Fierce! After Going Unhinged, I Team Up with a Tyrant to Whip a Dating Show into Shape
Chapter 140

Even if I'm written dead, I won't love anyone else

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Today's appointment ends at 6 PM.

Everyone returned to the recording studio to announce the results.

Yu Liqi was completely invisible during the morning's date schedule.

However, she participated in an escape room activity with her teammates in the afternoon.

In the dim light, she let herself go.

Clad in a blood-stained white sheet, with distorted makeup, holding a swaying IV stand in one hand and a deformed specimen preserved in formalin in the other... more frightening than an NPC.

It also received a decent number of revisions.

Fang Nuonuo and Gu Yichen's group didn't achieve any results outdoors.

But in the end, the two also collected a lot of information through horror movies.

Gu Yichen immediately used all of it to exchange for living supplies.

Fang Nuonuo said she needed to consider what to change it to.

Duan Xuanyu contributed the most times.

Moreover, during that short time inside the camera, his heart was pounding so hard it almost broke his watch.

It's puzzling...

In total, excluding the guests who exchanged living supplies, the remaining guests made nearly four hundred word changes.

Written primarily by Cheng Qin, who meticulously revised the ending with minimal words.

But Su Mian thought that Fang Nuonuo hadn't mentioned exchanging supplies yet, and she felt that Fang Nuonuo was holding back some big move.

Duan Hongxu is also an uncontrollable factor.

He traded some supplies, and still has nine unused items left.

So Su Mian secretly discussed it with Cheng Qin.

When making changes, take precautions and prepare accordingly.

Before making the revisions, Cheng Qin collected everyone's opinions.

Only Duan Hongxu adopted an indifferent attitude, saying "Whatever."

Everyone else made demands regarding their own fate.

Fang Nuonuo also mentioned, "I'd like a more empowering female lead ending."

Cheng Qin thought for a moment and said, "You were originally a concubine left behind by the deposed emperor, and you're considered a dowager concubine in the palace. How about we arrange for you to leave the palace and establish a charity institution to help homeless orphans?"

Fang Nuonuo was silent for a while, then nodded without saying anything.

Cheng Qin took it as a yes.

The ending was quickly revised.

It takes the initial ending as a foundation and elevates it further.

Unlike the first edition, which required a perfect love story where nothing else mattered.

Unlike the second edition, where everyone dies so casually.

After the rebellion was quelled, everyone found their own path in life.

The emperor and empress worked hand in hand, diligently governing for the people and bringing blessings to all.

The Empress abolished many harsh palace rules and encouraged palace maids and the deposed emperor's concubines to cultivate their character, learn skills, and leave the palace to make a living, so that they would not regard men as their only destination in life.

The loyal female official did not leave her either.

She helped the Empress establish a girls' school outside the palace, teaching impoverished and destitute women skills to make a living and supporting their families.

The deposed emperor's henchmen established a new Imperial City Guard to eliminate evil and maintain order.

The imperial physician resigned from his position in the palace to travel the world and see more difficult and complicated diseases.

The deposed emperor became a monk.

His last line was. "If I cannot save myself, how can I save all other beings? The cycle of cause and effect dictates everyone's fate."

The audience saw the revised script immediately.

[Ahhh, I love this ending! It doesn't just focus on romance; everyone has their own special aura!]

[This version of the deposed emperor's ending is also very sophisticated, elevating the story to a whole new level! Because he lost the throne in the script, he was arguably the only loser, and in the end, he became a monk, which can be seen as a form of reconciliation with himself!]

[My ideals may flicker, but my resolve remains unwavering!]

Director Dai Qing was also very satisfied with the ending.

Each character comes to life, becoming more vivid and relatable.

Only Duan Hongxu couldn't laugh.

Although he doesn't care much about the show's output, he has no intention of elevating it in that direction either!

"So only the world where I, the deposed emperor, am injured has achieved this, huh! Just say you're targeting me!"

Su Mian: "Don't you still have some attempts left? If you're not satisfied, change it yourself."

Duan Hongxu wanted to revise it himself.

But with just nine characters, there's not much that can be changed.

