A Last-Minute Day Off, Mea Culpa, Mea Culpa

Today, Lao Bai got up and checked everyone's comments. He found that many friends said the power levels were inconsistent and the plot was abrupt. He then spent the whole morning writing and produced 5,000 words.

Before posting, I read through the previous chapters again and found quite a few problems. Some were indeed disjointed in design, some were vague, and some, while others seemed logically sound to me, were not.

(For example, Yuan Jin's combat strength. I think I briefly described it when I was fighting for the Shan Household's inheritance. After he reached the Foundation Establishment, his combat strength was outstanding among early-stage cultivators. It shouldn't be far-fetched that he could kill a seriously injured Yin Wind Valley disciple and slightly surpass Tie Xishui, right? Although the latter reached the Foundation Establishment more than ten years earlier, his personal circumstances were different.)

I'm not sure if there's really a problem with my writing, so please allow me one more night to reflect and revise it (my abilities are limited, and perhaps you'll still think it's not good when I post it tomorrow, but I think what I'm doing is somewhat meaningful).

Perhaps it will be published very early tomorrow, or perhaps these 5,000 words won't even be needed, and I'll still have to update very late tomorrow. But I hope that when it's published, it will satisfy as many readers as possible, and that everyone will feel that their subscription money was well spent.

Anyway, sorry, but I still wish everyone a happy Chinese New Year. Thank you again for your support of Lao Bai (Lao Bai) Lao Bai, I'll think about how to improve my typing speed and update more often.