End-of-volume thoughts
Demigod, as important nodes among Beyonder, it's reasonable to use them at the end of the volume, right? (Nods)
So far, I've received—well, I haven't counted—many comments pointing out that the plot is pacing too fast, apparently because Neph revealed information too quickly, and I'm constantly skipping scenes?
Opinions vary on the matter of leaking information. At least in my view, although there seems to be a lot of information, it doesn't really affect the plot. Instead, her actions have a greater impact.
As for the issue of skipping plot points—I'm used to narrating from the character's perspective. As a transmigrator who can memorize the original plot, Neph naturally lacks patience for anything repetitive. I won't describe it because she doesn't pay attention. When those repetitive plots unfold, she only has one thought in her mind, "Skip it quickly."
It's quite obvious that this was alleviated in Sequence 5. In fact, when I was writing the outline, I put the "Memory Collector" Sequence here to solve this problem. After all, some psychological issues are better resolved before reaching Demigod status (shakes head).
Another reason is that Demigod are at a level where they are truly capable of doing something. If she always sees herself as an Outsider, she won't have any feelings for this era—I want to clarify first that I am not a witness, and Neph is not interested in certain things either. At most, she can only promote some things within the scope of her own faith. As for more—"
War is the Red Priest's business. The Red Priest in Cuttlefish's story wasn't written well. Anyone who wants to read it can write it themselves.
Besides Neph's mental state, there's another crucial reason why the progress was too fast: I left many things for after the Demigod. After all, no matter what, it's quite awkward for a Child of God not even Demigod. And with the combination of the Outer Deity Pathway, the Evil God Forsaken Land of the Gods, what if Bao Si is exposed? Once we reach Demigod, at least we can start our life on the run!
Is it true (is it true (like that) mixed up to not be, should it be, just kidding, cough
Next, I looked at my lower grade---the first volume of the text, the volume of the title of the book, um.
"You will be born of children, your flesh and blood will be shed, your memories abandoned, and you will be cast aside from worldly things."
(I really like the real soldiers, I'm very optimistic about them)