already blown to pieces in the Ming Capital.]
[Therefore, her sins have vanished along with her body, and her soul power is now clean.]
[Pfft!--]
[This is being so stupid that you don't even realize your own stupidity; you act until you even believe it yourself!]
[I beg you, go see a neurologist!]
[With that IQ of yours, you are truly deceiving yourself. It's stupid to the extreme. You can actually come up with this kind of whitewashing method?]
[Just because your body was blown up, your lifelong sins just vanish into thin air? The countless innocent people who died—they don't blame you anymore?]
[Does that mean all your previous actions were controlled by your body, and your brain is just a decoration?]
[Come to think of it, with an IQ like that, it's very possible your brain is just an ornament!]
[So, if Bibi Dong only had partial self-contradiction and partial stupidity.]
[Then Ye Xishui is the "plus" version, the "intelligence-nerfed" version, the "hypocritical" version of Bibi Dong. She surpasses Bibi Dong by far!]
[For a character like this, this Sharp Critique is still just the tip of the iceberg; the other disgusting details are as numerous as the hairs on an ox.]
[If I weren't afraid of being accused of padding the word count, I could find a pile of other problems with Ye Xishui alone!]
[Sharp Critique complete!]
It was clear that by the end of the Sharp Critique, the Light Screen had let itself go.
Originally, it probably wanted to restrain itself a bit to avoid being banned.
But Ye Xishui was truly disgusting to the extreme; it was difficult to hold back.
After watching the characters one by one, everyone felt helpless and speechless.
[God of Evil (Douluo Era 1)]: "Looking at it this way, such a moronic character is truly frustrating."
[God of Evil (Douluo Era 1)]: "One moment she's evil, the next she's tired. She pleases neither side and fails to reach the extreme in either."
[God of Evil (Douluo Era 1)]: "Either be evil to the extreme, or be a proper good person. Someone like this is truly trash!"
[God of Evil (Douluo Era 1)]: "If she were evil to the extreme, perhaps she might have actually drawn a sliver of my attention..."
[Douluo Era 2 Ji Dong]: "Brother Evil, don't talk nonsense. You aren't thinking of passing your godhood to her, are you?"
[Douluo Era 1 God of Evil]: "Oh? And who are you?"
[Douluo Era 2 Ji Dong]: "I am your XXX! On the XX continent, you were the one who XXXXXX!"
[Douluo Era 1 God of Evil]: "What are you talking about?"
[Douluo Era 2 Ji Dong]: "Damn it, I can't reveal future events. Forget it, nothing to be done then."
[Douluo Era 1 God of Evil]: "Whatever. I only said I might pay a little attention; I never said I was going to pass my godhood to her."
[Douluo Era 2 Huo Yuhao]: "Can a person like that really be redeemed in the future? And who is this Tang Wutong?"
[Douluo Era 2 Huo Yuhao]: "Such a devil, such a lunatic—is she actually willing to accept her inheritance?"
[Douluo Era 2 Huo Yuhao]: "Can all one's sins be washed away just by changing bodies? If this Tang Wutong is willing to accept her inheritance, it seems she isn't anything good either!"
[Douluo Era 2 Wang Dong]: "Indeed! But for some reason, whenever I hear the name Tang Wutong, I feel like it sounds familiar."
[Douluo Era 2 Yan Shaozhe]: "I, I... is there something wrong with this Light Screen? Why does my name appear in it?"
[Douluo Era 2 Yan Shaozhe]: "How could I possibly be a descendant of Ye Xishui? Is this Light Screen malfunctioning?"
[Douluo Era 2 Long Xiaoyao]: "Xishui, is this true?"
[Douluo Era 2 Ye Xishui]: "Xiaoyao, I'm sorry..."
[Douluo Era 2 Yan Shaozhe]: "Hey! You old hag, don't talk nonsense! You're the leader of the Holy Spirit Cult, and I'm a Shrek elder!"
[Douluo Era 2 Yan Shaozhe]: "Who is your descendant! I am a man of Shrek, this is impossible! Damn it!!"
[Douluo Era 2 Xuan Zi]: "However, this Light Screen actually says you'll be able to become the Pavilion Master of the Sea God Pavilion in the future, Shaozhe?"
[Douluo Era 2 Xuan Zi]: "Nothing is going to happen to Elder Mu, is it? Otherwise, how would it ever be your turn?"
[Douluo Era 2 Yan Shaozhe]: "I don't know, I... I'm very confused right now..."
[Douluo Era 2 Xu Tianran]: "I couldn't care less about the Holy Spirit Cult! But why does this Light Screen say I'm the future Emperor of the Sun Moon Empire?"
[Douluo Era 2 Xu Tianran]: "Could it be that... I can become emperor too?"
[Douluo Era 2 Xu Tianran]: "I was clearly just... Father, I never expected you to value me so much?!"
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