Ch. 801Section 32—The Lone Champion Rat

Key plot points and events

  • Annan asks Williams Morel to have his father collect Rat Ears, without explaining why. Williams then asks for money to hire Rock Giants against a mountain threat.
  • Annan lends Williams 10,000 gold coins immediately and promises another 40,000 in exchange for Rat Ears. In return, he asks the Morel vampires to stop treating humans as livestock, end indiscriminate killings, let humans live aboveground, and trade blood for food and shelter. Williams agrees.
  • Annan believes Blackwatch has collected far more Rat Ears than his forces. With little time left in the Hunt Plan, he sends the Hellfire and Fourth Legions out to hunt more.
  • Femi reports an elusive ratfolk squad led by a “Champion Rat.” Annan pursues it with White Dragons. After its companions are killed, the Champion Rat fights Blom fiercely, showing strength close to that of a Grand Knight.
  • Annan’s forces subdue it. Its unusually humanlike appearance leads Annan to ask whether it is a Stuen Rat. The captive curses him and threatens that its sister will retaliate.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan and Williams: Their teasing, awkward exchange gives way to a practical bargain. Williams’s urgent need makes him accept Annan’s proposed reforms to vampire-human relations.
  • Annan: He remains strategic and resourceful, using money and political compromise to secure allies while also competing to gather Rat Ears.
  • Williams: Though uncomfortable with Annan’s familiarity and the proposed change to vampire customs, he agrees to both the aid and the new arrangement.
  • The Champion Rat: It displays courage and exceptional fighting skill, choosing to attack rather than simply flee. Its mention of a sister introduces a personal stake and a possible future threat.
  • Blom and the Elf Rangers: Blom engages the Champion Rat directly, while the Rangers keep their distance and use arrows to slow it until Annan’s forces can capture it.

Significant themes

  • Pragmatic diplomacy: Annan links financial aid to a major social change, turning a desperate request into an opportunity for cooperation.
  • Changing predator-prey relations: The proposed blood-for-food-and-shelter system challenges the vampires’ established treatment of humans.
  • Competition and urgency: Annan’s effort to gather Rat Ears reflects the pressure of the Hunt Plan’s approaching deadline and Blackwatch’s apparent lead.
  • Identity and humanity: The Champion Rat’s humanlike features complicate the boundary between ratfolk and other peoples, while its threat hints at relationships and loyalties beyond the battlefield.

Ch. 802Annan's Younger Brother

Plot points and events

  • After defeating the Champion Rat, Annan recognizes a resemblance to Maria and asks about her. He has the rat cleaned, brought to his room, and unchained once he realizes the prisoner is Maria’s younger brother.
  • The rat, Jerry, confirms that Maria is still in the Northern Frontier and says she is all right. Annan explains that he and Maria are friends, recalling how they met and helped one another.
  • Jerry tells Annan about their childhood: born near the bottom of the Rat Nest, the siblings were among the few survivors of their litter. Maria was selected by the Clan first, but later returned to rescue and care for Jerry. He eventually showed talent as a Champion Rat and was selected too.
  • Annan offers Jerry food and welcomes him as family. Jerry accepts the food, trusting Annan because Maria trusts him.
  • When Jerry says he and Maria are eight years old, Annan is shocked by how large Jerry is, prompting a humorous reminder that species mature at very different rates.

Character developments

  • Annan shifts from treating Jerry as an enemy to showing him warmth and protection once he discovers their connection. His concern for Maria is clear, and he regards her brother as family.
  • Jerry is initially hostile and suspicious, but opens up about his sister and past. His trust in Annan comes through Maria rather than direct familiarity.
  • Maria, though absent, emerges as a devoted and protective older sister who rescued Jerry and remained his source of comfort.

Significant themes

  • Family and loyalty: The bond between Maria and Jerry stands out in a society where betrayal and exploitation are common.
  • Compassion across former enmity: Annan chooses kindness toward a defeated enemy after learning who he is.
  • Survival and social cruelty: The Rat Nest’s harsh hierarchy, cannibalism, and breeding practices shape the siblings’ childhood.
  • Different measures of age and maturity: Jerry’s age highlights how varied lifespans and development are among species.

Character interactions

  • Annan questions Jerry about Maria and gradually earns his cooperation by explaining their friendship.
  • Jerry’s memories reveal Maria’s care for him and explain why he trusts her judgment.
  • Annan shares food and speaks to Jerry as a younger brother; Jerry responds by eating, while remaining cautious.
  • Blom and the others react with concern about Annan’s apparent interest in a male prisoner, but Annan clarifies that he recognized Jerry as Maria’s brother.

Ch. 803Section 34—The Deal

Plot points

  • Annan questions Jerry, a Stuen Ratfolk who was helping the McKinnon Ratfolk protect Greyfur Rat priests. Jerry explains that the McKeon Clan’s southward advance was prompted by a supposed divine oracle from the Great Horned Rat.
  • Annan doubts the oracle, reasoning that the gods have been absent for three years and that the clan is likely driven by greed after easily conquering the Northern Frontier.
  • Annan persuades Jerry to return north and gather Ratfolk ears in exchange for food made from rat corpses. He offers the food as a way to win support among the Ratfolk and promises to help Jerry rise in rank by leading the Champion Rat Squad.
  • Jerry accepts. Annan gives him a Magic Bag, returns his gear, and sends him through a Portal with the gathered corpses.
  • Annan then visits the Blackwatch command post and asks for the captured Greyfur Rat priest. He reveals that Jerry is a spy he hopes to help gain influence in the McKeon Clan. The Legion Commander and Archmage Albeck agree to hand over the priest.
  • The chapter ends with the Legion Commander joking that five million rat ears would earn Annan the title of First in the Hunt.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan shows himself to be strategic and manipulative, using trust, food, and the promise of advancement to recruit Jerry. He treats Jerry warmly while recognizing that Jerry may take a cut from the deal.
  • Jerry is initially cautious and blunt, but his loyalty to his sister Maria helps Annan win his trust. The opportunity to lead the Champions persuades him to cooperate; his eagerness also reveals his pragmatic, self-interested side.
  • Annan and Jerry negotiate as uneasy allies: Annan appeals to family loyalty, while Jerry sees a chance to improve his standing.
  • Annan and Blackwatch’s leaders cooperate pragmatically. Annan is candid about his spy, and they support his plan despite the priest’s poor condition.

