Yukinoshita's Correction Method

Even the ends of the ties on the bottoms are decorated with cute little cat paws.

This design... is outrageous.

Yukino Yukinoshita opened her mouth, but couldn't bring herself to say no.

Dong Yunshan casually took it off. "I think it suits me quite well..."

He wanted to make some gestures on Yukino Yukinoshita, but as soon as he reached out his hand, he immediately realized something was wrong.

This isn't the kind of garment you can easily compare it to on your body like an outer dress.

Thinking of this, he pulled his hand back... No, that's not right either, it looks like he's comparing it to himself.

Yukino Yukinoshita took the clothes hanger from his hand. "I don't think it suits you."

After informing the sales assistant of the correct size, Yukino Yukinoshita received the corresponding outfit and also chose a nightgown, which she then took to the counter to pay for.

Dong Yunshan remembered the suit Yukino Yukinoshita had bought for him before and stopped her from paying. "Let me pay."

Yukino Yukinoshita pursed her cherry lips slightly. "I'll do it myself."

"These are my choices." Dong Yunshan finally had a chance to repeat what Yukino Yukinoshita had said before. After completing the payment, she took the shopping bag and shook it. "Go ahead and choose what you want to buy."

Volume 6: Chapter 276 Triggering a Combo

For couples about to get married, how to live a good life together in the long run is a question that requires long-term consideration.

The wedding that is just around the corner is a romantic microcosm of future married life.

Just as many people look forward to a happy married life but worry that it might not be, many people have high hopes for their wedding but also worry about various things that might happen during the ceremony...

Wedding consulting companies emerged as a result.

After years of development, wedding consulting companies are no longer just simple wedding planners, but important connectors for almost all wedding-related aspects, such as wedding dress companies and wedding venues.

At a wedding planning company, you can experience different types of weddings and learn about each aspect of the ceremony...

A wedding is the beginning of marriage, and marriage is the continuation of a wedding.

A happy marriage deserves a beautiful wedding as its beginning, and a beautiful wedding begins with choosing the right wedding planning company.

The future is still far away, but happiness is right before our eyes.

Give me your trust, and I'll give you everything you need.

Appointment phone number...

"Wait a minute," Yukino Yukinoshita irritably, shoving the can of cola at Dong Yunshan. "Isn't this just turning into an advertisement?"

"Really?" Dong Yunshan glanced at Yukino Yukinoshita beside her, then turned to look at the computer screen. "It really is. No wonder I was getting better and better at writing; I've triggered a combo..."

"While the details are well-written, the foundation is flawed and needs revision..." Yukino Yukinoshita put down her teacup and leaned closer, her fingers swiping across the touchpad, adjusting the mouse cursor. "Delete the rest, then revise this... Hmm? This can't be changed, so this side..."

Dong Yunshan initially thought that Yukino Yukinoshita would only give a simple instruction, so he raised his hand while drinking his cola so as not to interfere with her.

She immediately started making changes.

Dong Yunshan thought of getting up to make room for Yukino Yukinoshita so that she could sit down and make the revisions at her own pace.

But it was too late.

Before he could move aside, Yukino Yukinoshita sat down first.

"Hmm?" Yukino Yukinoshita frowned slightly, staring at the article written by Dong Yunshan. She repeatedly adjusted the mouse cursor, deleting, revising, and undoing. "How could this be..."

She initially thought that all she had to do was delete the content that looked like an advertisement and replace it with other content.

When they actually started making changes, I immediately felt a strong sense of incongruity.

It felt so awkward, almost like being unable to sneeze.

First, she raises a problem that all newlyweds face, then uses examples of unexpected situations that occur during the wedding ceremony, as mentioned by Mizuno Miho, to create anxiety around this issue, and finally introduces a wedding consulting company that can solve the problem.

By using specific scenarios to enhance realism, people are encouraged to put themselves in the wedding planning company's shoes and consider how many problems they can solve.

Then, by using endorsements from various authoritative institutions mentioned in the promotional materials, the wedding consulting company's professionalism is enhanced.

Finally... it felt like something was missing without a phone call to make an appointment.

The emotions build gradually, the structure is complete, and the transitions are natural.

Nothing I deleted or modified seems quite right.

The chair beneath her was a little uncomfortable, Yukino Yukinoshita shifted slightly, but it didn't make much difference.

With her fingers lightly resting on the keyboard and her other hand's fingers touching her chin, Yukino Yukinoshita stared at the screen, pondering a better solution.

How should it be changed...? It can't be changed.

Yukino Yukinoshita thought this article was well-written, so I figured I could just modify it and use it.

In retrospect, the issue with this article wasn't how to revise it, but rather...

"It's fundamentally wrong." Yukino Yukinoshita turned her head. "It has to be deleted and rewritten..."

"... Gulp." Dong Yunshan's Adam's apple bobbed as he swallowed the bubbly cola. "Then... then let's rewrite it... I'll go cook."

"Hmm... hmm?" Yukino Yukinoshita had just stood up, frowned and sat down again. "Didn't you say I was going to do it?"

"Isn't that a lunchbox?" Dong Yunshan's expression stiffened. "Besides, if it needs to be rewritten, I can't help much; in fact, I might make things worse."

"... That's true." Yukino Yukinoshita stood up. "I'll call you when I'm done writing."

"Hmm," Dong Yunshan responded, her steps stiff as she walked towards the kitchen.

