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It's a novel idea and good story and implementation can be improved and expand some chapters on rest of the original characters as well (story from there perspective) and the protagonist feels lonely , he doesn't even have friends.. ,
Nice but ending feels a little rushed
Stories idea was good but near it's end it's a mess the character of protagonist and rest also makes a huge difference form the start and then it ends suddenly when it had a lot of potential as per it's name.
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