Significant themes

  • Trust and persuasion: Annan uses Jerry’s bond with Maria to build confidence and secure cooperation.
  • Power and ambition: Jerry’s willingness to take risks grows when offered a path to leadership.
  • Faith and political manipulation: The supposed divine oracle may be a pretext for the McKeon Clan’s expansion, reflecting the gods’ apparent absence.
  • Moral compromise and survival: Annan’s grotesque plan to trade rat corpses for ears treats an unsettling arrangement as practical wartime strategy.

Ch. 804Acting

Key plot points and events

  • Jerry crosses the mountains after being released by Annan. Though he appears to have escaped, he is drawn in by Annan’s promise of a chance to rise in Ratfolk society.
  • At the underground Hive City, Jerry discovers that its Priests and Elders are gone, leaving Champion Rats in charge. He offers ten pounds of meat for every Ratfolk left ear, triggering a frenzy of self-mutilation and murder as Ratfolk begin hunting one another for extra rewards.
  • When a rival Champion Rat tries to stop him, Jerry overpowers and humiliates him, asserting his status as a member of the Stuen Clan. Jerry refuses an offer of fresh armor, remembering Annan’s instructions, then leaves with the collected ears. The rival sends pursuers, but they are killed.
  • Jerry meets Annan and gives him the ears. Their haul—combined with the Morel family’s collection—exceeds Blackwatch’s, though Annan still needs a plausible explanation for how they obtained them.
  • Annan shows Jerry the captured gray-furred rat Priest, offering him as a way for Jerry to advance. Annan warns Jerry that the Northern Great Wall is about to become a slaughterhouse and tells him to flee once he secures a post; he also asks Jerry to alert Maria to his presence.
  • Annan arranges a staged escape: Jerry carries the Priest away while Elf Mage Ymir pursues them with genuinely dangerous magic. Jerry evades her attacks, and the Elves stop once their part in the act is complete.

Character developments

  • Jerry shows ambition and cunning. He follows Annan’s plan, exploits the Ratfolk’s greed, and asserts his authority over a rival, while remaining loyal to Annan’s bargain.
  • Annan proves himself a strategic manipulator, using Jerry, the ears, and the captured Priest to advance multiple plans. He also shows genuine concern for Jerry and Maria.
  • The rival Champion Rat is revealed as jealous, greedy, and fearful once Jerry demonstrates his superior strength.
  • Ymir participates in the deception but attacks Jerry with such conviction that the danger is real, leaving her motives ambiguous.

Significant themes

  • Greed and social collapse: A simple reward turns the Ratfolk against one another, exposing how readily desperation and self-interest produce violence.
  • Power and status: Jerry challenges the established hierarchy and stakes his claim to authority through strength and clan identity.
  • Deception and performance: Annan’s plans depend on disguising cooperation as escape and staging events convincingly—even when the staged danger becomes genuine.

Character interactions

  • Jerry and Annan’s relationship rests on an alliance shaped by mutual benefit, but Annan’s warmth toward Jerry and concern for his sister suggest deeper trust.
  • Jerry’s confrontation with the rival Champion Rat shifts their relationship from competition to open enmity.
  • Jerry and the gray-furred Priest briefly reconnect through the Priest’s recognition of his former Guard, just as Ymir’s pursuit interrupts them.

Ch. 805Who's Number One?

Key plot points and events

  • Jerry escapes into the mountains carrying the weakened Grayfur Rat Priest, using a prepared story to explain how he rescued him: he posed as a Champion Rat Captain and tricked the humans into taking rat ears.
  • An imperial Bone Edge Legion inquisitor confronts Annan. He dismisses the question of how Annan obtained the rat ears, but reveals that the Empire knows Annan has dealt privately with Ratfolk. Since Annan is not an imperial citizen, he faces no formal punishment; the inquisitor’s appearance is nevertheless a warning not to cross the Empire.
  • The inquisitor’s reference to Annan’s invented word “Logeb” makes clear that the Empire has been watching events closely. Annan resolves to avoid drawing suspicion, though the surveillance unsettles him.
  • As the Hunt Plan rankings are announced, Annan rushes to the Northern Great Wall with another batch of rat ears. Blom asks the officials to delay the ceremony, and the Legion Commander agrees to wait for Annan.
  • At the stream, the Grayfur Rat Priest recognizes Jerry as a Stuen Rat and rewards him with a promotion to Champion Rat Captain. As the priest bathes, Jerry feels an unexpected sexual desire.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan remains outwardly composed and practical, but learns that the Empire’s reach is broader than he thought. He tries to interpret the inquisitor’s warning as reassurance while privately feeling watched and constrained.
  • Blom understands the inquisitor’s appearance as a warning and explains this to Annan. He then acts quickly to secure Annan’s place in the ranking ceremony.
  • Jerry successfully deceives the Grayfur Rat Priest about his rescue and earns a promotion. His attraction to the priest introduces a new, potentially complicated personal development.
  • The inquisitor shows that the Empire tolerates Annan’s actions for now, but expects him to respect its boundaries. His exchange with Annan underscores the regime’s coercive attitude toward loyalty.
  • Annan and Blom coordinate around the ranking announcement, while the inquisitor’s encounter forces them to consider the political risks of their dealings with Ratfolk.

