1. The story was too long. I wanted to write too many things, which made the structure somewhat bloated and lacking coherence from beginning to end.
2. Some parts of the plot were not exciting enough. With the long-term updates draining my inspiration, some scenes ended up a little bland, and I was not quite satisfied with them.
3. I did not have a firm enough grasp of the settings. There were still some original work settings I did not understand very well. I hope you readers can help as well—if you spot any problems, please point them out. Of course, please do not scold me. After all, I cannot remember everything, and there will always be omissions.
Prospects for the next volume:
1. A young man arrives at the Church of Evernight. 2. Kill Ince. 3. Luther's Honorific Name and the spread of faith in the gods. 4.