It's over.
When I finished typing the last word of this book at night, I let out a long sigh of relief. After more than two years of writing, even when traveling or returning to my hometown, I had to bring my computer with me. Except when I had to ask for leave due to mundane affairs, I almost never stopped working day after day. While I enjoyed the joy of putting my ideas into practice with words, I also felt exhausted.
Therefore, when I finished writing it at night, I felt so relaxed that it was beyond words, as if a heavy burden had been lifted off me, and I was looking forward to tomorrow.
But when I really woke up, I was a little worried. Will the ending be not well written? Will it live up to the hard work of the past two years and live up to the expectations of the readers, brothers and sisters?
This feeling suddenly woke me up, but I didn't dare to read the comments. Instead, I read the last chapter again...
Well, the writing is a bit rough.
But it doesn't matter, yesterday I basically wrote out what I wanted.
Digging holes, filling holes, and some holes are not explained clearly because it is not suitable for anyone in this scenario to say it. Otherwise, it will be like a rigid standard answer at the end of the homework book.
But in fact, I have almost hinted at the answers to every pitfall in the book. Even if I don't state them all explicitly, anyone who is interested can basically guess them. This is obviously much more interesting than me throwing out all the answers.
This is also my greatest pleasure in writing this book - let's play hide and seek together!
Okay, now that I have finished talking about my feelings about the ending, I will also summarize my feelings about the last volume of this book as usual.
I said at the beginning of this volume that I wanted to pay tribute to a book I loved, but unfortunately the final effect was far from what I had envisioned at the beginning.
For example, the twenty or thirty chapters at the beginning of wandering the world sea and entering the land of immortality are all foreshadowing, creating an atmosphere of confusion, confusion, and approaching terror. The specific effect achieved, I think it can be rated six or seven out of ten, not particularly satisfactory, but there is no doubt that this writing method also makes the plot advance extremely slowly.
Even though I tried hard to improve the reading experience and added some suspenseful twists and turns, the slow progress of the entire plot still led to the loss of some readers.
It also makes the reading experience in that part not that good.
This is also the same problem I encountered after several volumes of this book, that is, there was insufficient preparation for the next plot in the previous plot, so that at the beginning of the new volume, the clues and plot lines were a bit thin and unable to support enough content.
But in fact, at the beginning, I thought about enriching the content by digging into the plots of the supporting characters, such as adding the plot of Zhao Feng and others' cultivation, or writing some familiar mythological stories to spice up the boring content of this part.
However, after these ideas appeared in the article, they soon encountered opposition from some readers, who felt that they were too weak to implement. I thought about it and finally chose to give up.
So this is the reason why the True Warrior line started but ended, but it was also the reason why I didn't think well at the beginning.
Except for the previous part, the content of the entire volume is basically based on my outline. However, during the writing process, I constantly revised the specific details of the outline, so that by the end of the revision, the final result has actually deviated greatly from the initial expectations, but this result is actually more positive in my opinion.
And since this book has reached the last volume, the little bastard has also gone through dormancy, development, growth, and maturity in the previous volumes... He has become a qualified protagonist, and I can finally let go and show the protagonist's own charm. In my opinion, after polishing in the previous volumes, there are sufficient reasons and logical support for Wang Ba to be able to show such charm.
And it shows such charm that it can be accepted and loved by readers, because both I and the readers can clearly feel the growth of Wang Ba after passing the previous volumes.
From cautious to calm and composed; from ignorant to thoughtful; from insignificant to powerful...
Wang Ba is a living person, a person who comes alive little by little under the eyes of readers. This is the real main line of this book.
So when I was writing this volume, except for the final finishing stage, I actually had a great time writing it. I believe that most readers should also be able to read it. It may not be because of how good my skills are, but just the small improvement of this volume can be superimposed on the previous volumes. In addition, I like the digging and filling of holes the most. When the answer to the mystery is revealed, I believe there will be many readers who persist and feel another kind of comfort.
Somewhat complacently, I would give myself an eight out of ten points for this volume.
Ahem, we got off track.
Then again, this volume actually has some other shortcomings. For example, the level of practice is still not clear enough, which is what people often say is that the combat power is chaotic, or the combat power has collapsed. Although for me, I actually prefer this kind of practice system that is not clearly priced, but my personal preference does not fully represent the readers' preferences. Especially since I borrowed the practice system of the Mortal stream, I naturally need to respect an important feature of this system, which is the strong connection between levels and resources.
But once this book really strongly links resources and levels, the underlying logic of this book will actually cease to exist.
In addition, there are some other shortcomings, but I personally feel that the impact on the overall effect of the volume is not too great. If any readers want to discuss, you can also tell me your thoughts.
After finishing this last volume, let's summarize the entire book.
The context of the whole book is actually very clear. According to my current introduction, it goes from being weak and dormant to growing and growing, and then transforming into a dragon and taking flight.
But in the first and second volumes, I made a lot of mistakes that I shouldn't have made. One was that I misjudged the endurance of many readers today; the other was that I focused too much on the rendering of the atmosphere, which led to the slow progress of the plot; the third was that in the second volume, in order to achieve the preset The goal led to a certain degree of logical confusion; the fourth was too much emphasis on the general environment and neglecting to highlight the protagonist; the fifth was the arrogance of a newcomer, not wanting to write routines, and giving up a lot of fun points. In the end, after exhausting all his efforts, he wrote a worse routine...
Many problems have led to many poisonous points in the content and have discouraged many readers.
You must learn lessons from this book.
Please forgive me for thinking so much. It is the first time I have finished writing my closing remarks, but I still feel a little bit reluctant to give up.
I saw someone asking why they didn't continue writing The Second World Sea. Is it because of poor grades or some other reason?
In fact, it has nothing to do with grades. I vaguely remember that when this book first came on the shelves, the first order was about seven or eight hundred. (Thanks to Penglai for salvage, I was killed one after another when I first submitted the manuscript. If he hadn't asked me to publish the book, I might not have written the book.)
Two years and one month, now the average booking is almost 7,000.
The income is not very high, but it is actually quite stable. Needless to say, this is also an important reason why I persist.
So I am really grateful to my parents who provide me with food and clothing, thank you!
The first book is written like this. No matter how many shortcomings I have summarized, I am actually very satisfied with it.
I really want to write it, and I think I can write something different about the second sea.
But, it's not necessary.
The story I want to tell has been told, and if I write it down, it will be another story. It is better to start over and travel lightly. I also have many other stories I want to tell you.
However, the new story may not be as complicated and heavy as this one, but should be as relaxed and enjoyable as possible.
Well, after seeing you off for a long journey, we must say goodbye eventually. The story I know about Wang Ba ends here. Of course, his journey is far from over.
Finally, and most importantly, thank you for your company and your support. I have been reading your comments, and I also saw many familiar faces in the comment area. Thank you, I love you! (By the way, some brothers have too many programs. When a brother named Jia Ten Five voted for me, I felt that my cerebellum shrank all of a sudden)
Thousands of words, but ultimately nothing.
Dear gentlemen, see you in the next book!