Significant themes

  • Surveillance and control: The Bone Edge’s unseen observation makes even private actions feel politically dangerous.
  • Fear versus loyalty: The inquisitor’s preferred maxim—that the Empire is meant to be feared, not loved—reveals the regime’s governing philosophy.
  • Prejudice and divided loyalties: Annan’s cooperation with Ratfolk complicates long-standing human distrust, while the Empire treats such contact as a potential threat.
  • Deception and identity: Jerry’s fabricated account and Annan’s invented “Logeb” both show how characters use lies to navigate power.
  • Ambition and recognition: Jerry’s promotion and Annan’s anticipated ranking reward their efforts, while other leaders envy the attention Annan receives.

Ch. 806Grayfur Rat Priest

Plot points and events

  • Jerry brings the wounded Grayfur Rat Priest toward the Rat Nest, hoping to warn the Ratfolk there. She insists on going with him, and he carries her through the cold night.
  • When Jerry wakes, she has bound and tortured him with Fel Energy, accusing him of lying about how he rescued her. Under pressure, he claims he traded Ratfolk ears to Annan in exchange for her release.
  • The Priest drops her suspicion and asks for every detail, seeing the trade as a possible opportunity for the Stuen Clan.
  • At the Northern Great Wall, Annan submits the Rat Ears he collected, those supplied by Williams, and those obtained through Jerry. The total is 5.3 million, winning Free City first place and the Heart of Magic. Blackwatch places second with 4.8 million ears.
  • Annan records the victory for publicity, returns to headquarters, and tells Olmedo the news. She correctly guesses that Free City came first, puncturing his attempt to build suspense.

Character developments and interactions

  • Jerry is attracted to the Grayfur Rat Priest but remains conscious of her superior status. To protect his sister, he gives the Priest a cover story that conceals the real circumstances of his deal with Annan.
  • The Grayfur Rat Priest shifts from suspicion and cruelty to strategic interest. Though she had promised to make Jerry a Champion Rat Captain, she now wants to investigate Annan’s trade.
  • Annan secures the prize through a combination of his own efforts and outside dealings. He feels some guilt about the final total but is relieved to win; he also recognizes the Heart of Magic as a major step toward becoming a Level 6 Sorcerer.
  • Olmedo responds to Annan’s playful setup with dry practicality, showing their familiar, understated rapport.
  • At the awards, the other factions suspect Annan and Blackwatch’s totals do not reflect their actual kills, but no one challenges the results.

Significant themes

  • Deception and political maneuvering: Jerry lies to protect his sister, while the Stuen Clan looks for ways to exploit Annan’s trade.
  • Ambition and uneasy bargains: Annan’s victory depends partly on an ethically murky deal, but it earns Free City a powerful prize.
  • Power and status: Jerry’s attraction is tempered by the gulf between his rank and the Priest’s.
  • Public image versus reality: The recorded announcement presents a clean contest result despite widespread suspicions about how the totals were achieved.

Ch. 807No Matter What

Plot points and events

  • Annan delivers the Heart of Magic to Deputy City Lord Olmedo for installation in the Mage Tower. Though she is overworked, she says helping Free City improve gives her purpose. Annan urges her to rest and to recruit another deputy.
  • Olmedo’s maid gives Annan gingerbread made by Aunt Susan, intended to help him stay healthy during the rainy season. Annan shares it with the Empire’s Blackwatch camp.
  • The gingerbread prompts the Legion Commander to reveal that his family in Pleasant Bay was killed when the Ratfolk devastated the Green Willow Duchy.
  • Annan asks whether Blackwatch still needs its second-place reward, Mountain Essence, and apologizes for winning first place through a loophole in the Ratfolk hunt. Archmage Albeck says Blackwatch accepts the result: the rules allowed it, and the Empire’s purpose was to demonstrate resolve against the invasion.
  • Annan offers 20,000 gold coins for the Mountain Essence. The Legion Commander sells it for only 1,500; Annan leaves the full 20,000 anyway as a contribution to Blackwatch. The Legion Commander has the quartermaster record it.
  • Annan avoids asking about Bone Edge, suspecting that doing so would alert Albeck that an Executor had contacted him and potentially endanger that person. He then wonders whether the Heart of Magic might improve Mr. Victor’s magical affinity.

Character developments

  • Annan shows generosity and humility: he regrets exploiting the contest’s loophole, offers compensation, and quietly supports Blackwatch. He also thinks carefully about protecting Bone Edge.
  • Olmedo is devoted to her work and finds meaning in Free City’s progress, even at the cost of her own rest.
  • The Legion Commander reveals deep personal grief but responds with restraint and generosity, accepting the hunt’s outcome and offering Annan Mountain Essence at a modest price.
  • Archmage Albeck acts as a perceptive, tactful adviser, reassuring Annan while recognizing the meaning behind his questions.

Significant themes

  • Responsibility and fair play: The Empire accepts the contest result because the rules permitted Annan’s tactic, while acknowledging its own failure to close the loophole.
  • Grief and resolve: The Legion Commander’s loss personalizes the Ratfolk invasion; the Empire’s hunt is framed as a public demonstration of resistance.
  • Generosity and chosen family: Food, money, and warm regard create a bond between Annan and Blackwatch beyond formal alliances.
  • Duty and its costs: Olmedo’s commitment to Free City is fulfilling but leaves her visibly worn down.

Character interactions

  • Annan gently encourages Olmedo to rest, while she insists that her work is rewarding.
  • Annan offers gingerbread to the Legion Commander and Albeck; the gesture first brings out the commander’s grief, then opens the way for Annan’s apology and request.
  • Albeck eases Annan’s guilt, and the Legion Commander responds to his offer with humor and a generous price—while Annan’s larger donation earns his quiet approval.