After racking his brains for a while, he had a flash of inspiration!

Delete the part about becoming a monk.

Change it to "After abdicating, he ascended to become an immortal."

Haha, the other guests are just pursuing their dreams on Earth, while he's already in the atmosphere!

Su Mian and Cheng Qin exchanged a glance, then secretly gave each other a high five under the table.

That's right, they did this on purpose because they were worried he would use those nine chances to make changes.

You don't need to worry anymore.

"Then this is the final draft." Cheng Qin saved the document.

At this moment, Fang Nuonuo suddenly stood up and said, "I'm also a little dissatisfied; I want to revise it too."

[This is unbelievable! You nodded when I asked you just now, but now they've already revised it and they want more revisions!]

[So what? The goddess has high standards for her work! She's serious and responsible!]

[What's there to complain about? Can't I even change it if I'm not satisfied?]

[They don't say anything when they're making changes, and then they modify other people's work afterward! I hope I never encounter such a team member in collaborative projects...]

Fang Nuonuo had anticipated that she would be scolded now.

But so what?

Being criticized is only temporary.

Works of art are what last forever.

In this episode, she is the Dowager Consort.

She altered the dialogue of a key character in a major scene.

They changed the words of concern the emperor said to the empress to words he was saying to her.

With just a slight alteration, the meaning completely changes: the emperor's true love is her, but he chose the empress because he couldn't have her. The Imperial Guard, the imperial physicians, and the late emperor all silently protect her, but she doesn't want any of them and becomes the only queen.

Dai Qing silently shook her head, sigh... it's been changed to a Mary Sue story.

Her fans flooded the screen with praise:

[Ahhh, this is a true lone wolf heroine! She doesn't want a single man!]

[As expected of a goddess! Her mindset and perspective are definitely superior to others!]

[This is too much! They've broken up our couple and even portrayed the emperor as loving her. We, the Emperor-Empress CP fans, feel really disgusted!]

[Because our goddess is a leading lady! Unlike you guys who are obsessed with romantic pairings!]

[She has no personal charisma or ability whatsoever, yet she rises to the pinnacle of power simply because a man loves her—is that what a "strong female lead" is? Forgive me for not understanding.]

[On the contrary, I think the empress who improves people's livelihood is a great female lead, the female official who leaves the palace to teach is a great female lead, and the female imperial guard who protects the peace of her region is a great female lead. She is not!]

After reading Fang Nuonuo's revised plot, Su Mian thought of the plot of the post " Brutally Tormenting the Gold Digger ".

In the end, all the male guests fell in love with her, including CEO Lu Zhou, who was very fond of her, but she didn't want any of them; her heart was only set on her career.

I seriously suspect she wrote it.

Duan Xuanyu suddenly spoke up, "Can you change my life to death? I'd rather die than love anyone else!"

If he were emperor in ancient times, he would have planned to have only Su Mian as his empress and no one else.

He only ever loved Su Mian, yet here it's written that he loved someone else.

nausea!

[Haha, Tyrant Bro, I approve of your male virtues!]

[ Tyrant Bro may be foolish, but he's as loyal as a dog.]

[Nationwide promotion! Nationwide promotion!]

[That's too much! Didn't they consider how embarrassing it would be for the female guest? It's so disrespectful!]

[Shut up! Has your goddess ever considered that it's disrespectful to put all the spotlight on her alone!]

Fang Nuonuo, however, was not angry at all.

He looked somewhat apologetic. "I'm sorry, I've used up all my chances to revise it, and I can't revise it anymore. But I believe Teacher Duan isn't the kind of person who can't take a joke."

So, that's the ending!

Unexpectedly, at this moment, Su Mian stood up.

"Wait, we still have five chances to change the text." Su Mian looked at Fang Nuonuo and smiled provocatively, "These were specially reserved for you."

Fang Nuonuo's heart skipped a beat at first, but she quickly regained her composure.

Just five words.

Deleting a word also counts as a modification.

Therefore, Su Mian did not have enough words to delete the ones she had just added.

With just five words, she absolutely cannot reverse the outcome.

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