Yukino Yukinoshita touched her cheek with the back of her hand, then casually tucked her hair behind her ear.

She gently fanned her cheeks with her delicate white hands, creating a breeze to dissipate heat.

Taking a deep breath, Yukino Yukinoshita creates a new document and calms down to write.

Humans don't just jump out of a toaster when the time comes; even when they reach the legal age to marry, there are many people who have never thought about getting married.

Marriage is a choice many people make, but that doesn't mean not getting married is a mistake.

Everyone has different experiences, personalities, and thoughts.

Whether marriage is the right choice cannot be determined based on hearsay alone.

However, as a major life event, marriage is not something to be taken lightly, nor is it something to be attempted lightly.

Experiencing a wedding is a relatively suitable opportunity to try it out.

Whether or not you intend to get married, you should seriously consider the issue of marriage.

Experiencing a wedding firsthand can make this kind of thinking more profound and objective.

Wedding planning companies offer a variety of wedding experiences.

Just like different lives, every wedding has different attire and procedures, and also different meanings.

Take Shinto-style Ceremony wedding as an example...

Yukino Yukinoshita glanced at what Dong Yunshan had written after writing this.

It's well written.

Although it was intended as an advertisement, there weren't any major issues with the content.

Especially that immersive feeling of happiness... 0.

Yukino Yukinoshita pursed her cherry lips slightly and continued writing the following content.

While striving for happiness during the wedding experience, it's inevitable that some experiences will be unpleasant.

The complicated attire, the tedious procedures, the strict rules... facing all of this, negative emotions may occasionally arise.

And this may be the norm in marriage.

Even two people who want to live together happily will one day experience different emotions.

A wedding is a snapshot of marriage; marriage is the embodiment of a wedding.

The same issues that need to be addressed at a wedding are also unavoidable in marriage.

Although it's not a real marriage, experiencing a wedding allows one to get a firsthand feel for what marriage truly is.

The true meaning of an experience lies in the reflections that follow...

Volume 6: Chapter 277 Sleep Well

Yukino Yukinoshita has already written down what she wanted to express.

But it still feels like something's missing.

"The future is still far away..." Yukino Yukinoshita murmured softly, looking at Dong Yunshan's manuscript, "Is happiness just around the corner...?"

Turning her head to glance at the busy figure in the kitchen, Yukino Yukinoshita her fair fingertips.

The future may not be as far away as we imagine; the happiness right before our eyes requires us to reach out and touch it.

Yukino Yukinoshita called out, "Yunshan."

"Hold head high?"

"I've finished writing."

"Let's eat first." Dong Yunshan brought the prepared dishes to the table. "We can look at it after we finish eating."

Yukino Yukinoshita proofread the document once, then washed her hands and ate.

Just as Dong Yunshan finished eating and Yukino Yukinoshita cleared the table, Dong Yunshan finished reading.

Wiping the water off her hands, Yukino Yukinoshita approached and asked, "How are you?"

Dong Yunshan: "It's fine."

Yukino Yukinoshita stared at him intently.

Dong Yunshan: "Uh... there's still room for improvement."

Yukino Yukinoshita narrowed her eyes slightly.

Dong Yunshan: "It's not very good. I feel it's not even as good as the advertisement."

Yukino Yukinoshita nodded in satisfaction. "What's the reason?"

"Look at what I wrote," Dong Yunshan said, controlling the mouse. "Emotional resonance, need awakening, solution, conversion guidance—all in one smooth motion."

Yukino Yukinoshita glared at him. "Isn't it about creating anxiety, generating demand, leading to solutions, and embedding advertisements?"

"You could say that," Dong Yunshan pointed out the key point, "In short, my theme and purpose are clear, and the ultimate goal is to promote our partners."

Yukino Yukinoshita looked at her manuscript. "Is my theme unclear?"

"Simply put..." Dong Yunshan shrugged, "It's someone who hasn't succeeded yet promoting their self-developed success philosophy."

It's essentially still an advertisement, but instead of promoting the partner, it's promoting Yukino Yukinoshita's own ideas.

I don't have much confidence yet.

A well-known problem, solutions with unknown effects, and vague conclusions.

Yukino Yukinoshita carefully compared the two manuscripts, her brows furrowing even more deeply.

Although it was the same event, the two people wrote completely different things, which is essentially due to the difference in their thinking.

Dong Yunshan treated this as a job assignment, with almost no original thought of his own; everything was geared towards releasing the appointment hotline at the end.

Yukino Yukinoshita is unable to suppress her own thoughts; she wants to both promote the event and offer her own suggestions, without yet knowing the specific results.

The result was that ideas weren't well expressed, promotion wasn't done well, and suggestions were rarely adopted.

It's definitely not as good as the advertisement.

"This definitely won't work." Yukino Yukinoshita pressed her temple. "Further modifications are needed."

"Or we could just give Yui Yuigahama," Dong Yunshan suggested. "She should be able to capture the feel of a high school student."

"That will have to wait until after we've made some revisions," Yukino Yukinoshita, sitting in front of the computer. "Let's delete some unnecessary content first..."

A few hours slipped by quietly as I made the deletions and revisions.

Dong Yunshan glanced at the time and stretched her stiff shoulders. "Let's call it a day. Continuing to make these changes won't be effective at all."

"Go to sleep first." Yukino Yukinoshita stared at the screen, unwilling to give up so easily. "I'll try again."

"No." Dong Yunshan reached out and closed the laptop. "You need to sleep too."