Ch. 808All the Prizes Are Mine

Key plot points and events

  • Philos reveals her name to Jerry, breaking a boundary between their rigid ratfolk ranks. She plans to return to the Hive City with Jerry, the Rat Mother, and the craftsmen. The humans’ response will test whether Annan betrayed Jerry; if they stay away, the clan may try to corrupt Annan.
  • Back at camp, Annan rewards ten of Hellfire Legion’s strongest performers with Mountain Essence, allowing its recipients to decide how to distribute it.
  • Annan learns the hunt’s prizes were concentrated among his coalition. Most are of little use to Free City, but he buys the fourth-place winner’s Seventh Ring Magic Scrolls for defense and gives the third-place winner’s Mithril to Lilith and the Mage Tower.
  • The press reports the northern campaign as a joint victory against the Ratfolk, omitting the competition rankings and the rat-ear tally. Annan rejects Olmedo’s suggestion that Free City establish a secret service like the Empire’s Bone Edge, insisting that Wilhelm should have no dark corners.

Character developments and interactions

  • Philos and Jerry: Philos’s disclosure of her name suggests growing trust, though she still evaluates Annan through the clan’s hierarchy and suspicion. Jerry is surprised by the intimacy of being told her name.
  • Annan and Femi: Annan rewards the legion’s effort and treats the Mountain Essence as a benefit to the whole force, even when senior officers receive it.
  • Annan and Olmedo: Olmedo raises the strategic value of espionage and covert operations. Annan refuses, distinguishing Free City’s ideals from the Empire’s reliance on fear and secrecy. Their banter also highlights Annan’s habit of being away from home.

Significant themes

  • Hierarchy and loyalty: Ratfolk social rank shapes instinctive sacrifice and access to personal identity.
  • Power and recognition: Annan turns military prizes into practical resources for Free City, while the public accounts simplify a complex campaign into a shared victory.
  • Ideals versus expediency: Though secret policing may help stabilize the Empire, Annan wants Wilhelm governed openly rather than through hidden coercion.

Ch. 809Mr. Victor's New Beginning

Key plot points and events

  • The Mage Tower in Free City is still under construction, but its lobby fills with mages and apprentices when Lilith and Olmedo bring in the Heart of Magic.
  • Olmedo explains that Annan earned it fighting Ratfolk at the Northern Great Wall, yet chose to send it to Free City so others could benefit rather than keep it for himself.
  • The gathered mages meditate around the Heart, which slightly improves magical affinity. Olmedo expects it to draw aspiring mages and people with weak affinity to Free City.
  • Olmedo tells Lilith that Annan proposed turning the whole city into a vast magical circuit, allowing everyone to benefit from the Heart. The idea is daunting but technically possible with enough resources.
  • Olmedo sends a Guard to tell Victor to visit the Mage Tower. The Guard softens the original message, saying Annan found the Heart for Victor.
  • Victor hurries to the Tower. Though he had once been Annan’s guide, he has spent years withdrawn from public life, believing his past as a failed Mage Apprentice was little more than a consolation.
  • After Lindy leaves him alone, Victor meditates. He sees magical elements for the first time, and the possibility of magic opens to him after more than fifty years.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan is absent but shapes the chapter through his generous gift and bold vision for Free City.
  • Olmedo is proud of Annan’s generosity but distracted by the larger possibility of transforming the city. He and Lilith discuss the immense engineering and financial challenge.
  • Lilith, treated as a person rather than a tool, responds with curiosity and thoughtful concern.
  • Victor moves from resignation and obscurity toward renewed hope. His familiar gruffness shows in his scolding of Annan, but his reaction to the Heart reveals how much he longs for another chance.
  • Lindy accompanies Victor supportively, though he insists on facing the moment alone. The Guard’s respectful embellishment of Annan’s message reflects the esteem Annan commands.

Significant themes

  • Generosity and shared opportunity: Annan gives up a personal advantage so Free City’s people can benefit.
  • Second chances: The Heart offers Victor a late opportunity to pursue the magic that once eluded him.
  • Ambition and possibility: Annan’s city-sized magical circuit expands the story’s vision of what Free City might become.
  • Belonging and dignity: Free City’s openness contrasts with exclusive institutions, offering outsiders and “duds” a place to develop.

Ch. 810Section 41: Going Home

Key plot points and events

  • With the McKennan Clan’s next advance delayed until after the rainy season, the Allied Forces turned their attention to the Ratfolk Hive City outside the Northern Great Wall.
  • They attacked through a Portal, expecting a dangerous battle. Instead, the Hive City had already been stripped of its Rat Mother, artisans, and other valuables by the Grayfur Rat Priest, who had fled with them.
  • Annan’s suspicions about a trap proved unnecessary. The remaining Ratfolk were defeated, and Blackwatch destroyed the Hive City with an Earthquake Spell. Annan realized Blackwatch’s slow pace had been partly aimed at collecting rat ears—and the ears had already been taken, largely by him.
  • The immediate fighting ended, and faction leaders began leaving the wall. Annan sent the Fourth Legion back to the Free City while the Hellfire Legion stayed to garrison the wall and train.
  • On his way home, Annan visited Montreal Mountain, where Sailita Dena and Burr were drawing crowds to the Moonlight Opera House. He performed there, signed autographs, and later told the Old Ancestor about the campaign. The next morning, he returned to the Loyal Free City with Lily.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan remains wary of apparent opportunities, worrying that the Hive City mission might be a trap and hoping Jerry has escaped. He also feels guilty about the Ratfolk ears, which have become a running joke and the source of rumors about him.
  • Broken Fang kills the captured Slave Rat Annan gives him, judging the Ratfolk too stupid to be useful—an unexpectedly strict standard from the leader of a growing circle of trusted Ratfolk.
  • Annan works closely with the Allied Forces, Blackwatch, and the Windmill Duchy’s military minister, but recognizes that Blackwatch’s priorities were not quite what they appeared to be.
  • At Montreal Mountain, Annan’s relationship with Sailita Dena and Burr is shaped by their shared success: they draw audiences and boost the opera house’s business, even as they take some attention from him. The Old Ancestor responds to Annan’s account of the campaign with laughter.

