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Large parts of many chapters seem to be missing. The story skips from one beat to another with a large gap in between.
It's generally good for a Soul Land fic, but it shares the same problem where the MC only cares about girls, even when it makes no sense given his own characterization and the benefits he could get. They pretend otherwise with a few justifications here and there, but none of the justifications make sense on a closer look.
Take Tang San. If this was like those other fics which flanderized or demonized Tang San, it would make perfect sense not to take him. But the Tang San here showed integrity and good character, so it makes no sense, especially since he's a guaranteed student. Afraid of getting involved with the stronger factions or the gods? Such justifications stopped working when he broke the level limit. It barely worked before, given it honestly comes off as unfounded paranoia from those conspiracy theory fics.
The real reason is that they want to have a harem fic about collecting girls while pretending it's not, which just makes it awkward.