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ZeypherIN
48 · VeteranPretty good read. Not a fan of the last 150 chapters.
Pretty decent. Can drag a bit here and there but it feels consistent. I love the fact the MC did not have twin martial souls. Most of DD2 ff's try to go Yuhao meta one way or the other which is annoying. The MC Chen Junting leverages his strength in a believable way for the future. The biggest issue is that the MC does not delegate so a lot of other side characters of barely used. The war arc could have been done much better if he actually delegated stuff to his allies and what not. His faction forces, allies are barely used to make a difference if he is not involved. They are best are more like window dressing ie there but pointless.
A better DD2 fic is angels glory and MC is also part of nine treasures. Atleast his allies there are useful.
Its good but a lot of chapters are completely wrong IE a different novel all together. Chapter 242 and 243, 246 onwards all are missing or completely wrong. for example. There are quite a few chapters like this throughout.
Started well but going downhill rapidly from chapter 200 onwards. So dropped it at 350 as was not a fan of its direction. Was good earlier when it focused on magic n stuff.