Significant themes

  • War’s persistence and its pauses: The grassland briefly flourishes, but the hope of peaceful life is tempered by the knowledge that war will return.
  • Appearances versus reality: The Hive City seems to promise a major battle, while the real danger has already departed; Blackwatch’s apparent slowness also conceals its own motives.
  • Practicality and opportunism: The factions treat the campaign as a chance to collect rat ears, while Annan turns the lull into time for military training and commercial success.
  • Home and changing responsibilities: With the front temporarily quiet, Annan leaves the battlefield to resume his duties as lord, while ensuring his forces remain prepared.

Ch. 811Four-Armed, Maybe Six-Armed Golems

Key plot points and events

  • Fifty-seven fallen soldiers—25 from the Hellfire Legion and 32 from the Fourth Legion—are honored in the Cemetery. Annan insists that Goblins and humans who fought for Free City deserve burial together, overcoming objections to including Goblin remains.
  • As part of the funeral, Necromancers raise pledged warriors as Skeletons. The families grieve, while the Goblins respond with cheerful curiosity; none of the new Skeletons awaken as conscious spirits, leaving Kral the Cemetery’s sole Heroic Spirit.
  • Annan makes Alchemy Studies the focus of Free City’s development. He urges researchers to improve weapons and equipment, and his next decree expands schools and recruits Alchemists and craftspeople.
  • Dunbelly develops a Knight Golem: a slimmer, armored design with swords built into its arms. Annan immediately pushes for greater battlefield efficiency, suggesting additional pairs of arms and a taller frame to kill Ratfolk more effectively.
  • Free City continues to attract people seeking safety, including Osuan, a formerly frightened man who quickly buys a house and applies for residency.
  • The road to Watchhold is completed. Grand Duke Girardi visits, claiming to celebrate but privately seeking refuge from the exposed, dangerous fortress.
  • Annan and Evelyn joke about mocking a Duchy soldier by telling him Free City is withdrawing its troops. They consider giving the joke anonymously to a newspaper, though Girardi is their ally.

Character developments

  • Annan turns wartime losses into a drive for technological progress, focusing on practical military innovations. His battlefield experience shapes his blunt, efficiency-first ideas.
  • Dole appreciates Annan’s defense of the Goblins’ right to be honored alongside human soldiers.
  • Kral remains lonely as the only conscious spirit among the newly raised dead and leaves for the Tavern.
  • Dunbelly works tirelessly on the Knight Golem, while Copperbeard pushes back against Annan’s habit of adding ambitious projects to an already crowded schedule.
  • Girardi appears increasingly exhausted and fearful, underscoring how unsafe he feels at Watchhold.

Significant themes

  • Shared sacrifice and belonging: Annan’s insistence that Goblins “fought for Free City too” challenges prejudice and defines civic loyalty by service rather than species.
  • Death and progress: The funeral makes the cost of war tangible, while Annan’s policies show how loss spurs technological and institutional change.
  • Efficiency versus sentiment: Annan approaches weapons and golems as tools for surviving overwhelming enemy numbers.
  • Safety and refuge: Free City’s appeal contrasts with Watchhold’s vulnerability, drawing both ordinary settlers and powerful visitors.

Character interactions

  • Annan’s intervention silences objections to Goblin burials; he later credits Gar’s confrontation with officials for bringing the issue to his attention.
  • Annan’s suggestions challenge Dunbelly’s design, while Copperbeard reminds him that the city’s workers have limited time.
  • Evelyn joins Annan in joking about the Duchy’s dependence on Free City’s protection, even as they recognize Girardi as an ally.

Ch. 812Strategy 43: Winning Over Montreal Mountain

Annan reviews Free City’s growing but still understaffed administration and decides to strengthen its ties with wealthy Montreal Mountain. Since the city’s existing allies—the Montablinlock Duchy and Stuart Family—are weakened, he considers opening a commercial street near the Moonlight Opera House. Ingrid agrees to seek funding from Idelia and recommends Rona Gillman to manage the venture.
Rona, once associated with the notorious Gillman family, has quietly built a new life in Free City as a street official. Annan invites her to take the Montreal Mountain post, and she agrees on the condition that her disabled “brother” can come too. Annan reassures her and jokes that she could become Free City’s “sales champion.” He hopes the assignment will also let him bring Free City’s Undead residents Sailita Dena and Burr back for a visit.
Meanwhile, the Elven Royal Court continues its slow negotiations over an alliance: it has sent five delegations, but Idelia expects even a preliminary agreement to take until 1003. Annan reflects that the elves’ long lifespans make their pace unsurprising. He also visits the rapidly growing Otherworld Tree, which seems to respond joyfully to his touch, and wonders how the elves would react to learning that Free City has another World Tree. Before he can see Rona off, a parchment heats up with a call from Beludona.
Character developments and interactions: Annan shows increasing concern for Free City’s stability, alliances, and people, while treating the reserved Rona with warmth and trust. Rona’s willingness to accept a major responsibility—while ensuring her brother is included—signals her growing place in the city. Ingrid supports Annan’s plans with practical advice and teasing banter.
Themes: Building a young city requires dependable alliances, capable administrators, and investment in commerce. The chapter also contrasts Annan’s practical urgency with the elves’ expansive sense of time, while hinting at the political and magical significance of the Otherworld Tree.

