When You Were Supposed to Write Healing, You Wrote a Breakdown Instead?
Chapter 52

A Floor Covered in White Paper? More Like a Mass of Bones

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Compared to Kevin when he had previously watched Mei die... her mental state was no better.

Although she did not appear in this part of the story, so logically, she should not have been able to see this scene.

But... she understood Elysia far too well, and had underestimated her own mind.

Her rich imagination meant that, even though she had not experienced the scene firsthand,

she imagined Elysia collapsing into her arms, her body gradually breaking down into fragments until she could no longer touch Elysia...

What was the point of having such a good imagination?

That scene dealt no small blow to the leader of Elysia's fans.

Even knowing it was fake, she fell silent, utterly unable to face what Su Nian had written again.

Even she had been emotionally devastated by it.

Su Nian's buildup had not been in vain.

Even he had emotionally devastated himself by revisiting this part of the plot. How could he possibly spare anyone else?

By now, Su Nian had achieved some initial success.

Otto had only one assessment of this part of the story.

"I can't see through it."

In his view, Su Nian would never kill off Elysia for no reason. That was always the easiest way to stir up controversy.

The comments were filled with righteous outrage, and some people had begun kindly attacking Su Nian's conscience.

Creators of tragic works

often drew the readers' "firepower," born from negative emotions, by making them suffer.

Like the Evil Sword Immortal that fed on resentment.

But Su Nian was somewhat different from them.

When they killed off characters, it was usually at a critical juncture, in service of the plot.

Su Nian killing Elysia also seemed intended to advance the plot, yet Otto could not see through it.

After all, weren't

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