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ZeypherIN
48 · VeteranGreat story. I loved the fact the MC frees the Ninja world from Indra Asura nonsense and charts a path towards future.
Started well but the author kept on nerfing the MC. He had all qualifications to be a top end taijutsu user and killing with a few moves but author keeps trying to turn him itno ninjutsu user and then adds way too many bloodline limits which also feel useless. Just wood release with top tier taijutsu would have been more than enough to deal with anything.
Not bad and a decent idea. last third feels very rushed. Problem is that it has 3 power systems and all feel half done at best.
Started well the kinda drifted off midway is around the point I dropped it. This author does have some good ideas but they tend to drag a bit in the middle.