Ch. 813The Devil Notary Office

Plot points and events

  • Beludona presents Annan with Claire, now an Apprentice Devil, and Mad Dog Duke, whose soul Claire dragged to Hell through a Devil Contract. Duke remains defiant, but Annan threatens him and boasts—partly bluffing—about the strength of his armies.
  • Beludona gives Annan a ruby Magic Ring from her uncle’s treasure vault, filled with wealth and the proceeds from recent Magic Film sales. Annan gratefully transfers his belongings into it.
  • Beludona admits she lacks enough contracts to grow her business. Annan urges her to build a broad reputation by serving ordinary traders and commoners, rather than pursuing only prestigious clients.
  • Annan summons Beludona to the human world and suggests she send contract scrolls instead of making frequent trips to Hell. Beludona proposes bringing her Apprentice Devil assistants—Claire, Lias, and German—to help.
  • Annan names the enterprise the Devil Notary Office and appoints Beludona its director.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan is warm and teasing with Beludona, protective of Claire, and openly hostile toward Mad Dog Duke. He also acts as a practical mentor, encouraging Beludona to expand her business, and quickly turns the idea into a formal organization.
  • Beludona has advanced from Apprentice Devil to devil, but her new rank leaves her dissatisfied with small contracts. Annan’s advice prompts her to consider a broader approach, and she takes initiative by proposing a team of assistants.
  • Claire has become a devil and has helped ensure Mad Dog Duke’s soul faces atonement. Her presence unsettles Duke, whose hatred gives way to more complicated feelings.
  • Mad Dog Duke remains resentful and vows to return, but Annan’s taunts and claims about his military strength silence him.

Significant themes

  • Practical growth and reputation: lasting success comes from serving ordinary clients and earning trust, not merely chasing powerful patrons.
  • Power, loyalty, and accountability: Claire’s contract keeps Duke alive so he can atone, while Annan’s threats show his determination to oppose the Rikaner Kingdom.
  • Cooperation and institution-building: Beludona’s business shifts from a personal operation toward a staffed office, linking Hell’s contracts with the human world.

Ch. 814More Than One Winner

Key plot points and events

  • Annan establishes a free Devil Notary Department in Free City, where residents can formalize trade deals with magically binding Contracts. Olmedo objects, warning that public cooperation with Devils could damage the city’s reputation among powerful factions.
  • Annan agrees that Free City needs better balance among its residents and works with Tadel to publicize the Elven Royal Court’s latest delegation. The news will appear alongside the Devil-office announcement in the Voice of Freedom.
  • Beludona handles the office’s first case: a dispute over a broken flowerpot. Annan deliberately makes the small Contract public as an example, hoping to attract future business. Beludona worries Devils will mock her for handling such a trivial matter.
  • News of the Elven delegation causes a stir across Middle Earth. Other factions suspect the Elves may be preparing for a major threat, and the Empire sends representatives to ask whether Annan needs help.
  • The notary office serves Free City residents while giving Apprentice Devils work; larger deals go to Beludona. Annan benefits from the Contracts and from Beludona’s continued work on his Magic Films.
  • Annan turns his attention back to the Northern Frontier and wonders whether Jerry has escaped the Rat Tide. The chapter ends with Jerry and the Grayfur Rat Priest, Philos, traveling against the tide toward a Hive City. Philos orders Jerry to go there without her, despite his wish to protect her.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan shows confidence in his plans and uses publicity strategically, turning even a minor dispute into a demonstration of the notary service. He also supports Beludona and arranges for Claire to work with her, creating a path toward permanent employment.
  • Olmedo remains cautious about openly associating with Devils, fearing political backlash, but helps Annan consider how the city’s alliances will be perceived.
  • Tadel supports publicizing the Elves’ interest in Free City and suggests that the city’s openness toward other races is part of its appeal.
  • Beludona accepts a modest first case and leaves the office’s routine work to Claire, Lias, and German, while retaining major deals for herself.
  • Jerry and Philos reveal a close, protective bond. Jerry wants to stay by Philos, but she adopts the distant authority of a priest and orders him to leave.

Significant themes

  • Trust versus reputation: Annan’s confidence in Beludona contrasts with the widespread suspicion of Devils and their Contracts.
  • Pragmatic cooperation: Free City seeks alliances across moral and racial lines, treating diversity as an advantage rather than a liability.
  • Publicity and political perception: The same newspaper issue creates international speculation about the Elves while quietly introducing a local institution.
  • Duty and sacrifice: Philos sends Jerry away for his own sake, placing her responsibilities above their personal attachment.

Ch. 815Jerry and Philos

Plot points and events

  • Jerry travels alone through the Plague Land toward the Hive City Cavern, carrying a letter from Philos. His Champion Rat disguise gets him past ordinary Ratfolk, but assassins stop him at the cavern entrance.
  • He tells the Grayfur Rat Priest that Philos sent him to request help. After reading the letter, the priest orders Jerry seized, accusing him of colluding with a human.
  • Jerry fights two Champion Rats but is subdued by the priest’s Fel magic. He is stripped, beaten, and imprisoned.
  • During days of interrogation, Jerry denies the accusation, both to protect himself and because he believes Philos would not betray him. A bard rat in a neighboring cell suggests Philos may be trying to silence him and warns that Ratfolk status makes a relationship between a Grayfur and Brownfur Rat unacceptable.
  • Jerry is unexpectedly taken from the dungeon and brought to Philos. She explains that the Grayfur Rat Council suspected her because they were the only survivors of the destroyed Hive City, so she made Jerry the focus of suspicion while seeking a way to rescue him. She says she must keep her distance but promises to free him. Jerry responds by kissing her hand.

Character development and interactions

  • Jerry shifts from confidence and hopes of returning in glory to physical and emotional despair. Despite the evidence against Philos and the bard rat’s doubts, he remains loyal to her; her explanation restores his trust and affection.
  • Philos appears to have sacrificed Jerry’s standing to protect herself from the Council’s suspicion, while secretly arranging his rescue. Her tenderness is tempered by caution and the need to keep their relationship hidden.
  • The Grayfur Rat Priest treats Jerry as expendable, refusing to hear his defense and using force to enforce the accusation.
  • The bard rat challenges Jerry’s assumptions about Philos and explains the rigid caste system, planting uncertainty without openly mocking him.
  • Jerry’s interactions with the priest and guards are violent and hierarchical; his reunion with Philos is intimate but constrained by their unequal status and political danger.

Significant themes

  • Caste and power: Rank determines who may accuse, punish, or love whom; Jerry’s Brownfur status leaves him vulnerable to Grayfur authority.
  • Trust and deception: Jerry must choose whether to believe Philos when her apparent betrayal seems undeniable.
  • Love under social constraint: Their affection persists, but the hierarchy forces secrecy and distance.
  • Survival and endurance: Jerry withstands combat, torture, and betrayal while clinging to the hope of protecting those he cares about.

Ch. 816Section 47: Battle Cry

Key plot points and events

  • Annan accompanies Martin to buy firewood. The clerk raises the price, but gives them the old rate; Aunt Susan later catches Martin’s suspicious accounting and hits him with her broom.
  • At lunch, the family discusses Martin’s future after he was fired from the tavern for mistakenly serving blood to an Elf. Annan suggests he return to school, but Martin insists he has become a husband—then admits he merely thinks the firewood-shop clerk likes him.
  • In the Dungeon, Bard Rat taunts Jerry about Greyfur Rat and asks whether Philos will take Bard away. Jerry argues that any such decision could have other explanations, but Ratfolk Guards soon arrive and remove Bard Rat. Bard cries out against Greyfur Rat as he is dragged away.
  • Gar, chief of the Forest Wolf Tribe, complains that Annan has banned the tribe’s gruesome battle cry. Annan encourages him to adopt a slogan that reflects their place in the Free City. Gar embraces the idea, and Orc troops begin charging under cries such as “For the Free City!”
  • Trade between the Free City and Watchhold brings merchants and new arrivals into the city. Meanwhile, the Fourth Legion heads north to confront another Rat Tide. Annan remains confident that the awakening Illymoyas will eventually resolve the growing dangers.

Character developments and interactions

  • Martin has grown into a large, bearded young man, but remains comically naïve and irresponsible. Aunt Susan still disciplines him, while Annan tries to steer him toward school.
  • Jerry is unsettled by Bard Rat’s insinuations about Greyfur Rat, but does not readily abandon his trust in Philos. Bard’s removal leaves his suspicions unresolved.
  • Gar has learned enough Common Tongue and spent enough time at school to understand Annan’s civic argument. His tribe’s identity begins shifting from clan loyalty toward loyalty to the Free City.
  • Annan acts as mediator and guide: he supports Martin’s education, manages tensions within the city, and reshapes the Orcs’ battle cry without dismissing their traditions.

Significant themes

  • Belonging and civic identity: The Orcs are encouraged to see themselves as part of the Free City, not only as members of a tribe.
  • Trust and manipulation: Bard Rat tries to make Jerry doubt Greyfur Rat, while Jerry struggles to distinguish genuine evidence from provocation.
  • Everyday comedy amid larger danger: Family squabbles and Martin’s romantic delusion contrast with the looming Rat Tides and political changes.
  • Change and hope: The city grows more diverse and connected as trade expands, while Annan places faith in Illymoyas’s eventual awakening.

Ch. 817Section 48: Oddities Find New Jobs

Key plot points

  • After the Oddities remain in Free City, their Withering Aura causes nearby plants to wilt. Annan moves them from Oddity House to a detached home by the Industrial District, where the effect will be less disruptive.
  • The Skeleton King’s experiments reveal that Oddities consume a substance called Humanity. He first mistakes it for lifespan, but revises his theory after an Oddity devours a Vampire, whose Humanity proves lower than a human’s.
  • He concludes that life has three independent but connected essences: soul, life force, and Humanity. Oddities’ Humanity is damaged and leaks away, so they steal it from others; the escaping “spent embers” create their Withering Aura.
  • Annan suggests publishing the discovery in the Voice of Freedom. The Skeleton King agrees, and Annan anticipates attention for the paper and recognition for the researcher.
  • Annan helps the Oddities find work so they can earn money and live more normally, despite the limits imposed by their Aura.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan grows sympathetic to creatures harmed in the Skeleton King’s experiments and takes practical responsibility for the Oddities’ housing and livelihoods. He also sees a chance to promote the Skeleton King’s research through the newspaper.
  • The Skeleton King develops a new model of life and admits that Humanity remains incompletely understood. He proposes capturing a Sorcerer to study it further, prompting Annan to sympathize with potential test subjects.
  • Annan arranges jobs suited to the Oddities: the Burnt Girl sells plastic flowers in a Gray Robe; the Painting Person continues drawing portraits; the Lanky Dancing Shadow and Humanoid work as character actors; and the Invisible Man, Slug, and Candle perform street magic. Annan refuses the Invisible Man’s wish to visit the orphanage, worried about the children’s health.

Significant themes

  • The limits of knowledge: Humanity was unnoticed until Oddities made its effects visible, and the Skeleton King’s theories change as evidence challenges them.
  • Life’s complexity: Soul, life force, and Humanity are distinct parts of existence, each with different consequences when lost.
  • Compassion and inclusion: Though the Oddities can harm their surroundings, Annan seeks ways for them to live and work among others.
  • Public recognition of discovery: Annan sees publishing as a way to spread new knowledge and secure the Skeleton King’s reputation.

Ch. 818Plotting to Capture a Six-Armed Snake Demon

Key plot points and events

  • Evelyn rejects a routine headline about the Skeleton King discovering a new Source, Humanity, and proposes a more formal one for the Voice of Freedom. Annan leaves the newspaper’s coverage to her.
  • Annan meets Martin walking with a young woman—the former Firewood Shop clerk—and learns they have just decided to marry. He is surprised but welcomes the news, while quietly asking Luoxi to have Dina investigate her background.
  • At the Mushroom House, inventor Dunbelly shows Annan a Knight Golem modified to have six arms. Its unchanged Goblin Golem framework makes it unstable in combat.
  • Dunbelly asks for a six-armed snake demon as a design reference. Annan learns from Claire that these powerful Abyssal demons are dangerous to capture directly.
  • Annan agrees to lure one to Beludona instead, using a Magic Film to attract its interest and a plan to transport it to the mortal world. The effort will take time, so he tells Dunbelly to mass-produce the original two-armed Prototype Knight Golem first, given the looming danger in the North.

Character developments and interactions

  • Evelyn displays confidence and professionalism, defending the Voice of Freedom’s reputation for trustworthy reporting rather than sensationalism.
  • Martin appears more mature as he begins a new life with his prospective wife. Annan is pleased for him but remains protective and wary of possible hidden motives.
  • Dunbelly is making progress on the Golem project but is candid about its flaws and seeks a practical solution.
  • Annan balances ambitious invention with immediate security needs, delegating the demon-catching plan while prioritizing usable defenses.

Significant themes

  • Responsible public communication: The newspaper’s credibility matters to Free City’s standing.
  • Trust and protection: Annan supports Martin’s relationship while recognizing that affection and political scheming can be difficult to distinguish.
  • Pragmatism under pressure: Rather than delay production for a better design, Annan chooses to build the workable prototype first.
  • Cooperation across danger: The plan to obtain a demon relies on clever negotiation and transport rather than direct confrontation.

Ch. 819Changes

Key plot points and events

  • In Hell, Beludona becomes famous for Five Hundred Years of Terror and claims she made a deal with Dracula. Technically, she dealt with Annan, who played Dracula. Some Devils try to buy Dracula’s soul, but Beludona has no soul to sell.
  • Beludona’s younger sister, Brudona, resents her success. Beludona’s uncle worries that her focus on Magic Films is risky, but Beludona believes her partnership with Annan rests on something Devils lack: trust. She considers expanding distribution by acquiring a Six-Armed Snake Demon, though she has no clear way to do so.
  • Annan receives news that the Tartun Empire is assembling a second Allied Force. Olmedo thinks the order is meant to pressure nobles into joining the war; a Ratfolk invasion is unlikely before the autumn.
  • Annan checks on Martin and discovers that his cousin is now an adult, has become close to Lucy, and is preparing to marry her. Lucy rescued a baby on her way to Free City; the child is not theirs.
  • The wedding will be a small family meal. Annan promises to bring his sisters and invites Lucy to call him “cousin.”
  • Martin’s impending marriage makes Annan reflect on time and relationships. He asks those around him whether they are in love: Abby shyly says she loves him, Leila says she is devoted to the ocean, and Idelia jokes that no one would want someone unable to stand. Olmedo reveals that he is “married” to his career.

Character developments and interactions

  • Beludona grows more ambitious and confident, pursuing Magic Films as a business while trying to reassure her uncle. Her success deepens the rivalry with Brudona.
  • Annan balances concern about the growing war with personal reflection after learning Martin is settling down. His questions about love reveal his curiosity—and perhaps unease—about how quickly life is changing.
  • Martin appears more mature and independent, while Lucy earns Aunt Susan’s approval through her kindness and capability. Their relationship is accepted by the family.
  • Abby openly reveals romantic feelings for Annan; Olmedo deflects the subject with a joke about marrying his work.

Significant themes

  • Trust versus deception: Beludona’s partnership with Annan depends on trust, an unusual basis for Devils accustomed to deals and manipulation.
  • Ambition and risk: Beludona’s film enterprise offers opportunity but worries her uncle, while Annan faces a widening war.
  • Time and change: Martin’s adulthood and impending marriage prompt Annan to notice how quickly people’s lives move forward.
  • Love and commitment: The chapter contrasts romantic affection, family approval, personal devotion, and Olmedo’s humorous commitment to his career.

Ch. 820Humanity and the North

Key plot points

  • Annan asks Olmedo to rest, but she reveals she has a key to his room and will come find him if needed. His attempt to handle official paperwork quickly wears him out.
  • Instead, Annan helps publicize the Skeleton King’s discovery of Humanity, a previously unknown fundamental force. Voice of Freedom publishes the research, prompting debate among mages: some doubt Humanity exists, while others suspect it may belong to another world.
  • The Skeleton King announces a public experiment in the Land of the Dead, to be recorded and published. Interest drives Voice of Freedom’s sales beyond its entire print run, aided by bulk orders from Magic Academies.
  • Seeing the opportunity, Annan persuades Dean Breichim to launch a Solz Magic Academy newspaper. They consider recruiting students Sienna and Su Ni Prye.
  • The emperor orders Allied Forces at the Northern Great Wall to advance and establish positions farther north. Annan refuses to send his cavalry into danger without understanding why.
  • An Imperial official explains that the Empire intends to build a second defensive line, but admits the deeper motive: after the Ratfolk vanguard’s defeat, the Empire fears its soldiers have become overconfident and wants to expose them to danger again.

Character developments and interactions

  • Annan shows limited patience for administrative work but strong instincts for communication and strategy: he recognizes the newspaper’s educational and commercial potential. He also acts as a responsible leader, insisting that his troops’ loyalty obliges him to protect them.
  • Olmedo is revealed to be unusually devoted to Free City—and unexpectedly familiar with Annan’s private arrangements.
  • Dean Breichim quickly recognizes the value of Annan’s proposal and agrees to pursue it.
  • The imperial official begins cold and confrontational but softens when Annan insists on hearing the truth as Free City’s lord. Their exchange exposes the Empire’s real motives.
  • Annan’s thoughts turn to his former academy classmates, setting up a possible reunion with Sienna and Su Ni Prye.

Significant themes

  • Evidence and skepticism: Mages debate Humanity but demand direct observation and experiment before accepting it.
  • The power of information: A scientific controversy becomes a publishing sensation and creates opportunities for education and influence.
  • Leadership and responsibility: Annan rejects obedience for its own sake, prioritizing the soldiers who trust him.
  • Fear as political control: The Empire appears willing to endanger its forces to maintain discipline, echoing the idea that it is meant to be feared rather than loved.
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